dead nd gone

[truemuslim]

when u think ur back alive
u start again to strive
start thinkin u'll revive
but how long u gon survive?

next thing u kno it flashes
cant even turn, it crashes
it turns to nutin but ashes

wat the hell u supposed to do?
ur faith jus dropped u nd flew
u start beggin for a real rescue
ignored u r, ur words r no value
dammit wat the hell are you?
jus sum thing nobody ever knew

ignored by the lord
yet hopin for reward
ur every sin is stored
till fire will be poured

wen u wake up to reality, u find wher truth was hidden
ur stuck wit nutin, hell or heaven
ur still in dunya, unfortunatly livin
this is wat we call, the dunya prison
the flames of hell have been risen
the magic nd jinn hav all be summoned
nutin u can imagine, everyones a villain
the view of it all cant be taken by vision
ur hearts been broke, nd thrown in ur coffin
wonderin when u'll catch up, but u've been beatin

this is ur view of the world which aint wrong
u realize all thats right nd wat makes u strong
but nutin out ther can make u quit the song
coz u jus havent realized ur dead nd gon....


....

look...censorless

[truemuslim]

bambii? :p

nah lol sounds like shia doesnt it ?

[IbnAbdulHakim]

...this is wivout a doubt...

one of the BEST rhymes ive ever read.....

[Re.TiReD]

Agreed ^ :ooh:

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[truemuslim]

^o) sent wrong message i guess


thank u? :-[

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i read it 4 times n whoah..

seriously !!!!!!!!


:ooh:..

[Re.TiReD]

^o) sent wrong message i guess


thank u? :-[

Compliments. Rates..it was good sis

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^o) sent wrong message i guess

:-[

you said what you was feeling?



n believe me i felt it too, thats what makes ur rhyme golden..

[truemuslim]

ohh so u go tthe message? that am listenin to dead nd gone right now?? dua is ignored, words worth nothing? ok nevermind then :)

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ its just a feeling sis, aint like u properly think any o that stuff


look the way i see it yeah, you cant take pictures of feelings, you cant photograph love/pain etc and so many millions of feelings

but your poem der photographed your feeling nicely

[truemuslim]

lol no i was serious


thank u :)

[IbnAbdulHakim]

lol no i was serious


thank u :)

even if u think u were serious.. its just something u felt due to your situation

bit of despair happens to people at times, mayb u were serious but

i kno u gnna keep trying and never stop inshaAllah


its what makes you a truemuslim

[Re.TiReD]

that am listenin to dead nd gone right now?? :)

Huh?

[truemuslim]

even if u think u were serious.. its just something u felt due to your situation

bit of despair happens to people at times, mayb u were serious but

i kno u gnna keep trying and never stop inshaAllah


its what makes you a truemuslim

lool no i am dead serious :-[

Huh?

lol sis, better u dont kno....:'(

[IbnAbdulHakim]

lool no i am dead serious :-[




lol sis, better u dont kno....:'(

even if u gave into anythin,

it dont make it over


aint like you lost your soul

[truemuslim]

even if u gave into anythin,

it dont make it over


aint like you lost your soul

pretty much did lose my soul :exhausted

[IbnAbdulHakim]

pretty much did lose my soul :exhausted

nope you aint


its still nicely intact, probably more so then mine