playyyyyed!

[truemuslim]

when someone gives u a gift, they cant take it back
but they give u a lift, then drop u on ur back
u really cant resist, so u try nd get em back
gettin out ur fist, aimin ther heart to black
first shot missed, tryin again, u go back

but here u are , u missed ur shot
cant get em back, regret u bought
watr u to do? in the heart they jus shot
are u theres? or have they forgot?

now here u are, tryna get over wat happened
thinkin ur heart, jus got malfunctioned
cant see if u dead yet, or still in cleveland
cant tell if ur in hell or just in england :X
but here u are back again, with ur heart just freshened
like the bright skies of the beautiful holland :-\
still u cant believ it, all that had frightened
coz now u realize part ur life jus been shortened
ur heart cant be pure again, by shaitan its been poisoned
nd everyday it gets worse whenever its mentioned
wat do u call it now? oh u got played by the diamond!

so now i told u wat this lifes about
gettin ur hopes taken out
bringing it up then straight blackout
knockin at the doors u've been locked out
tellin em u give up, its a knockout
but wat u do know? coz theres no check out...


...:-[

[Soulja Girl]

:sl:

Awesome as ever mashallah... :thumbs_up :D

:w:

[Ayesha Rana]

nice poem^^! Yeah u always end up worse of when u try an get ur own bck on sum1...strange world

[truemuslim]

thanks.
btw this sorta wasnt aimed at a "person"/human....:-[:-[:-[

notice the other ppl didnt comment coz they prolly got the message :X :-[

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[Na7lah]

notice the other ppl didnt comment coz they prolly got the message

i sure did *i wish i didn't*

but the poems nice

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i didnt get it at all :S

[truemuslim]

yo aisha u serious? lol i didnt kno its possible :p

:D tank u ungangstified ppls

[Cabdullahi]

Sister that was nice,id like to say keep writing rhymes regardless of what some guyz on LI say...keep them coming as long as you keep them islamic :)

[truemuslim]

tyyy

[Güven]

uhmm...the only word i understood was "Holland" :confused:

Anyway keep them coming lol :thumbs_upAnd please change your sig

[Na7lah]

uhmm...the only word i understood was "Holland" :confused:

Anyway keep them coming lol :thumbs_upAnd please change your sig

plz :skeleton:

[Cabdullahi]

i think sister true is the most underrated person here,come on! guys give credit where credit is due

[Güven]

noooooo, I think she is the Cooooolest Gangsta ever but uhmm...sometimes the gangsta level is getting so high that my brains cant take it anymore even for a guy like me :exhausted

[Na7lah]

i think sister true is the most underrated person here,come on! guys give credit where credit is due

Nah i know she's good, just dont want her going through that "lost and dead" phase again :-\

[Cabdullahi]

huh? lost and dead? what was that

[x-strawberry-x]

DaT IS COoL yA GIRL KEEP Em CUmmIN!!!!

stop em cummin!!

[Sabbir_1]

sik :thumbs_up