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Default Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-13-2006
Tuhan
Telah ditakdirkan hari itu
Aku ke kota solat Jumaat di rumah-Mu
Tenang terbentang wadah ibadat
Di kananku seorang buta yang celik
Di kiriku seorang buta yang cerdik
Di tengahnya aku yang keliru dan kelabu
Tentang terangnya mata hatimu
Tentang cahaya anugerah Ilahi
Kekuranganmu itu seribu kelebihan
Saf insaf menghampar iktibar
Tuhan Maha Melihat dan Maha Mengetahui
Bahawa insan mulia paling terpuji
Di sisi-Mu, paling banyak beriman
Bukan cantik pada indera kesempurnaan.

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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-13-2006
This is urdu right?
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-13-2006
No, Brother Iqram.
I use Malay language (bahasa Melayu).
Thank you.
Have a nice day.
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-22-2006
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Tuhan
Telah ditakdirkan hari itu
Aku ke kota solat Jumaat di rumah-Mu
Tenang terbentang wadah ibadat
Di kananku seorang buta yang celik
Di kiriku seorang buta yang cerdik
Di tengahnya aku yang keliru dan kelabu
Tentang terangnya mata hatimu
Tentang cahaya anugerah Ilahi
Kekuranganmu itu seribu kelebihan
Saf insaf menghampar iktibar
Tuhan Maha Melihat dan Maha Mengetahui
Bahawa insan mulia paling terpuji
Di sisi-Mu, paling banyak beriman
Bukan cantik pada indera kesempurnaan.

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Sajak yang bagus. Terima Kasih.
What a good poem. Thank you

Kamu patut terjemahkan dalam Bahasa Inggeris untuk kefahaman semua.
You should translate it into English for others to understand it
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-22-2006
nm kenapa tak tolong terjermahkan...
north malaysian y not u translate it...

kita pandai bahasa pasar jer...
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-22-2006
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nm kenapa tak tolong terjermahkan...
north malaysian y not u translate it...

kita pandai bahasa pasar jer...
Saya pun tak pandai terjemah, tapi saya akan cuba.
I'm not good in translating either, but I'll try

POEM IN THE PRAYER LINE OF REPENTANCE

God
It was destined on that day
I went to a city of Friday Prayer in Your House
Calmly spreading the words of prayer
On my right, a blindman who could 'see'
On my left, a blindman who could 'think'
On the centre, it's me, confused and 'grey' (blurred)
Regarding to how shining is your heart's eye
Regarding to the light awarded by my Lord
Your disability is a thousand capabilities
The prayer line of repentance spreading the lessons
God the All-Seeing and All-Knowing
That an honoured man who is the most praiseful
Beside You, the most faithful
Not the beauty according to the perfect senses


ORIGINALLY BY - AMI MASRA

Forgive me for my bad translation.
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-22-2006
i think that is a one good translation...

i'll clap for both of you...(it is a very good poem)
   
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i think that is a one good translation...

i'll clap for both of you...(it is a very good poem)
Apa yang kamu faham mengenai sajak tersebut?
What can u understand from that poem?
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-22-2006
minta maaf lambat jawab.
sorry... late reply...

kita rasa...
i think...

perasaan seseorang apabila dia pergi solat jumaat
(feelings of one when he goes for friday prayers)

ramai-ramai berhimpun tak kira keimanan seseorang
(everyone gather regardless their iman and knowledge)

dan mengenai khutbah yang didengar penuh dengan pengajaran dan keinsafan
(hearing the lectures with feelings of repentance)


ada banyak lagi... tapi buat setakat ni jerlah
(only this much i can translate for now)

what do u think?
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 05-22-2006
Orang buta di kiri dan kanan, tapi 'celik' dan 'cerdik'
Blindman on the left and right, but 'could see' and 'genius'

Hmmmmm..... dia rasa dia paling kurang keimanan dalam jemaah tersebut?
Hmmmmm..... might be he thinks that he the least faith of the congregation
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 07-28-2006
north malaysia and syilla,
thank you for your attention.

-sebenarnya pada saya penyajak merendah diri kerana ilmunya dianggap masih kurang walaupun indera zahirnya sempurna.

-bukankah manusia dinilai dari sudut ketaqwaannya?

-anda berdua lebih baik daripada saya................
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 07-29-2006
Sajaknya bagus sekali. Ada lagi? Saya suka sajak
   
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Default Re: Sajak Dalam Saf Insaf - 08-04-2006
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Sajaknya bagus sekali. Ada lagi? Saya suka sajak
Kamu boleh bagi sajak? Dalam Bahasa Indonesia pun tidak mengapa, kami faham!!!

Can u give a poem? It's ok even in Indonesian Language, we could understand it!!!
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