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Default Re: rhymes - 02-15-2007

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Yes I'm a ghost writer who writes in a state of death alive like a martyr,
Parta' me is sucessfully wanting to be a bird green on a heavenly tree,
Yet I go on killing sprees with my artilery made of words,
As the opitamy of good versus evil in my own world,
Keep cold, feel old, peep as i reveal the real Lord,
The one who Istawa, over, His Throne,
In a way which befits His majesty, always remember there is none like He,
So when I state I did rake my mind and wrote the above lines will you believe me?

^^that rite there...is words of art....that is ill....like bro khalil said....use it for like islamic poetry.....u can even publish a book...

"100 Top Ill Islamic Poems" .....
By. Al Habeshi....
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

ye al-habeshi's rhymes get me all lol
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

hmm...


how comes no-ones rhymin anymore! Al-Habeshi bring some more on!!


because there are certain rhymes
that make you think
it'll all be over by the next wink
so you kno u can eiva swim
or deep as hell you can sink

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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

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I've not really freestyled before but i'll try my best
Try not to ignore the fact that life is a test
U don't realise but some things are for the best
Just keep ur deen strong, forget the rest

This world is nothing compared to the Hereafter
If u believe it is, u couldn't be dafter,
Don't u understand the purpose of life
The reason behind all these wars and strife?

Worshipping Allah the Almighty is before
You do anything else, this is the core
Belief for a Muslim to have in their hearts
From Islam, don't keep yourself apart....




P.S. What dyou think
i think you smacked it sis with a great message
this whole life is just a mere passage
that we all must go thru like travellers in a carriage
so brothers n sisters realise lifes not all about marriage :P


ok lol i kno that was weird but still mashaAllah sis your rhyme was good
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

at times when u get bored
shaytaan comes as sharp as a sword
sikko wants to mislead u causin discord
but u kno ur protection is in Allahs words
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

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...Marriage is still part of life they say
As long as you do it the right way
With the help of Allah Subhan Wa Taa'la
U do nothing wrong and you'll find a good partner

Just have your trust in Allah Almighty
Leave all your worries and Anxiety
Make a promise to yourself this day
You'll follow the teachings of Islam straightaway...




mashaAllah my heart says your right
how can we deny this bright light
im talking about islam sublime in its plight
nothing else can make u reach greater heights..
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007



^ sry im out of reps, but mashaAllah...
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

The back is best, I mean the best is back,
An attitude grotesque but Id guess you'd expect that,
From iblees the 1 who feasts on evil feats,
Pleading please give me respite that I might miguide the least,
Of mankind who sway away from the righta way,
Hey, I pray autho Billahi minash shaytanir rajeem,
I been cleen since utterin that noone is rightfully worhiped but Him.

Know what I mean?
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

i like this one

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u think ure cool
ure so fool
ure so bad
u end up sad
i get my knife
and end ure life
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

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...I know what u mean but don't put me down
I'm just a beginner trying ma best not to frown
Yes the Shaytaan, known as Iblees
Trying to fight him to get some peace...


Read Surah Ar Radd, Ayah 28 then contemplate with ease,
It thus states that in rememberance of Allah do hearts find peace,
We all begginers belonging to the best ummah,
Longing for paradise on this day of jummuah,
Remember dont take leaps only baby steps,
Then take heed of the need for that which is correct,
Don't conceed to greed lest you disconnect,

From Ar Rahman's Rahma
Which Is What We Need For The HereAfter
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Assalamu'Alaykum

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How about this form of jugglin words:
Im, Purposly Providing ProvisionsSo you can, Inevitably Invite me to make InscionsDeadly Discions Desicevly Deletin you like DemolitionRappin Repetition got me Reattractin your Revison...

I got a headache reading that. I only read about 4 lines, not saying its bad its really good maasha`Allaah but it was justmind boggling.
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-02-2007

Al-Habeshi you are like the halal version of blakstone!!!!! LOL

mashaAllah broo!!


because halal is the way we been instructed
we want good deeds without it gettin deducted
by this dunya we'll never be seducted
wen we get to jannah inshaAllah we'll hav clamped it!!!
stamped it! our passport to jannah!
strivin 4 haq, believin in Allah
sadaqAllah, may Allah accept it
we wanna be winners may Allah protect it!!!!!!

ALLAHU AKBAR
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Al-Habeshi you are like the halal version of blakstone!!!!! LOL

mashaAllah broo!!


because halal is the way we been instructed
we want good deeds without it gettin deducted
by this dunya we'll never be seducted
wen we get to jannah inshaAllah we'll hav clamped it!!!
stamped it! our passport to jannah!
strivin 4 haq, believin in Allah
sadaqAllah, may Allah accept it
we wanna be winners may Allah protect it!!!!!!

ALLAHU AKBAR
And protect our souls,
Till He resurect us all,
Keep me a fan of emaan and a man not sold,
To the discord of the bold of old,
Free from his plan at hand to disrupt man,
I read nuniyah an inspiration to write poetry,
Dedication to poetically potray the destination of the pious.
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Default Re: rhymes - 03-03-2007

Old nursery ryhme, and yes with the right beat it could just be a rap song...

Simple Simon met a pieman,
Going to the fair;
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Let me taste your ware."
Says the pieman to Simple Simon,
"Show me first your penny,"
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Indeed, I have not any."
Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
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Old nursery ryhme, and yes with the right beat it could just be a rap song...

Simple Simon met a pieman,
Going to the fair;
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Let me taste your ware."
Says the pieman to Simple Simon,
"Show me first your penny,"
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Indeed, I have not any."
Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
Was in his mother's pail!
but oh wait the story hasnt finished yet
a beautiful muslim simple simon met
he told him to look around and take a glance
could all this have come out by chance?
isnt it foolish to worship a partner
besides the one whos likeness can be matched by no other
simple simon thought and said oh yes
a muslim i'll be today god blessh