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Re.TiReD
10-26-2008, 09:41 PM
Caged Bird



Will the misery continue till I cease to exist?
When the angel comes will I want to resist?
It’s only for Allah that I really persist…

This life…
I got no proper direction
It offers no protection
Just one lonely soul y’all
Roaming in the darkness

I need someone to guide the way
Someone to offer kindness
I don’t want to spend my days wrapped up in worldly plays
Yet I don’t want isolation, no matter what anybody says

I want to feel contentment in the things that I do
I want to feel they’re worthwhile; I want to get my due
I don’t care if it’s now or in the hereafter
Because I know where I want to go, it’s to the creator

But whilst I’m in this prison I need somewhere to spread my wings
Away from the contaminated life we breathe, I need my soul to feel at ease

Don’t want to be soaking oppression with each lungful of air,
Don’t need the barbaric torture, I know for sure its there

So do you believe me when I say, this life offers no protection?
Its misery upon misery, corruption upon corruption
Unfortunately we have nothing, with which to cancel them out
No mercy, no compassion, just enmity and doubt

I feel like a caged bird but I think I’m ready to fly
I need the wind under my wings, to see life passing by
But I don’t want to be part of that desired ‘essential beauty’
The mansion, the Porsche and the plasma screen TV

I need simple simplicity, not lavish luxury
Just me and my wings for when my Lord calls for me
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Güven
10-26-2008, 09:44 PM
s...S....SUBHAN"ALLAH! :ooh:

this is incredible Masha'Allah! :ooh:

I need simple simplicity, not lavish luxury


Just me and my wings for when my Lord calls for me
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FatimaAsSideqah
10-26-2008, 09:47 PM
This life…
I got no proper direction
It offers no protection
Just one lonely soul y’all
Roaming in the darkness
Such deep! :ooh:

Masha'Allah! I love that one.

Jazaak'Allah Khair huni.
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Cabdullahi
10-26-2008, 09:48 PM
mashallah Top notch!!!
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Patience7
10-26-2008, 09:48 PM
Mashallah sis!!
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Re.TiReD
10-26-2008, 09:57 PM
BarakAllah feekum
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-26-2008, 10:31 PM
cool rhyme sis,


but we all only cage ourself after Allah set us free
the irony of it all..
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Re.TiReD
10-26-2008, 10:33 PM
I think I get where you're coming from.

I wrote this in 2006 btw :)
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Snowflake
10-27-2008, 07:49 AM
WOW! I can so relate to being caged. You put across your feelings really well mashaAllah.
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Maymuna
10-27-2008, 09:19 AM
masha Allah excellent poem. I can so relate to it. I am starting to love this section of the forum. It is amazing how many poets we have in our midst. Alhamdulilah
:w:
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Re.TiReD
10-27-2008, 10:12 AM
Jazakumullah khayran peoples :D
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Abu Sukkar
05-11-2009, 10:36 AM
I is soooo stepping aside.

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Re.TiReD
05-11-2009, 10:43 AM
No way Akhee!

Plus you havnt shared your talent with your fellow LI'ers yet, let them be the judges insha'Allah =D
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