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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-03-2008

before the hour
or in the hereafter...
but dont sweat it
theres always a new chapter

why people lettin themselves drown
always wearing that same ugly frown
spendin nights soakin tears every gown
seekin sympathy like they so down

whats wrong look around tell me whats changed
everythings the same, feelings to blame
coz every thought n notion
stirring in ur mind like a potion
is your own doing, coz nothings changed
ur still you, everyones still them
the feelings you going through
is stuk in ur minds frame...
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-03-2008

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^ i thought this was the thread to 'continue from the last line'. clearly i was wrong.

am gone

Assalamu Alaykum
my mistake, i ammended it
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-03-2008

is stuk in ur minds frame...
Man that excuse is lame
Why blame the mind
when if you look around you'll find
that the cause ain't just mental
But also physical
The cause of pain we see
Only by prayer we'll set ourselves free
By changing your ways its true
You'll take a step through
The trials and tribulations of this dunya
In order that you may succed in the aakhirah..
Sorry bro, don't mean to offend, jus needed to rhyme..
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-03-2008

Is stuck in ur minds frame
U wanna make the moves, think ppl are a game
change em how u wish, mould em and display
Keep that image fixed...dictate how they move n keep an eye on wat they say
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-05-2008



This life is a play...
You don't wanna end up the wrong way,
But you will if you don't make the right move,
Committin sins & not ashamed, who you tryna prove?
Turn over a new leaf and change your ways,
Believe me they'll be your best days...

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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-06-2008

They'll be ur best days
wen shaytaan gotta try hard
to lead u astray

the days ur imaans flyin
and u feel it cant go rong

the days when it aint difficult
to smile wide and just be strong
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-06-2008

To smile wide and just be strong
That's something I haven't done for long.

Life is busy, along with my mind
I can't hold track of everything inside,
My thoughts are swaying away,
Some feelings I can't express in words,
I take help from the story told through my eyes.
Friends know, friends see
They don't need my lips and tongue to form what's real
Everything is shown, in the mirrror of my soul.

Now I smile, quite wide again
What a pretty smile I've got,
More often I should smile they say.

Easy to talk, it's much harder to walk.
If they saw life through my eyes,
took my place,
Read my mind,
felt my heart,
the burdens' weight,
the pain in my soul, the grief in my home,
I doubt they'd smile,
but I hope they'd try,
Just like I do, from time to time.
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-07-2008

Just like I do, from time to time,
faceless individual that I am,
one of the thousands everyday,
never to be seen again, gone.

Trying to find a place called home,
have a house, but that's just brick and stone.
Trying to find a place of rest,
something to fill that niche in my breast,
Ive looked left and Ive looked right,
pondered at dawn, reminisced at night,
patiently searching, for that which I may never find.

Hope keeps me going,
so my feelings keep flowing,
hours, days, months, and years,
time, in its cruelty, feeds my fears,
oh my soul, please don't fall behind,
don't pursue a Day where you'll cause me to be raised blind...

[My first humble attempt at poetry, inspired to try and write something...hopefully it wasn't too painful to read]
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-07-2008

What? That can't be your first try! SubhanAllah... Brother, that was awesome, mashaAllah!

Painful it was to read the line in white though. First try!
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SubhanAllaah what a beautiful poetry.


subhanAllaah...
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-07-2008

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oh my soul, please don't fall behind,
don't pursue a Day where you'll cause me to be raised blind...]
May Allah (swt) grant you Jannatul Firdaws bro....those lines sent shivers down my spine, literally speaking now, they just made me go 'WoW'...

Masha'Allah.
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-07-2008

the test has just begun...
when u start to think ur done
and u start to think u'v won
good luck n hav fun
if this wat u believe, i feel for ya hun
here u go.........a....cinnamon bun?

hm...ok!
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-07-2008



Jazakallah Khayr for the feedback..you all are really too kind..

Is this where I want to retire?!
What happened to me? What did I desire?
I feel torn; I believed I was only climbing higher,

I feel like the victim of a beautiful deception,
I thought I was looking straight, but it was clear misperception,
I thought I was on the path to become immaculate,
I was wrong; sincerity, I failed to articulate,

So help me, won't you, Today, just one time?
Wait, what did you say? That I alone, am the carrier of my crime?
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Oh Allah, I seek refuge in You lest I misguide others, or I am misguided by others, lest I cause others to err or I am caused to err, lest I abuse others or be abused, and lest I behave foolishly or meet with the foolishness of others.

   
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-08-2008

SubhanAllah

I...We....might aswell give up if we have a poet like that in our midst! Masha'Allah

Erm...

That I alone, am the carrier of my crime?
That you wont help, my only saviour is time?
SubhanAllah its dawning, the reality of all I chased
The images come crashing down, the dreams upon which I based.

I'm at a loss now, coming to you burdened Ya Allah!
This heavy weight of my sins, I know will not get me far.
So I ask you to have mercy, on this weak and pitiful soul,
And never again will I resort to slumber, when I next hear your call.
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Default Re: Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 10-08-2008

mashallah Abu Sayyad

And never again will I resort to slumber, when I next hear your call.
Haya 3ala Salah, jump out of bed, stumble and fall
get up again and stand up tall

make wudu, get your rug, and start to pray
ask Allah to forgive all the sins you did that day

but many of us we get on our knees only in times of need
when our loved ones are about to die or when our personal lives are under siege,
but what about when we got food to eat happy with our family
somtimes i think happines is an enemy

because in those times its Allah we fail to seek and praise
for the blessings we recieve, as we stuff our face
but i know that forever i'm a sinner
deep inside me theres a battle between my pure spirit and human nature
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