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FatimaAsSideqah
08-05-2008, 11:43 PM
As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu
There are another of my poem from my notebook.
The wind my armour, the sky my shade.
The sea my rock ,the soil my blade.
The fear my fuel,the sound my food.
The rythm, my step, steel my blood.
My breath the lions roar.
My eyes, the past's reflection.
My key to deaths black door.
My soul awaiting Allah Taala correction.
My oath, my swear.
My smile through despair.
My fist a handful of hate.
My heart beckoning its fate.
The vibration of the call.
To stand up high or fall.
The shadows whisper pity as the mirror says it all.
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Nájlá
08-06-2008, 03:06 PM
mashallah
jazakiallah khayr for sharing
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Re.TiReD
08-06-2008, 03:07 PM
Wa'alaykum salam warahmatullah
Masha'Allah fishter
:wasalamex
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-06-2008, 03:15 PM
As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu
Jazaak'Allah Khair to Sisters Najla and Jolie.
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Re.TiReD
08-06-2008, 03:16 PM
:wasalamex
I kinda wanted to ask a ques though sis, how is the soil your blade? I'd say the pen was my blade :p
:wasalamex
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-06-2008, 03:19 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
JσℓιєFℓєυя
:wasalamex
I kinda wanted to ask a ques though sis, how is the soil your blade? I'd say the pen was my blade :p
:wasalamex
Loq! I think your answer might as same as mine! :X *runs*
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Re.TiReD
08-06-2008, 03:27 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
FatimaAsSideqah
Loq! I think your answer might as same as mine! :X *runs*
Lol I just asked since I like analysing poetry :p
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-06-2008, 03:30 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
JσℓιєFℓєυя
Lol I just asked since I like analysing poetry :p
Loq! Got it. :thumbs_up
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Sahabiyaat
08-06-2008, 03:36 PM
[QUOTE=FatimaAsSideqah;984754]
The shadows whisper pity as the mirror says it all.QUOTE]
:thumbs_up
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-06-2008, 03:41 PM
[QUOTE=Sahabiyaat;985220]
format_quote Originally Posted by
FatimaAsSideqah
The shadows whisper pity as the mirror says it all.QUOTE]
:thumbs_up
Really? I am scared a bit because I didn't know if whether it is good or not! :phew
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Re.TiReD
08-06-2008, 03:42 PM
Its fab sis! :D :thumbs_up :)
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-06-2008, 03:44 PM
Aww love you Sister Jolie! *Weeps* just kidding loq!
So Jazaak'Allah Khair sisters. I will do another work by writing other of poem.
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Sahabiyaat
08-06-2008, 03:51 PM
[QUOTE=FatimaAsSideqah;985225]
format_quote Originally Posted by
Sahabiyaat
Really? I am scared a bit because I didn't know if whether it is good or not! :phew
sure it is :D
the last line i liked, seems quite accomplished, like from a book.
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-06-2008, 03:54 PM
[QUOTE=Sahabiyaat;985232]
format_quote Originally Posted by
FatimaAsSideqah
sure it is :D
the last line i liked, seems quite accomplished, like from a book.
Yeah, that what my husband want me to write the poetry book and published it, but I am not sure! My mind is old a bit and lots of stuff in my mind. :-[
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Sahabiyaat
08-07-2008, 03:26 PM
no, go for it, what an excellent idea, and what a nice husband you have to encourage your literary interests, rather than than confine you to just making his beans on toast :D
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FatimaAsSideqah
08-07-2008, 04:14 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Sahabiyaat
no, go for it, what an excellent idea, and what a nice husband you have to encourage your literary interests, rather than than confine you to just making his beans on toast :D
As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu to dear sister.
Loq!! We have been discussed about it on last night and I will writing the poems about my life during Ramadhan on this year and LI Forum as well! Don't worry I won't put the negative about LI Forum. Only positive things! :statisfie
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