Masha Allah u wrote it, good.

bismillah
asalaamu alaykum

mashaAllah sister! i'll be sure to add your name as the author inshaAllah. And great poem mashaAllah! so talented!

ma'asalaama

Waalaikumusalaam....

Jazakallah. Actually someone sent to me few phrases, n i finished it .
..It was few years ago when some irani neighbours of mine alwaz made silly joke of my hijab n each time they saw me at the mall,they asked me to take off my hijab n wear something modern n updated.N people laughed at those silly joke.
Lahaulawalaa Quawata Illa Billah.

aw bless sis don't worry about you should be proud and sis it's so good

take care

Jazakallah wakhairan..:sister:

Hav anyone heard this Nasheed? - The VeiL - by Dawud Ali Wharnsby.

The Veil
They say, "Oh, poor girl, you're so beautiful you know
It's a shame that you cover up your beauty so."
She just smiles and graciously responds reassuringly,
"This beauty that I have is just one simple part of me.
This body that I have, no stranger has the right to see.
These long clothes, this shawl I wear, ensure my modesty.
Faith is more essential than fashion, wouldn't you agree?"

This hijab,
This mark of piety,
Is an act of faith, a symbol,
For all the world to see.
A simple cloth, to protect her dignity.
So lift the veil from your heart to see the heart of purity.

They tell her, "Girl, don't you know this is the West and you are free?
You don't need to be oppressed, ashamed of your femininity."
She just shakes her head and she speaks so assuredly,
"See the bill-boards and the magazines that line the check-out isles,
with their phony painted faces and their air-brushed smiles?
Well their sheer clothes and low cut gowns they are really not for me.
You call it freedom, I call it anarchy."

This hijab,
This mark of piety,
Is an act of faith, a symbol,
For all the world to see.
A simple cloth, to protect her dignity.
So lift the veil from your heart to see the heart of purity.
Lift the veil from your heart and seek the heart of purity

manshallah, nice poem sis

Mashallah, Beautiful, poem.