Urdu Poetry

Bin Qasim · **Urdu Poetry -** 09-21-2005

I guess it is ok to talk about Urdu Poetry in here.

Kisi ko shauq hai shayari ya nazme sonne ka?

Main buht nazmein padhta tha ab koi kitaab nahi hai mere paas

Main Iqbal ko padhta tha, puri kitaab khatan nahi ki lekin. Main ne Akhtar el Iman ki ek nazm padhi thi badi pasand aayi mujhe Aitamaad. badi pasand aayi mujhe. Ek Ali Sardar Jaafri ki padhi thi, mere khayal se "Subah-e-Farda" naam the nazm ka? zamana hua padhe. Phir doosre shayar bhi hain jaise Marhoom Nasir Kazmi, etc. All are very good shayars.

yeh link hain dekh le kuch shayaro ko agar waqt mile.

http://urdulove.com/

Wld like to hear ur feedback on Urdu poetry too :brother:

**zAk** · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 09-22-2005

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Kisi ko shauq hai shayari ya nazme sonne ka?

shouq to hai, par kuch khaas nahin,
kabhi kabhi padh leta hoon,
par ibnesafi ke saare poems padh liye hain, woh bhi kayeeen baar

habib · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 11-01-2005

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Kisi ko shauq hai shayari ya nazme sonne ka?

bai, mujay shauq hai shayari aur nazme sonne ka ..

Lonely_Boy · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 11-01-2005

Thora buhat hia shoq bus selected pasand hai

Lonely_Boy · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 11-05-2005

Bin Qasim · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-07-2005

buht badi thi bhai LB... phir kabhie fursat mein padh longa.. :P

meri pasandeeda ghazloon mein se ek paish karta aap longo ko... Nasir Kazmi ki takhleeq hai...

umeed karta hoon pasand aayegi...

Scents of Jannah · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-20-2005

Mujhe urdu se bohot lagao hai. Kaash mein Pakistan mein parhi hoti

lekin ik guzarish hai tamaam behen bhaiyon se. Agar bura na maanen to jab aap 'bara' likhte hain to usse 'bada' na likhen. Maslan 'parh sakta hoon' ko 'padh sakta hoon' na likhiye. Aise hota hai ke jab mein parhti hoon to 'phad' ko phir 'parh' ki bajaye phad keh deti hun lol. Bohot ajeeb sa lagta hai. Sirf ik choti si farmaish hai, agar ho sake to, nahi to koi baat nahi

Scents of Jannah · 12:27 AM

Waaaah Lonely Bro, aapki 'Maan' wali poem bohot zabberdast hai!!!!!
Acha ye mein ne kal ye thread dekh ke jaldi se likhi thi, per mere computer mein garbar ho gai thi, isliye post nahin kar saki. Umeed hai pasand aayegi

*cough*

Untitled

Yun to Tu har jagha per mojood hai Maula
Phir bhi teri aghosh mein aane ko taras jati hoon mein

Ghum ke alam mein jab koi pass nahin hota
Tu hi pass hota hai-ye samajh jati hoon mein

Tu jo deta hai, jo leta hai, Tera shuker hai Maula
Tere har faisle ke aage jhuk jati hoon mein

Mein is kabil to nahin, per Tera karam hai mujh per
Bas akhirat mein Tera deedaar chahti hoon mein

Teri kasam, agar ab meri maut ka hukam aa jaye
Teri raza pe khushi se mitt jati hoon mein

:rose: :loving: :rose:

by Nadia ;)

**zAk** · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-21-2005

u wrote tht ?

but............

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Ya Rabb mein janti hoon ke Tera koi wajood to nahi

Astaghfirullah !!!

Scents of Jannah · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-21-2005

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Originally Posted by zAk

u wrote tht ?

but............Astaghfirullah !!!

keya hua???

Ya Rabb mein jati hun Tera koi wajood to nahi.. That means that I know Allah is not a physical being. Aap keya samjhe?

Mujhe zaroor bataiye ga.

**zAk** · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-21-2005

tera wujood nahi = U do not exist !

Scents of Jannah · 01:03 PM

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Originally Posted by zAk

tera wujood nahi = U do not exist !

sadke lol Allah aapko khush rakhe.. ameen. It doesn't mean that at all nauzubillah.

wajood nahi = physical body nahi

sorry if it came across as that (above). Give me some time I will try to amend it, so that it's clearly understood inshaAllah

**zAk** · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-21-2005

ah, ok

Scents of Jannah · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-21-2005

Zak bhai

mein ne woh line amend kar di hai. Ab bataiye theek hai? Sorry mujhe nahin pata tha ke wajood ka matlab presence bhi hota hai

Sorry again

Aur koi ghalti to nahi hai? Agar hai to zaroor batana

May Allah forgive me. Ameen

**zAk** · **Re: Urdu Poetry -** 12-22-2005

koi baat nahin

abt theek hai !

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Bin Qasim 01010101 Status: Offline Posts: 364 Reputation: 128 Rep Power: 22 Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: USA Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Urdu Poetry - 09-21-2005 I guess it is ok to talk about Urdu Poetry in here. Kisi ko shauq hai shayari ya nazme sonne ka? Main buht nazmein padhta tha ab koi kitaab nahi hai mere paas Main Iqbal ko padhta tha, puri kitaab khatan nahi ki lekin. Main ne Akhtar el Iman ki ek nazm padhi thi badi pasand aayi mujhe Aitamaad. badi pasand aayi mujhe. Ek Ali Sardar Jaafri ki padhi thi, mere khayal se "Subah-e-Farda" naam the nazm ka? zamana hua padhe. Phir doosre shayar bhi hain jaise Marhoom Nasir Kazmi, etc. All are very good shayars. yeh link hain dekh le kuch shayaro ko agar waqt mile. http://urdulove.com/ Wld like to hear ur feedback on Urdu poetry too :brother: __________________ What is the difference between birth and death? time from iqamat to salaah...

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Lonely_Boy LI Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 454 Reputation: 390 Rep Power: 21 Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Karachi, Pakistan Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 11-01-2005 Thora buhat hia shoq bus selected pasand hai __________________ Oh Allah! I love you and I need you, come into my heart, please.

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Lonely_Boy LI Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 454 Reputation: 390 Rep Power: 21 Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Karachi, Pakistan Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 11-05-2005 __________________ Oh Allah! I love you and I need you, come into my heart, please.

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Bin Qasim 01010101 Status: Offline Posts: 364 Reputation: 128 Rep Power: 22 Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: USA Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 12-07-2005 buht badi thi bhai LB... phir kabhie fursat mein padh longa.. :P meri pasandeeda ghazloon mein se ek paish karta aap longo ko... Nasir Kazmi ki takhleeq hai... umeed karta hoon pasand aayegi... __________________ What is the difference between birth and death? time from iqamat to salaah...

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Scents of Jannah I Love al-Quran Status: Offline Posts: 4,649 Reputation: 18834 Rep Power: 50 Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Don't no one dare steal my poemz. Or else Allah's gonna sort u out for me :D Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 12-20-2005 Mujhe urdu se bohot lagao hai. Kaash mein Pakistan mein parhi hoti lekin ik guzarish hai tamaam behen bhaiyon se. Agar bura na maanen to jab aap 'bara' likhte hain to usse 'bada' na likhen. Maslan 'parh sakta hoon' ko 'padh sakta hoon' na likhiye. Aise hota hai ke jab mein parhti hoon to 'phad' ko phir 'parh' ki bajaye phad keh deti hun lol. Bohot ajeeb sa lagta hai. Sirf ik choti si farmaish hai, agar ho sake to, nahi to koi baat nahi

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Scents of Jannah I Love al-Quran Status: Offline Posts: 4,649 Reputation: 18834 Rep Power: 50 Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Don't no one dare steal my poemz. Or else Allah's gonna sort u out for me :D Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 12-21-2005 Waaaah Lonely Bro, aapki 'Maan' wali poem bohot zabberdast hai!!!!! Acha ye mein ne kal ye thread dekh ke jaldi se likhi thi, per mere computer mein garbar ho gai thi, isliye post nahin kar saki. Umeed hai pasand aayegi cough Untitled Yun to Tu har jagha per mojood hai Maula Phir bhi teri aghosh mein aane ko taras jati hoon mein Ghum ke alam mein jab koi pass nahin hota Tu hi pass hota hai-ye samajh jati hoon mein Tu jo deta hai, jo leta hai, Tera shuker hai Maula Tere har faisle ke aage jhuk jati hoon mein Mein is kabil to nahin, per Tera karam hai mujh per Bas akhirat mein Tera deedaar chahti hoon mein Teri kasam, agar ab meri maut ka hukam aa jaye Teri raza pe khushi se mitt jati hoon mein :rose: :loving: :rose: by Nadia ;) Last edited by Scents of Jannah; 12-22-2005 at 12:27 AM.

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zAk Administrator Status: Offline Posts: 20,487 Reputation: 52996 Rep Power: 110 Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Cyberabad Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 12-21-2005 tera wujood nahi = U do not exist !

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Scents of Jannah I Love al-Quran Status: Offline Posts: 4,649 Reputation: 18834 Rep Power: 50 Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Don't no one dare steal my poemz. Or else Allah's gonna sort u out for me :D Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 12-21-2005 Zak bhai mein ne woh line amend kar di hai. Ab bataiye theek hai? Sorry mujhe nahin pata tha ke wajood ka matlab presence bhi hota hai Sorry again Aur koi ghalti to nahi hai? Agar hai to zaroor batana May Allah forgive me. Ameen

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zAk Administrator Status: Offline Posts: 20,487 Reputation: 52996 Rep Power: 110 Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Cyberabad Gender: Way of Life: Muslim	Re: Urdu Poetry - 12-22-2005 koi baat nahin abt theek hai !