Continue the Islamic Rhyme - Page 4

Mr. Baldy · **Re: rhymes -** 12-12-2006

i was weaned on them hip hop streets,
with them hip hop beats,
now, hip hop meets islam,
greets it with open arms,
this is my way of dawah,
some say its a waste of time,
when they see me spit a rhyme,
say my dawah aint worth a dime

why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it?

IbnAbdulHakim · **Re: rhymes -** 12-12-2006

i only rhyme hoping to wake
those who treat islam like its fake
for gods sake
who gives much more then he takes
so stay strong and dont let yourself break

**Al Habeshi** · 12:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim

i only rhyme hoping to wake
those who treat islam like its fake
for gods sake
who gives much more then he takes
so stay strong and dont let yourself break

But brake from cake high stakes state our fate
Dont wait 'for it'll be to late to escape
Take this moment dont postpone it till a later date
Allah be great my mate Allah be the highest companion
Above horizons 7 heavens see His hijab light of many colours
A fright for disbelievers a joy for many scholars
The day not long away
To be dealt the reward of the good and punishment of those astray

His hijab refering to Allah usin light on the time when the Prophet peace be upon him went up to Him

Daffodil · **Re: rhymes -** 12-12-2006

Salaams

here is something i wrote a while ago.

please do NOT COPY!

I'm like a reason for treason,
All cuz I didn’t please em,
Ull never hear me cry,
I never give up after the first time I try,
I’m out to win against the jinn,
Life without sin,
I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile,
His love lasts longer then the river Nile,
More valuable then a golden mile,
I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial,
Allow living in denial,
Time flies and every one dies,
There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies,
Already ur parents have become spies in disguise,
And ur only ten,
Not even wise women or men,
Honesty and dignity step aside,
The Satan we abide,
Let sin take our pride,
Drink, sex and drugs on our mind,
Continue committing crime,
Disown ur parents,
Live life against the 10 commandments,
Snakes and crooks working for the government,
Brothers and sisters living under feuds,
Creating anger in ur moods,
Shed a crocodile tear,
God we longer fear,
Shed tears of blood,
Uve become a wanted thug,
Create pain, make ur prey insane,
Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane,
U aint no different ur the same,
Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame,
Don’t worry,
One day we’ll all see how u used to be,
The Satan will applause ur cause,
Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny,
Don’t recollect Islam for weeks,
Ur future looks bleak,
Quran always speaks, calls out ur name,
But to u its only another mind playing game,
It brings u and ur peers shame,
Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far,
U used to be their shining star,
Now uve left then with an inerasable scar,
Like a footprint in the tar,
Before u know it, the angel of death is here,
Too late to fill up with fear,
Or even shed a drop of tear,
Nothing u can do about it, its here,
Its crystal clear,
U just wanted the best,
U failed to realise life’s a test,
Behind u and in front of u is a big mess,
Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death,
The sharp claw snatches ur soul,
Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell,
U scream, but no one can hear the sound,
No one can help u now,
Now’s ur chance to take a bow,
Show all the crowd how high u is now!
BY NAFEESA GIRACH, COPYRIGHT

**Al Habeshi** · **Re: rhymes -** 12-12-2006

I never knew daffodil could be so real,
Still I chill, spill then refill my mind,
With composed composition of greater admission,
Bear Shahada knowin Allah is far from a lier,
Picturing promises pertained within pages,
Of Mushafs passed through the ages,
Anyhow, Copy Rights in Islam?
Am not a copy cat but I understand!
Sister still stands that for peace in Afghanistan,
They should bring back the taliban,

JσℓιєFℓєυя · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. Baldy

i was weaned on them hip hop streets,
with them hip hop beats,
now, hip hop meets islam,
greets it with open arms,
this is my way of dawah,
some say its a waste of time,
when they see me spit a rhyme,
say my dawah aint worth a dime

why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it?

but whats the use of all the rhyme
if you not even gonna take the time
to act on your words bro
you can spit, you can write
but its only gonna show...
...when the orphan child aint crying no more
when the lil Palestinian girl doesnt have to witness all the gore
of murder and people dying
of broken hearts and families crying
whats the point of all the ryhme when you do it just for fun
I know you gotta spread Islam with each rising of the sun...BUT
dont you think it'd work better
if you took each and every letter
out onto the streets
combine it with hiphop beats
and show em what Islam teachs (had to make it ryme! )
theres no use if it's all under cover,
ther's no use if it dont tell no real story
you wanna make it worthwhile, dont censor all the gory
the details that the media cover
coz I aint no kaafir lover
you gotta show em what we're all about
you gotta shout it from the rooftops, yo you really gotta shout
if you wanna be spittin yo life story thats kewl
but these lines are a gift, yo they're a real tool
so use em, abuse em, just make sure you dont lose em...
lose em to the hip hop on these mad streets
Islam dont need hip hop
Islam juSt needs PEACE!

yeah am up for the comp

khalil27 · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

You call urself a poet
i dont feel it
its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it.
Your a fake
you might as well drown urself in the lake.

But my rhyme is deep
maybe weak
but im trying
without copying

this is to hard i give up
its hard to write a rhyme
it takes time
this i my rhyme.

-Shakirah- · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by Daffodil

Salaams

here is something i wrote a while ago.

please do NOT COPY!

I'm like a reason for treason,
All cuz I didn’t please em,
Ull never hear me cry,
I never give up after the first time I try,
I’m out to win against the jinn,
Life without sin,
I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile,
His love lasts longer then the river Nile,
More valuable then a golden mile,
I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial,
Allow living in denial,
Time flies and every one dies,
There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies,
Already ur parents have become spies in disguise,
And ur only ten,
Not even wise women or men,
Honesty and dignity step aside,
The Satan we abide,
Let sin take our pride,
Drink, sex and drugs on our mind,
Continue committing crime,
Disown ur parents,
Live life against the 10 commandments,
Snakes and crooks working for the government,
Brothers and sisters living under feuds,
Creating anger in ur moods,
Shed a crocodile tear,
God we longer fear,
Shed tears of blood,
Uve become a wanted thug,
Create pain, make ur prey insane,
Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane,
U aint no different ur the same,
Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame,
Don’t worry,
One day we’ll all see how u used to be,
The Satan will applause ur cause,
Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny,
Don’t recollect Islam for weeks,
Ur future looks bleak,
Quran always speaks, calls out ur name,
But to u its only another mind playing game,
It brings u and ur peers shame,
Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far,
U used to be their shining star,
Now uve left then with an inerasable scar,
Like a footprint in the tar,
Before u know it, the angel of death is here,
Too late to fill up with fear,
Or even shed a drop of tear,
Nothing u can do about it, its here,
Its crystal clear,
U just wanted the best,
U failed to realise life’s a test,
Behind u and in front of u is a big mess,
Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death,
The sharp claw snatches ur soul,
Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell,
U scream, but no one can hear the sound,
No one can help u now,
Now’s ur chance to take a bow,
Show all the crowd how high u is now!
BY NAFEESA GIRACH, COPYRIGHT

wow! what a talent sis!

**Al Habeshi** · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

I was going to say before,

I think a Topical Freestyle would be best,

Compatition could be to have two people who are online, and a third member to post a topic, then both the people have 10 minutes or what ever time limit to compose a x amount of lines on that topic alone, then people vote on which verse is better, there could be a voting structure too.

jzcasejz · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

^^ Sounds Good...

IbnAbdulHakim · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

ok let me know tomorrow when its on, tonight aint happening.

SirDemonic · **Re: rhymes -** 12-13-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by khalil27

You call urself a poet
i dont feel it
its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it.
Your a fake
you might as well drown urself in the lake.

But my rhyme is deep
maybe weak
but im trying
without copying

this is to hard i give up
its hard to write a rhyme
it takes time
this i my rhyme.

Your ryhme is deep? go swim in it

Daffodil · **Re: rhymes -** 12-14-2006

Liúyú de Lian · **Re: rhymes -** 12-14-2006

ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted

**Al Habeshi** · **Re: rhymes -** 12-14-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by Faraway

ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted

It wouldn't be freestyle if you did lol. The aim of freestyle is to put something together on the spot.

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Ok, is anyone online now that wants to do a verse, two people, when they both reply I will state a topic and then you both need to have your verses of lets say 10 lines within 5 minutes of the post of my topic.

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Mr. Baldy Hip-Hop baby Status: Offline Posts: 898 Reputation: 2891 Rep Power: 24 Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: islamistan Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-12-2006 i was weaned on them hip hop streets, with them hip hop beats, now, hip hop meets islam, greets it with open arms, this is my way of dawah, some say its a waste of time, when they see me spit a rhyme, say my dawah aint worth a dime why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it? __________________ i was born muslim, i live muslim and i die probably becasue some cracker who knows im muslim will try and kill me. The freed slave shall walk on the blood of his masters "Coffee is the only thing I like integrated" - El-Hajj Malik el-Shabazz (Malcolm X)

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IbnAbdulHakim Status: Offline Posts: 14,599 Reputation: 45065 Rep Power: 86 Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-12-2006 i only rhyme hoping to wake those who treat islam like its fake for gods sake who gives much more then he takes so stay strong and dont let yourself break __________________ iDawah.com Bringing Dawah back..to the future! Shaqiq bin `Abdullah reported: The Companions of the Messenger of Allah (PBUH) did not consider the abandonment of any action as disbelief except neglecting Salat. [At-Tirmidhi]

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Daffodil Account Disabled Status: Offline Posts: 1,433 Reputation: 3303 Rep Power: 0 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Planet Earth Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-12-2006 Salaams here is something i wrote a while ago. please do NOT COPY! I'm like a reason for treason, All cuz I didn’t please em, Ull never hear me cry, I never give up after the first time I try, I’m out to win against the jinn, Life without sin, I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile, His love lasts longer then the river Nile, More valuable then a golden mile, I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial, Allow living in denial, Time flies and every one dies, There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies, Already ur parents have become spies in disguise, And ur only ten, Not even wise women or men, Honesty and dignity step aside, The Satan we abide, Let sin take our pride, Drink, sex and drugs on our mind, Continue committing crime, Disown ur parents, Live life against the 10 commandments, Snakes and crooks working for the government, Brothers and sisters living under feuds, Creating anger in ur moods, Shed a crocodile tear, God we longer fear, Shed tears of blood, Uve become a wanted thug, Create pain, make ur prey insane, Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane, U aint no different ur the same, Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame, Don’t worry, One day we’ll all see how u used to be, The Satan will applause ur cause, Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny, Don’t recollect Islam for weeks, Ur future looks bleak, Quran always speaks, calls out ur name, But to u its only another mind playing game, It brings u and ur peers shame, Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far, U used to be their shining star, Now uve left then with an inerasable scar, Like a footprint in the tar, Before u know it, the angel of death is here, Too late to fill up with fear, Or even shed a drop of tear, Nothing u can do about it, its here, Its crystal clear, U just wanted the best, U failed to realise life’s a test, Behind u and in front of u is a big mess, Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death, The sharp claw snatches ur soul, Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell, U scream, but no one can hear the sound, No one can help u now, Now’s ur chance to take a bow, Show all the crowd how high u is now! BY NAFEESA GIRACH, COPYRIGHT

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Al Habeshi Eesa Abdullah Status: Offline Posts: 5,711 Reputation: 21065 Rep Power: 48 Join Date: Jan 2006 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-12-2006 I never knew daffodil could be so real, Still I chill, spill then refill my mind, With composed composition of greater admission, Bear Shahada knowin Allah is far from a lier, Picturing promises pertained within pages, Of Mushafs passed through the ages, Anyhow, Copy Rights in Islam? Am not a copy cat but I understand! Sister still stands that for peace in Afghanistan, They should bring back the taliban, __________________ إتبعوا ولا تبتدعوا، فقدكفيتم، وكل بدعة ضلالة Follow (the Sunnah) and do not innovate (into it), for verily you have been sufficed. And every innovation is a misguidance. Confused about which religion is true? How can I know? Come and check out some proposed fundamental principles (#1 , #2) to aid you in making a decision.

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khalil27 LI Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 417 Reputation: 747 Rep Power: 19 Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: UK Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-13-2006 You call urself a poet i dont feel it its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it. Your a fake you might as well drown urself in the lake. But my rhyme is deep maybe weak but im trying without copying this is to hard i give up its hard to write a rhyme it takes time this i my rhyme.

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Al Habeshi Eesa Abdullah Status: Offline Posts: 5,711 Reputation: 21065 Rep Power: 48 Join Date: Jan 2006 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-13-2006 I was going to say before, I think a Topical Freestyle would be best, Compatition could be to have two people who are online, and a third member to post a topic, then both the people have 10 minutes or what ever time limit to compose a x amount of lines on that topic alone, then people vote on which verse is better, there could be a voting structure too. __________________ إتبعوا ولا تبتدعوا، فقدكفيتم، وكل بدعة ضلالة Follow (the Sunnah) and do not innovate (into it), for verily you have been sufficed. And every innovation is a misguidance. Confused about which religion is true? How can I know? Come and check out some proposed fundamental principles (#1 , #2) to aid you in making a decision.

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jzcasejz LI Oldskool Status: Offline Posts: 1,964 Reputation: 20457 Rep Power: 47 Join Date: Apr 2005 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-13-2006 ^^ Sounds Good... __________________

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IbnAbdulHakim Status: Offline Posts: 14,599 Reputation: 45065 Rep Power: 86 Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-13-2006 ok let me know tomorrow when its on, tonight aint happening. __________________ iDawah.com Bringing Dawah back..to the future! Shaqiq bin `Abdullah reported: The Companions of the Messenger of Allah (PBUH) did not consider the abandonment of any action as disbelief except neglecting Salat. [At-Tirmidhi]

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Daffodil Account Disabled Status: Offline Posts: 1,433 Reputation: 3303 Rep Power: 0 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Planet Earth Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-14-2006 lol

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Liúyú de Lian Aphonic observer Status: Offline Posts: 7,333 Reputation: 17926 Rep Power: 51 Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Oubliette Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 12-14-2006 ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted __________________ Grandaughter of charisma This signature beats Skywalker's Join us at Fisabeelillah Forum Light of the Qur'an by Ajla [Excellent]