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~Raindrop~
08-25-2009, 03:44 PM
Sinful soul

The road is rough and rugged
My legs are limping, body burdensome
Steps are forced further
Lifting with great strength
The thorns prickle and the bees sting
But the journey is necessary

So many turnings
So easy to get lost
Surrounded by so many people
Yet completely isolated
Heart absorbed in regret
No friends now
Just you and me
And me and you

I drop to the rubbly road
Now helpless and numb
Taking out my hands
My fingers shake, eyes fill up
Lips tremble.

Oh my beloved I have sinned again
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true believer
08-25-2009, 11:26 PM
nice poem, very relate-able. nice work sis, i liked it. "So many turnings
So easy to get lost
Surrounded by so many people
Yet completely isolated" my fave part :) keep em coming sis
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