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[Cabdullahi]

im revived with the same energy and enthusiasm
as sayid qutb, im about to have a spasm
filled with rage
strong thoughts are concentrated to the small ball point of my pen, i push hard on the paper as i write pages
while my mouth out of frustration bites the index finger,
in a sorry state i cannot be blamed when im metaphorically maimed as those of my same flesh are wounded, the smell of injustice lingers
flickering -
through news channels, hands on top of my head, for 8 days on a cold face tears are trickling
walking up and down in agitation,
in soliloquyfashion
i speak to myself ''ahmed you have to do something and stop the extermination
of your siblings'',
4 year old,6 year old and just 18 months, not long ago life began on a rundown maternity ward table
what have they done for them to be labeled-
a terrorist, and then have their heads blown of, and sent to the mortuary table
lets be objective and let our opinions be candid
whats being carried out by these ritualistic and chauvinistic war mongers is not only disgusting but horrifying
,and the arab leaders are not rising simply because its not their kids who are in caskets
they want to stay on the safe side, presidential seat hungry,
who love to use power in the most useless way and who are dictatorship savvy
heartless, with animalistic desires they couldn’t care less even if it has now turned into a butchery
1.5 million people crammed in an area the size of the isle of Wight
with no food, blinding darkness caused by purposely cut of lights
antagonized and you don’t expect them to fight?
if you lock cattle in a shed and maltreat it, wouldn’t it retaliate?
and if you tried to annihilate by you approaching a female bird in its nest guarding its offspring,
wouldn’t it put its life first to protect its chick lings?
nooo we are too blind, and pre-conditioned by the many Rupert Murdoch channels lists-
that we have to choose from....thick news anchors and biased panelists
as long as these cunning Zionists are present
there won’t be peace and we wont make any deal on any instance
one language will unite us all and that is 'resistance'

[Triumphant]

Good job my only criticism is its sometimes hard to see where the verses Rhyme.

[Cabdullahi]

i dont know??,i just started writing this and i wrote too much and it got out of hand :(

[Ummu Sufyaan]

:sl:
brilliant akhee. i think you verbalized what everyone's been thinking!

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[Olive]

:sl:
brilliant akhee. i think you verbalized what everyone's been thinking!

Exactly... masha'Allah... :coolious:

[Cabdullahi]

bambi

[Re.TiReD]

This is powerful! Masha'Allah good job

[Cabdullahi]

thanks every1 may allah reward you all.......,this looks abit rusty and all over the place,its hard to keep a clean rhyming scheme through out,... when theres so much to release,so much to express