muslimah_online
04-13-2008, 02:36 PM
:sl:
look ouside your small black window
and tell me what you see
is it the beautiful trees down low
or black sky reflected by the sea.
they chewed on their paper money
and built a castle with their spits
when they're inside it they grew lonely
but stupidly they sew their ego bits.
Faking faces on the flashy lights,
making nonsensical ideas and facts,
placing gray confidences by their sides,
and soon they'll start biting our necks!
here ye! Here ye! all people,
don't cover your eyes and ears,
give a chance though a little,
for a little orphaned child's tears.
:exhausted hope u all like it.. i did by myself..:):D
:w:
ReplyAmat Allah
04-13-2008, 03:11 PM
Asalamo Alikom
MASHAA ALLAH.....you are AMAZING my dear sister ....
What a beautiful poem mashaa Allah ,keep it up ,you have got a great talent from Allah
try to make it grow more and more....you will be the best inshaa Allah...
I loved your words...
Jazak Allah the paradise...
Ameeeeeeeeeeeen
Replymuslimah_online
04-13-2008, 03:23 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Amat Allah
What a beautiful poem mashaa Allah ,keep it up ,you have got a great talent from Allah
Alhamdulillah.. thank u sister. all the fouls are from me and all the best are from Allah. Thank you sooo much for ur motivating words..i'll try my best!! :D
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