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IbnAbdulHakim
09-28-2008, 05:36 PM
i keep breathing in vain
cause my soul remains in pain
i would scream for help till my lungs burst
if i didnt feel so d.a.m.ned cursed
i'd choose my souls ease
even if for life i stay bed-ridden
through these feelings would you believe
not a single tear falls neither do i grieve
if you saw me you'd see a handsome smile
a young man that hasn't seen pain in a while..
this black heart of mine is now solid
im getting more scared coz its making my life morbid
how does a heart of stone
write poetry to express his alone...
emotions which come .. stay a while and go
my lord release me... coz i feel that which only you know.....
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chacha_jalebi
09-28-2008, 05:43 PM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah thats just wicked man!!!
keep it up akhi man aaaaaaaaaa
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Nájlá
09-28-2008, 05:44 PM
:ooh: WOW that was one sik poem
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Güven
09-28-2008, 06:12 PM
MASHAALLAH ! this is awesome !
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IbnAbdulHakim
09-28-2008, 06:45 PM
jazakAllaah khair everyone :ooh:
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Na7lah
09-28-2008, 06:48 PM
that was really goood :ooh: mashallah!
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noorseeker
09-28-2008, 06:51 PM
good stuff bro
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Re.TiReD
09-28-2008, 06:57 PM
Oh...
SubhanAllah...
:o
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Güven
09-28-2008, 06:58 PM
:ooh:
Amazing For the second time :ooh::ooh:
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Al-Zaara
09-28-2008, 07:01 PM
Selam aleykum, mashaAllah, very nice poem!
if you saw me you'd see a handsome smile
a young man that hasn't seen pain in a while..
This is my favourite part, 'cause it's funny how the outside can fool you. :D
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IbnAbdulHakim
09-28-2008, 07:09 PM
^ yeah sis defo...
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10-01-2008, 09:05 AM
:salamext:
May Allaah bless you with nothing but the best in this world and the aakhirah, Ameen.
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-01-2008, 03:42 PM
Ameen!! wa iyyaki
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Sahabiyaat
10-01-2008, 03:45 PM
can everyone stop using this emoticon :ooh:, im involuntarily starting to open my mouth in shock too lol.
well done akhee, excellent poem!
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-04-2008, 11:17 PM
jazakAllaah khair :)
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FatimaAsSideqah
10-04-2008, 11:21 PM
I am sooo speechless! :eek: You are such talented!
Give you some of reps akhi. You deserve it.
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10-05-2008, 10:13 AM
:salamext:
I just read that poem again :| MashaaAllaah amazing!!!
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truemuslim
10-06-2008, 06:20 PM
mashallah nice poem, that is true talent bro...
its just the font thats so.......
:ooh::ooh::ooh::ooh:---- nah i like this better = :eek: :eek: :eek:
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Zahida
10-06-2008, 08:05 PM
Alhumdolillah, and praise to you for Allah has given you a talent that you use well............. Actually since i joined this forum i have cried sooooo much.!!!!!!!!!!!
format_quote Originally Posted by
IbnAbdulHakim
jazakAllaah khair :)
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Ibn Abi Ahmed
10-07-2008, 03:10 AM
:sl:
I don't usually come across this section, but I am honestly glad I did because of this poem. Those were some really deep lines bro! Masha'Allaah, keep it coming!
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roohani.doctor
10-07-2008, 03:12 AM
omg thats exactly how i been feeling for a while! great job brother!!
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Re.TiReD
10-07-2008, 01:26 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Abu Sayyad
:sl:
I don't usually come across this section, but I am honestly glad I did because of this poem. Those were some really deep lines bro! Masha'Allaah, keep it coming!
:wasalamex
read this too insha'Allah
http://www.islamicboard.com/islamic-...come-back.html Reply
siham
10-07-2008, 04:29 PM
amazing pOem!!!! Masha-allah!!
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