truemuslim
10-15-2008, 01:38 PM
i feel sore, all over
i open the door, start over
i feel the core, its all over
my heart hurts
my arms kill
im gonna burst
tryna stay still
my legs cant move at all
my back cant stand tall
my chance to go to mall
has gon away to .........roll? :?
my neck is in pain
my head is shattered
i feel my vien
bout to be splattered
now i regret
why i let
myself to get
toooo IT
coz i played too much
basketball nd such
too many punch (boxing?)
i did a bit
then went to sit
took a sip
from the tip
woke up sore
this time more
SOMEONE HELP ME GET TO THE DOOR!!
____________________________________________
i dont even kno ..................................:-[
hmm...
Summary: i played to much bb, soccor, lifts, boxing, etc, yesterday......
now.... my arms are sore coz of lifts
my legs,, from soccor nd bb
back coz all
head coz a headache formed
neck coz................i duno
nd my heart coz of asthma nd it wont go away :exhausted
oh yeh i do this every day but to top it off with tru soreness my brother replaced the punching bag with me....(not the poet one, he's nice, he only yells at u with his scary big voice, im talkin bout the other one, the mean one who cares bout nothing but his muscles, hair nd clothes. )
:D
assalamu alikum
nd wasalaam
ReplyIbnAbdulHakim
10-15-2008, 01:44 PM
1st 2nd n 4th stanza was nice lol
if your sore
no need for the door
relax wiv an icecream
chill till u dream
but dont even
think bout leavin
out ur salaah
while u sleepin
Replytruemuslim
10-15-2008, 01:47 PM
lool bro noway im not leaving out salah :p
thats something unmissable, wallah
:?
thank u
ReplySnowflake
10-15-2008, 04:18 PM
lol sis, ur poem is so cute mashaAllah - just like you! :D
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