aint u going to write a continuation??

No.... it's a cliff hanger.

cliff hangers have something to follow them with

Er... well i'm gonna end it like that because I don't know how prison is like so i can't describe it.
Although i've heard quite a bit about what goes on there.

im sure u can google "what is prison like" n also there are loads of sites like cage prisoners that say what torture n everything they went through whilst in these prisons. defo wud recommend that site altho it is very upsetting to read.

awww...its so beautiful mashallah !!..Thankz 4 sharing it wid us

Mash'Allah I just read this and your other one, the only reading I usually do is quran and hadith but this was an exception well done.

JazakAllah for the suggestions and comments. May Allah reward you all.

Great story. You have serious talent. And oh, those policemen in the story.. i would have beaten them up if i were there. Grrrrr...

I am waiting for part 2 inshaAllah. and hopefully it must have a happy ending .

Part 2.... errr.... inshaAllah!
JazakAllah for the positive comments.

Yeah! *Patiently waiting for part 2*

Why do I have to make a part 2?! *cries*

Coz you shud! *Still waiting patiently*

You shud coz u r too gud @ da stories.

I made this when i was 14 i think. Quite a long time ago. Lol my friend edited it so that's where the arabic and the 'saudi ocupied arabia' came from. She's saudi and she doesn't like the government.