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truemuslim
10-06-2008, 03:05 PM
........
yehh i.. i cry in the rain
soo i .. i get out the pain,
nd my.. my heart got slain
but i.. i aint to complain
no i.. i keep it in a chain
yeh i .. i feel to explain
my cry.. my cry from my vien
nd i.. i aint here to entertain
i try.. i try to maintain
but i.. i just dont obtain
that lie.. no i gotta new train
so i.. i ride on the right lane
yeh i .. i dont try to gain
no reply.. but i do it for the pain
but the reason why i do it
is coz nobody would kno it
yeh there i just admit it
the rain and tears dont split it
it looks like one , ya get it?
so try again and yo get it,
yeh yo, yo throat im gonna slit...
...
yeh i disgust myself .......
i feel so ashamed of myself, dont u?????? no seirously wot is that??
and no i dont really cry in the rain :p
as u can tell i am just really really really bored...
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TrueStranger
10-06-2008, 03:10 PM
Nice, but i thought tears were reserved for the night, from the prison cells in Walla Walla to the cages of Gitmo. People think you are snoring while you are actually sobbing. :skeleton:
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Güven
10-06-2008, 03:15 PM
whats with all the throat slitting? :Evil:
nice tho:thumbs_up
:w:
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-06-2008, 03:26 PM
whoah :| the first part was deep
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Ashjan95
10-06-2008, 03:32 PM
salaam
lovely
nice 1 sis hehe (thats wat am like wen i am bored hehe)
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truemuslim
10-06-2008, 03:44 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
TrueStranger
Nice, but i thought tears were reserved for the night, from the prison cells in Walla Walla to the cages of Gitmo. People think you are snoring while you are actually sobbing. :skeleton:
*sigh* i hate it wen i cant understand some people :-[
format_quote Originally Posted by
Güven
whats with all the throat slitting? :Evil:
nice tho:thumbs_up
:w:
its called a life nd death threat froma gangsta :p
format_quote Originally Posted by
IbnAbdulHakim
whoah :| the first part was deep
psh yeh deep beneath the gangstaless blud?
format_quote Originally Posted by
Ashjan95
salaam
lovely
nice 1 sis hehe (thats wat am like wen i am bored hehe)
...thank u :D
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Khayal
10-06-2008, 04:44 PM
:sl:
Good one! thanks.
:w:
.
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noorseeker
10-06-2008, 04:50 PM
nice use of commas
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truemuslim
10-06-2008, 04:54 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
nightstar
nice use of commas
:eek: OMG I USED COMMAS!!!!!!!!!
i told u i disgust my self...
time to edit. :D
tank u for noticing
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Nájlá
10-06-2008, 04:58 PM
lol^
that was a good one :thumbs_up
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noorseeker
10-06-2008, 05:04 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
truemuslim
:eek: OMG I USED COMMAS!!!!!!!!!
i told u i disgust my self...
time to edit. :D
tank u for noticing
Sorry i meant ful stops. i like how you say a few words of the sentence then you take a pause.
Dont know if you meant it like that:enough!:
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truemuslim
10-06-2008, 05:06 PM
^ yeh i kno, its supposed to be like that. lol
just dont ever notice anymore grammar things other wise i would go insane. :D
and najla, tanks yo
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