Ummu Sufyaan
05-12-2009, 07:35 AM
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I want you lot to figure this out...clue: it has nothing to do with what it seems...
you come to me beatified on a silver plate
yet cunning and burdensome, in my heart you have taken your place
a mad love I possess
to one who couldn't care less
A deluded love I confess
A love shared by the thousands
through you, iam constantly tried,
you've snatched me, its as if I've been swept by a power tide
sinking deeply underneath
a weight you are, pressing intensely upon me
to my cries (for help) you are headless
and against you i find myself powerless
a strange reaction, is it not, for a love unrequited?
and still despite my knowledge of your cunningness
I will be constantly be besotted by your beauty
and from your silver plate
your forbidden fruits I will take
a strange reaction, is it not, for a love unrequited?
begone away from me O cunning beauty
lest my deluded love (for you) destroys me
Replycrayon
05-12-2009, 05:39 PM
Love of the dunya, I'm guessing..?
ReplyUmmu Sufyaan
05-13-2009, 07:04 AM
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^yeps...but what made you think that? :)
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crayon
05-13-2009, 11:35 AM
Mainly these lines:
-A love shared by the thousands
-and against you i find myself powerless
But the whole general idea is clear, I guess.. Lovely poem, btw, mashaAllah. :)
ReplyNa7lah
05-13-2009, 03:14 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
crayon
Love of the dunya, I'm guessing..?
was gona post the same thing! lovely poem sis :shade: :thumbs_up
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