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Ansariyah
08-20-2009, 07:08 PM
Those Smiling Eyes...
lower me the skys
Dazzling like the sunrise
Overpowering me like the moonrise
Gifting me an unexpected surprise
Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
Silenced, i'm brought to appease
no tease, something is on arise
My lows, now my highs
Speechless, my soul sighs
As my heart ponders, such ease?
Can there be an un'seen paradise
When those eyes
have lowered me the skys.
author: me
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Cabdullahi
08-20-2009, 07:11 PM
nice mashallah!...........ramadan kareem
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Ansariyah
08-21-2009, 07:51 PM
thanks^ I havent written a poem in ages.
Ramadan Mubarak!
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nebula
08-21-2009, 07:55 PM
mashallah thats gd :thumbs_up
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Gubbleknucker
08-21-2009, 10:27 PM
I like it.
It makes me try to picture the eyes, but doesn't give enough information to do so, so it made my brain try about a thousand possibilities and give up, which produces a rather interesting feeling.
Of course, it's more focused on the emotion.
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Snowflake
08-26-2009, 02:26 PM
:D
I like a lot! MashaAllah you clever girl!
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- IqRa -
08-26-2009, 02:48 PM
MashaAllaah that is nice poetry.
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Sahabiyaat
08-26-2009, 02:51 PM
well dun 'nooora'! :D
me likes
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- IqRa -
08-27-2009, 01:57 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Yanoorah
Those Smiling Eyes...
lower me the skys
Dazzling like the sunrise
Overpowering me like the moonrise
Gifting me an unexpected surprise
Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
Silenced, i'm brought to appease
no tease, something is on arise
My lows, now my highs
Speechless, my soul sighs
As my heart ponders, such ease?
Can there be an un'seen paradise
When those eyes
have lowered me the skys.
author: yanoorah
So it can be read :p
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Misz_Muslimah
08-27-2009, 02:54 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Yanoorah
Those Smiling Eyes...
lower me the skys
Dazzling like the sunrise
Overpowering me like the moonrise
Gifting me an unexpected surprise
Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
Silenced, i'm brought to appease
no tease, something is on arise
My lows, now my highs
Speechless, my soul sighs
As my heart ponders, such ease?
Can there be an un'seen paradise
When those eyes
have lowered me the skys.
author: me
Mashallah sister Yaroonah :)
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Ansariyah
08-29-2009, 02:55 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
T.I.A
So it can be read :p
I felt emberrassed to make it bigger, I know u asked. I did do it actually but it looked massive, but now
u did it I dont mind.: p
Jzk to all
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Alphadude
08-29-2009, 03:01 AM
mashallah very nice poem did you write this your self? if yes your very tallented sister
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Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
^^^^ Beautiful^^^^^
excellent poem sister, really like it
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well done yanoorah although I should have to beat you up for having me strain my eyes to the point of a migraine ....
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alcurad
08-29-2009, 06:24 AM
:).
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Beardo
08-29-2009, 12:42 PM
Masha'Allah! Love the theme too!! Keep it up, and please do write some more to share.
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Ansariyah
08-29-2009, 09:53 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Gossamer skye
well done yanoorah although I should have to beat you up for having me strain my eyes to the point of a migraine ....
oops sorry my dear sis:wub:..I used the garamond font it makes it small.:embarrass
format_quote Originally Posted by
khalid84
mashallah very nice poem did you write this your self? if yes your very tallented sister
yes
jzk
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Ansariyah
07-24-2010, 01:38 PM
~*~~*bump**~~*~
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