Continue the Islamic Rhyme

.:Umniyah:. · **Continue the Islamic Rhyme -** 11-22-2006

[MODERATOR'S NOTE: This post has been moved to the front of the thread to show how the thread is now being used].

Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.

Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.

So then the person after that says:

Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink

And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.

**Al Habeshi** · **Re: rhymes -** 11-23-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yasmine018

Tea For two
Two For You
You Love Me
Me Love You

Lol

Check Islamic Poetry, then look for some stuff called Pre Islamic Poetry theres my rap/street poetry

Here's a couple of lines:

I was a dirty dirty mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Musta been keen to be clean
Uttered the shahada, became a brother free from sin

no1_outbider · **Re: rhymes -** 11-24-2006

i cum from germany
trying to be hijjabi

this aint the place for trial&fame
maybe ya'll do it in forrest gate!

do try and get me off the hook
cuz this aint my brotherhood

watch you all im gona getcha
and know that im sachha (lol one who says the truth)

Yah you all might be tight
but know that this aint a fight

no1_outbider · **Re: rhymes -** 11-25-2006

I finally escaped from the rule and regulations of my LORD
Forget learning and teaching ABROAD

It didnt take a minute or TWO
in joining the worldy CRUE

So easily i indulged myself in so called minor SINS
Mostly consisting of music,tv and smoking 10 SLIMS

Never experiencing such amusment as TODAY
Banging music was deffinantly the cure of
last so islamicly fanatic dull DAYS.

Clock hit 3 in the MORNING
when people left half SNORING

Making me realise what i had been upto all night
and now it was home time

Sounds of music shut DOWN
messing me up and in sins DROWNED

And there i thought it was for freedom and peace,the SOURCE
Shame, that certaintly is in remebering your LORD

Yasmin beat that LOOOLL!!Nah man!!!

**chacha_jalebi** · **Re: rhymes -** 11-25-2006

awwww heavy thread mujhahid kid

lemme spit my lines

its like on a joypad A,A,B i batter all fake and all wannabeez

press pause u dont wanna start me
u cant categorise me in a category, im in a leaugue of my own
now gimme my crown n pass me my throne,
im a prosecutaa, eliminataa i take all manz lik dey minor,

lol back in d dayz

every1 was a rapper

no1_outbider · **Re: rhymes -** 11-25-2006

BRAP BRAP Chacha_jelebi

What is it about the young youth
for they know the truth
yet run towards rotten old fruit
forgetting the real juice!!!!

Mu'Min · **Re: rhymes -** 11-25-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by IsaAbdullah

Lol

Check Islamic Poetry, then look for some stuff called Pre Islamic Poetry theres my rap/street poetry

Here's a couple of lines:

I was a dirty dirty mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Musta been keen to be clean
Uttered the shahada, became a brother free from sin

LOL! You got more... cuz from what I read you're the best!

**chacha_jalebi** · **Re: rhymes -** 11-25-2006

^^^^ hevyyy

da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf
if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts
they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean
on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen

no1_outbider · **Re: rhymes -** 11-25-2006

Quote:

da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf
if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts
they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean
on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen

Allah gave chances for them to say
the word written back on clay
also the quotes of our beloved
but they werent intrested
the Angels will come- Man Rabuk?
they have no answer, confused n stuk

**Al Habeshi** · **Re: rhymes -** 11-26-2006

We should do word jugglin'

Its a 'game' where a person starts off with a couple of lines, and the person follows and has to rhyme that, also, for those more advance, you should try to 'multi' which means a rhyme within the line, examples:

I was a dirty Mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem

Thats a basic line, heres a Multi,

I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~
The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~

Used to do this alot before Islaam, sure did increase my vocabulary.

Mu'Min · **Re: rhymes -** 11-26-2006

"I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~
The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~"

Mine:
I strive to become a righteous Mu'minah
Pray to my Lord to make me like Rasulu'Allah
For my only goal is to reach Jannah

I hope this is right...

**Al Habeshi** · **Re: rhymes -** 11-26-2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by no1_outbider

Allah gave chances for them to say
the word written back on clay
also the quotes of our beloved
but they werent intrested
the Angels will come- Man Rabuk?
they have no answer, confused n stuk

Then bang, struck, by angels deaf and blind,~
Because they strut their adornments, 'front-and-behind'~

They 'want-to-rewind' to a time, back in the dunya~
So they can obey the way of Muhmmad, and have a beard and kunya~

'Waking, weeping' been dragged by chains,~
'Shaking, seeking' from Ar Rahman's Grace,~
Pace Picks up, disgraced they end up, in the depths of hell,~
Outa luck, face that time is up, into their abode they fell,~
As proclaimed, and named in Al Qariah,~
Their Mother, Ummuhu Hawiyah~

(peace be upon Muhammad)

Yasmine018 · **Re: rhymes -** 11-26-2006

Man is my darling, my love and my pain,
My pleasure, my excitement, and my love again,
My wisdom, my courage, my power, my all,
Oh Man, do not come to me until I call.

In man is my life, and in man is my death,
He is hazard, my pride and my breath,
I sought him, I wrought him, I pant on his worth,
In him I experience indeterminate growth,

Oh Man, Man, of all my animal dearest,
Do not come till I call, though thou weariest first.

Yasmine018 · **Re: rhymes -** 11-26-2006

Shall I tell you the signs of a New Age coming?
It is a sound of drubbing ans sobbing
Of people crying, We are old, we are old
And the sun is going down and becoming cold

Oh sinful and sad and the lastof our kind
If we turn to God now do you think He will mind?
Then thry fall on their knees and begin to whine
That the state of Art itself presages decline
As if Art has anything or ever had
To do with civilization whether good or bad.

Art is wild as a cat and quite separate from civilazation
But that is another matter that is not now under consideration.
Oh these people are fools with their sighing and sinning
Why should Man be at an end? he is hardly beginning
This new Age will slip in under cover of their cries
And be upon them before they have opened their eyes.

Well, say geological time is a one-foot rule
Then Man's only been here about half an incj to play the fool
Or be wise if he like, as he often has been
Oh heavens how these crying people spoil the beautiful geological scene

IbnAbdulHakim · 09:46 AM

some good stuff, im respectin bro Isa, keep it up akhee

and some of the stuff lol, lets maintain hayaa inshaAllah

coz wivout hayaa we aint nothin
and no i aint bluffin
see those half dressed fakes out there
those that r supportin mr blair
coz THEY DONT CARE... about the akhiraah
THEY DONT CARE, about performin a single sajaadah
THEY DONT CARE, about Allaah ! subhana wata'ala !
Glory be to him our only creata
produca,directa and provida
SUSTAINA, so bow, n say Alhamdulillaah !

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.:Umniyah:. On Leave Status: Offline Posts: 863 Reputation: 3819 Rep Power: 14 Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In my virtual yemen :D Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Continue the Islamic Rhyme - 11-22-2006 [MODERATOR'S NOTE: This post has been moved to the front of the thread to show how the thread is now being used]. Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him. Example: I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see. So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee. Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed. head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe. So then the person after that says: Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe all the morals and laws that day were not with me it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.

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no1_outbider 4-Ever-Euphemistic Status: Offline Posts: 333 Reputation: 340 Rep Power: 13 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Germany Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-24-2006 i cum from germany trying to be hijjabi this aint the place for trial&fame maybe ya'll do it in forrest gate! do try and get me off the hook cuz this aint my brotherhood watch you all im gona getcha and know that im sachha (lol one who says the truth) Yah you all might be tight but know that this aint a fight __________________ ..... In the process of updating .....

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no1_outbider 4-Ever-Euphemistic Status: Offline Posts: 333 Reputation: 340 Rep Power: 13 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Germany Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-25-2006 I finally escaped from the rule and regulations of my LORD Forget learning and teaching ABROAD It didnt take a minute or TWO in joining the worldy CRUE So easily i indulged myself in so called minor SINS Mostly consisting of music,tv and smoking 10 SLIMS Never experiencing such amusment as TODAY Banging music was deffinantly the cure of last so islamicly fanatic dull DAYS. Clock hit 3 in the MORNING when people left half SNORING Making me realise what i had been upto all night and now it was home time Sounds of music shut DOWN messing me up and in sins DROWNED And there i thought it was for freedom and peace,the SOURCE Shame, that certaintly is in remebering your LORD Yasmin beat that LOOOLL!!Nah man!!! __________________ ..... In the process of updating .....

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chacha_jalebi Status: Offline Posts: 4,160 Reputation: 30364 Rep Power: 56 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Ambala Boxes :( Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-25-2006 awwww heavy thread mujhahid kid lemme spit my lines its like on a joypad A,A,B i batter all fake and all wannabeez press pause u dont wanna start me u cant categorise me in a category, im in a leaugue of my own now gimme my crown n pass me my throne, im a prosecutaa, eliminataa i take all manz lik dey minor, lol back in d dayz every1 was a rapper __________________ i was told im a psychologists dream patient "they ask you when will the help of Allah (swt) come! Certainly Allah (Swt) help is always near" Surah al Baqarah v214 SMILE

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no1_outbider 4-Ever-Euphemistic Status: Offline Posts: 333 Reputation: 340 Rep Power: 13 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Germany Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-25-2006 BRAP BRAP Chacha_jelebi What is it about the young youth for they know the truth yet run towards rotten old fruit forgetting the real juice!!!! __________________ ..... In the process of updating .....

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chacha_jalebi Status: Offline Posts: 4,160 Reputation: 30364 Rep Power: 56 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Ambala Boxes :( Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-25-2006 ^^^^ hevyyy da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen __________________ i was told im a psychologists dream patient "they ask you when will the help of Allah (swt) come! Certainly Allah (Swt) help is always near" Surah al Baqarah v214 SMILE

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Al Habeshi Eesa Abdullah Status: Offline Posts: 5,783 Reputation: 22161 Rep Power: 49 Join Date: Jan 2006 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-26-2006 We should do word jugglin' Its a 'game' where a person starts off with a couple of lines, and the person follows and has to rhyme that, also, for those more advance, you should try to 'multi' which means a rhyme within the line, examples: I was a dirty Mushrikeen Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem Thats a basic line, heres a Multi, I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~ The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~ Used to do this alot before Islaam, sure did increase my vocabulary. __________________ إتبعوا ولا تبتدعوا، فقدكفيتم، وكل بدعة ضلالة Follow (the Sunnah) and do not innovate (into it), for verily you have been sufficed. And every innovation is a misguidance. Confused about which religion is true? How can I know? Come and check out some proposed fundamental principles (#1 , #2) to aid you in making a decision.

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Mu'Min Ya Ommi...I luv You! Status: Offline Posts: 62 Reputation: 117 Rep Power: 12 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-26-2006 "I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~ The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~" Mine: I strive to become a righteous Mu'minah Pray to my Lord to make me like Rasulu'Allah For my only goal is to reach Jannah I hope this is right...

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Yasmine018 Account Disabled Status: Offline Posts: 1,179 Reputation: 477 Rep Power: 0 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: DreamyLand Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-26-2006 Man is my darling, my love and my pain, My pleasure, my excitement, and my love again, My wisdom, my courage, my power, my all, Oh Man, do not come to me until I call. In man is my life, and in man is my death, He is hazard, my pride and my breath, I sought him, I wrought him, I pant on his worth, In him I experience indeterminate growth, Oh Man, Man, of all my animal dearest, Do not come till I call, though thou weariest first.

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Yasmine018 Account Disabled Status: Offline Posts: 1,179 Reputation: 477 Rep Power: 0 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: DreamyLand Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-26-2006 Shall I tell you the signs of a New Age coming? It is a sound of drubbing ans sobbing Of people crying, We are old, we are old And the sun is going down and becoming cold Oh sinful and sad and the lastof our kind If we turn to God now do you think He will mind? Then thry fall on their knees and begin to whine That the state of Art itself presages decline As if Art has anything or ever had To do with civilization whether good or bad. Art is wild as a cat and quite separate from civilazation But that is another matter that is not now under consideration. Oh these people are fools with their sighing and sinning Why should Man be at an end? he is hardly beginning This new Age will slip in under cover of their cries And be upon them before they have opened their eyes. Well, say geological time is a one-foot rule Then Man's only been here about half an incj to play the fool Or be wise if he like, as he often has been Oh heavens how these crying people spoil the beautiful geological scene

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IbnAbdulHakim Status: Offline Posts: 15,135 Reputation: 50316 Rep Power: 94 Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: rhymes - 11-28-2006 some good stuff, im respectin bro Isa, keep it up akhee and some of the stuff lol, lets maintain hayaa inshaAllah coz wivout hayaa we aint nothin and no i aint bluffin see those half dressed fakes out there those that r supportin mr blair coz THEY DONT CARE... about the akhiraah THEY DONT CARE, about performin a single sajaadah THEY DONT CARE, about Allaah ! subhana wata'ala ! Glory be to him our only creata produca,directa and provida SUSTAINA, so bow, n say Alhamdulillaah ! __________________ * Official Member of the Poets Crew * shes so scary Shaqiq bin `Abdullah reported: The Companions of the Messenger of Allah (PBUH) did not consider the abandonment of any action as disbelief except neglecting Salat. [At-Tirmidhi] Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 11-28-2006 at 09:46 AM.