-release me-

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i keep breathing in vain
cause my soul remains in pain

i would scream for help till my lungs burst
if i didnt feel so d.a.m.ned cursed

i'd choose my souls ease
even if for life i stay bed-ridden

through these feelings would you believe
not a single tear falls neither do i grieve

if you saw me you'd see a handsome smile
a young man that hasn't seen pain in a while..

this black heart of mine is now solid
im getting more scared coz its making my life morbid

how does a heart of stone
write poetry to express his alone...






emotions which come .. stay a while and go
my lord release me... coz i feel that which only you know.....

[chacha_jalebi]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah thats just wicked man!!!

keep it up akhi man aaaaaaaaaa

[Nájlá]

:ooh: WOW that was one sik poem

[Güven]

MASHAALLAH ! this is awesome !

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[IbnAbdulHakim]

jazakAllaah khair everyone :ooh:

[Na7lah]

that was really goood :ooh: mashallah!

[noorseeker]

good stuff bro

[Re.TiReD]

Oh...

SubhanAllah...

:o

[Güven]

:ooh:

Amazing For the second time :ooh::ooh:

[Al-Zaara]

Selam aleykum, mashaAllah, very nice poem!

if you saw me you'd see a handsome smile
a young man that hasn't seen pain in a while..

This is my favourite part, 'cause it's funny how the outside can fool you. :D

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ yeah sis defo...

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:salamext:

May Allaah bless you with nothing but the best in this world and the aakhirah, Ameen.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Ameen!! wa iyyaki

[Sahabiyaat]

can everyone stop using this emoticon :ooh:, im involuntarily starting to open my mouth in shock too lol.

well done akhee, excellent poem!

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jazakAllaah khair :)

[FatimaAsSideqah]

I am sooo speechless! :eek: You are such talented!

Give you some of reps akhi. You deserve it.

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:salamext:

I just read that poem again :| MashaaAllaah amazing!!!

[truemuslim]

mashallah nice poem, that is true talent bro...
its just the font thats so.......

:ooh::ooh::ooh::ooh:---- nah i like this better = :eek: :eek: :eek:

[Zahida]

Alhumdolillah, and praise to you for Allah has given you a talent that you use well............. Actually since i joined this forum i have cried sooooo much.!!!!!!!!!!!

jazakAllaah khair :)

[Ibn Abi Ahmed]

:sl:

I don't usually come across this section, but I am honestly glad I did because of this poem. Those were some really deep lines bro! Masha'Allaah, keep it coming!

[roohani.doctor]

omg thats exactly how i been feeling for a while! great job brother!!

[Re.TiReD]

:sl:

I don't usually come across this section, but I am honestly glad I did because of this poem. Those were some really deep lines bro! Masha'Allaah, keep it coming!

:wasalamex

read this too insha'Allah

http://www.islamicboard.com/islamic-...come-back.html

[siham]

amazing pOem!!!! Masha-allah!!