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Cabdullahi
10-15-2008, 10:34 PM
'Gentleman'
Beard a little longer
Shoulders more broader
faith much stronger
Im a man now
got the devil saying, how??^o)
I had to stand up and make that vow
No exception for looking beastly
presentable at least,the days are over when i was care free
looking forward everyday..sluggishness in my steps...ha barely!
im a man now,says who????..... says 'me'
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Cabdullahi
10-15-2008, 10:37 PM
Guys just pardon me,im practicing and testing myself by posting rhymes in a thread,its the only way i will improve, through 'criticism'
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Na7lah
10-15-2008, 10:49 PM
Beard a little longer
Shoulders more broader
faith much stronger
Im a man now
got the devil saying, how??
No exception for looking beastly
presentable at least,the days are over when i was care free
looking forward everyday..sluggishness in my steps...ha barely!
im a man now,says who????..... says 'me'
i liked these parts mashallah :)
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Re.TiReD
10-15-2008, 10:50 PM
Masha'Allah akhee :)
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BlissfullyJaded
10-15-2008, 10:52 PM
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Niceness mashaAllah! :thumbs_up
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Cabdullahi
10-15-2008, 10:54 PM
thanks sisters, im gonna take a break for awhile and then back to the drawing board inshallah
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Na7lah
10-15-2008, 11:05 PM
ah u didn't hav to edit it
but i like it better now :p
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