View Full Version : Just One Wish...
~Raindrop~
08-25-2009, 03:42 PM
salaam all-
the following poems have been written by my beloved classmate. Respecting her wishes, I have left her name out. She is truly an amazing person, gifted with the love of Allah SWT and His Prophet SAW. She is always striving to become closer to her Beloved through many many means. These poems are a small example. Please make dua for her, myself and the Bukhari class of 08/09.
Ishqi-Haqeeqi
I have a paint pot
Full of the love of Rasool-ullah
I want to paint the walls of the earth green-
for the dome of Rasool-ullah
I want to sprinkle the clouds
With glitter, from the tears
Of Rasool-ullah
I want to cover the sea with shiny mirrors,
to radiate the reflection
Of Rasool-ullah
I want to give the birds a drum
To sing the cries of Rasool-ullah
But most of all
I want to ignite a flame
In the heart of every muslim
To burn the love of Habeeb-ullah
By A Sinful Soul
Reply
Login/Register to hide ads. Scroll down for more posts
~Raindrop~
08-25-2009, 03:46 PM
Just One Wish…
I wish I was the raindrop
That fell upon your cheek
I wish I was the stone
Upon which you stood
I wish I was the cloak
That kept you warm
I wish I was the cave
In which you fled
I wish I was the spider
That spun your web
I wish I was the one
To make you smile
I wish I was the pillow
Upon which you slept
I wish I was the sword
You held
But most of all I wish, in Uhud,
I was your defence.
By A Sinful Soul
Reply
Snowflake
08-25-2009, 04:25 PM
ooohhh mashaAllahhhh!! That is truly a beautiful poem sis. respect to your class mate. May Allah reward you both for sharing. :statisfie
Reply
Snowflake
08-25-2009, 04:27 PM
MashaAllah beautifullll!!
Ssis can you post them all on one thread please lol if you don't mind. it's easier for lazy people like me :D
Reply
Welcome, Guest!
Hey there! Looks like you're enjoying the discussion, but you're not signed up for an account.
When you create an account, you can participate in the discussions and share your thoughts. You also get notifications, here and via email, whenever new posts are made. And you can like posts and make new friends.
Sign Up
Muslim Woman
08-25-2009, 04:29 PM
:sl:
format_quote Originally Posted by
aisha
Just one wish…
...But most of all I wish, in Uhud,
I was your defence.
By A Sinful Soul
nice poem :statisfie
sis u wrote this ?
Reply
IbnAbdulHakim
08-25-2009, 06:01 PM
mashAllah beautiful poem
Reply
Hayaa
08-25-2009, 06:18 PM
A really deep poem, mashaAllah! Awesome job! =)
Reply
~Raindrop~
08-27-2009, 05:02 PM
salaam all-
i'll be posting the rest of the poems here as soon as i find the time lol.
wassalaam
Reply
~Raindrop~
08-27-2009, 05:04 PM
0ne More Beat
When his name is called
The stars twinkle and tickle the breeze
The breeze jumps with zeal
Collecting the tiny droplets of water
Which splash into the ocean
Scribbling His name.
The sparkle from the call of His name
Illuminates the dead grave
Which was once possessed by greed, envy and lust.
Is today with the touch of his name, varnished with love.
The dead eyes see my Beloved’s name on the cloth of His house
While the lover’s eyes see His name
On leaves, walls and faces too.
His name is not hollow like a thirsty, dry cave, but is sweeter and purer
Than fresh dripping honey.
When it enters the mind
The soul grips its sound and the limbs
Feel the vibe of ecstasy.
It’s like a rainbow after a rainy day
Or a splash of cold water in the scorching heat
It works faster than a dozen pain killers
And leaves behind the aroma of musk.
The lover’s eyes shed tears onto the prayer mat
The dangling beads cultivate the thoughts of their beloved
While the heart restlessly awaits
One more beat
By A Sinful Soul
Reply
~Raindrop~
08-29-2009, 03:10 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Scents of Jannah
MashaAllah beautifullll!!
Ssis can you post them all on one thread please lol if you don't mind. it's easier for lazy people like me :D
salaam
i'll be posting them on the 'True Love' poem thread in future insha Allah.
wassalaam
Reply
~Raindrop~
08-29-2009, 03:12 PM
Falaq (The Dawn)
A beam in the midst
Amongst the clouds of darkness
A ray forces itself in
Proudly the curtains reveal the light
A lamp in the shape of a man
Nature bows down
Lowering itself in humility
Animals take refuge in him
Trees take shade beneath him
A spider spins its web in admiration
Each sight turns stone to gold
The rays creep silently
Covering the shadows
Each black spot cleansed
Merely through reflection
Salvation lies in peace and submission
But not everyone finds the purpose radiant
Blessed feet- now bloody and bruised
Soft smile- smothered with stained teeth
Caring cheeks- coldly coloured purple
Yaa Rasool-ullah (saw)
May my mother and father be sacrificed for you.
(BASED ON THE BATTLE OF UHAD)
By A Sinful Soul
Reply
~Raindrop~
09-08-2009, 05:27 PM
ﻤﻥ ﻜﺍﻥ ﷲ
ﻜﺍﻥ ﺍﷲ ﻟﻪ
(Whoever becomes Allah’s
Allah becomes His)
I cannot say this pen is mine
For the fear of the love of another
You’ve engraved your name
Delicately on my heart
Now the temptation to please you
Will haunt me forever.
I desire to sit alone and ponder
To feel the burst of beats
And the pangs of hunger
While the eyes are closed
And the night is calm
You’ve shown me yourself
As the pearl beneath the ocean
Hidden beneath the world’s weed
Now I’m learning to drown
In the river of your love
I’ve searched so many minds
But none see through this window
My thoughts are so simple
Yet none but you can read the language
Of my soul.
I listen to the wind howling
And the cats competing
This love I can not contain no longer
Yet the world still continues
Banging on these deaf drums of mine
They don’t know
My world ended
When I gave myself to you.
ﻤﻥ ﻜﺍﻥ ﷲ ﻜﺍﻥ ﺍﷲ ﻟﻪ
(Whoever becomes Allah’s
Allah becomes His)
Reply
Beardo
09-22-2009, 02:12 PM
Wow masha'Allah. Deep, insightful, and beautiful. Looking forward to reading more!
Reply
very beautiful!:thumbs_up
Reply
~Raindrop~
09-25-2009, 08:51 PM
salaam
im sort of travelling between two threads so perhaps one of the mods could merge them???
jazakallahu khair in advance.
wassalaam
Reply
~Raindrop~
10-02-2009, 03:18 PM
salaam
heres another one:
The Living and the Dead
Within her, a room full of cobwebs and darkness
The stench of this barbaric world
Crispy notes, self praise and arrogance
Piled up in realms
Tools of pride and hammers of hatred
Hung up by the side
Unanimously loved and envied by all
Camouflaged in her white clean cloak
With no spec of dust or dirt.
Smacking past a weak, dusty creature
Tossed and chuckled at by every hand but one
An illusion of mist and grey
Hiding the beauty of humility,
Simplicity and reflection
Like a shell of the ocean
Whistling the whispers of glorification
Her giant in chains and her love dispersed.
This tiny tug of war
Between light and darkness
Wisely intertwined like the day and night
So that His friend may remain His alone
Undiscovered by impure eyes.
By A Sinful Soul
Reply
~Raindrop~
07-20-2010, 03:47 AM
:sl:
Here is another poem. My sincerest apologies for the (8 month :X) delay.
Please remember both of us in your duas.
I have a few more, however I think it's best not to post them all together, so the beauty of each one can be fully appreciated before the next one comes along.
Fallen from Grace
Ask the clouds to tell my story
Ask the raindrops about my tears
You were my shimmering sun
Now my eyes are veiled
And my heart is stone
I cry tears of blood
But my bowl is empty of love
I used to sip rivers of desire
Now my lips have run dry
The rainbow reminded me of your smile
But my sins washed it away
The stars reminded me of your guidance
But my sins melted them way
Oh Allah I’ve sent my salam
To the heavens
With a note saying
‘I’m sorry’ please accept my invitation
Your sinful slave is withering away.
By a Sinful Soul
Reply
~Raindrop~
07-21-2010, 05:53 AM
The Prophet SAW’s Smile
If I could travel the world
Just to see your smile I would
If I could paint your smile
I’d gather all the colours of the Earth
Your smile is located in the depths
of my mind and sealed
by the shells of my eyes
it’s more precious than the pearls
from the ocean bed
and more dazzling than the flames
from the blazing sun
When it begins to appear on your face
It’s like the opening of the horizon
At the break of dawn
I’ve never seen such beauty
I could topple the world
But nothing would compare
I could live off your smile
And breathe off its magic
Every limb of yours was created with a special touch
But your smile must have been designed with a special brush.
By a Sinful Soul
Reply
~Raindrop~
07-23-2010, 10:57 AM
Sinful Soul
The road is rough and rugged
My legs are limping, body burdensome
Steps are forced further
Lifting with great strength
The thorns prickle and the bees sting
But the journey is necessary
So many turnings
So easy to get lost
Surrounded by so many people
Yet completely isolated
Heart absorbed in regret
No friends now
Just you and me
And me and you
I drop to the rubbly road
Now helpless and numb
Taking out my hands
My fingers shake, eyes fill up
Lips tremble.
Oh my beloved I have sinned again
Reply
~Raindrop~
07-23-2010, 04:08 PM
:sl:
I would really appreciate some comments and feedback on these so I can pass it on- which should hopefully encourage my classmate to write more. :statisfie
Reply
Ğħαrєєвαħ
07-29-2010, 10:26 PM
Aslaamu`Alaaykum
Wow MashaAllaah, all these poems are beautiful, i like how they are all about the Prophet Muhammad saw and Allaah swt thats what made me want to read them all :)
Jazakallahu Khaayr for sharing, theyre a good inspiration for Brothers and Sisters to write about Allaah and his Beloved Sallahu alaayhi wa salam :)
MashaAllaah great work :)
Wa`Alaaykum Salaam
Reply
Nájlá
07-30-2010, 01:19 PM
Mashallah this sis has got talent. I loved all the poems they are so deep and I can tell they were written from the heart.
Please post some more sis Aisha and jazakiallah khayr for posting the your classmate's poems. I truely loved them. :)
Reply
Nσσя'υℓ Jαииαн
07-30-2010, 04:07 PM
:sl:
Masha'Allah sis you're so talented. Really nice poems masha'Allah :D xx
Reply
Bintulislam
08-11-2010, 11:11 PM
Excellent!can I copy this poem to my blogs notes page??
Reply
Bintulislam
08-11-2010, 11:17 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Aisha
ﻤﻥ ﻜﺍﻥ ﷲ
ﻜﺍﻥ ﺍﷲ ﻟﻪ
(Whoever becomes Allah’s
Allah becomes His)
I cannot say this pen is mine
For the fear of the love of another
You’ve engraved your name
Delicately on my heart
Now the temptation to please you
Will haunt me forever.
I desire to sit alone and ponder
To feel the burst of beats
And the pangs of hunger
While the eyes are closed
And the night is calm
You’ve shown me yourself
As the pearl beneath the ocean
Hidden beneath the world’s weed
Now I’m learning to drown
In the river of your love
I’ve searched so many minds
But none see through this window
My thoughts are so simple
Yet none but you can read the language
Of my soul.
I listen to the wind howling
And the cats competing
This love I can not contain no longer
Yet the world still continues
Banging on these deaf drums of mine
They don’t know
My world ended
When I gave myself to you.
ﻤﻥ ﻜﺍﻥ ﷲ ﻜﺍﻥ ﺍﷲ ﻟﻪ
(Whoever becomes Allah’s
Allah becomes His)
Its lovely!MashaAllah!you are so blessed with this art.Sister can you help me with poetry writing--i am unable to grasp the rhythm part.:confused:
Reply
Bintulislam
08-13-2010, 10:08 AM
where d'you go??:(
Reply
Bintulislam
08-13-2010, 10:12 AM
Marvellous! Can I plz put this on my blog's page with your name of course?? poem the sinful soul???PLZZZZ
Reply
~Raindrop~
08-17-2010, 01:55 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Bintulislam
where d'you go??:(
On a much-needed break =)
format_quote Originally Posted by
Bintulislam
Marvellous! Can I plz put this on my blog's page with your name of course?? poem the sinful soul???PLZZZZ
Seeing as I've been given full permission to post these anywhere, that shouldn't be a problem. However, I'll get in touch with my classmate to make doubly sure, inshaAllah.
format_quote Originally Posted by
Bintulislam
Its lovely!MashaAllah!you are so blessed with this art.Sister can you help me with poetry writing--i am unable to grasp the rhythm part.:confused:
Read the first post =)
I was fortunate enough to have a very talented classmate.
Reply
Bintulislam
08-19-2010, 10:58 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Aisha
On a much-needed break =)
Seeing as I've been given full permission to post these anywhere, that shouldn't be a problem. However, I'll get in touch with my classmate to make doubly sure, inshaAllah.
Read the first post =)
I was fortunate enough to have a very talented classmate.
What about the helping part?:unhappy:
Reply
syed_z
08-19-2010, 11:14 AM
No words that can be said.... this Sister is Amazing ... MashAllah.. Allah is so close to her heart...
These words cannot be said by any one, but the one who is extremely close to Allah (swt)... :statisfie
Giver her our Salaams and please pray for us ... May Allah bring Us close to Him as well...Ameen.
Reply
~Raindrop~
08-22-2010, 10:18 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Bintulislam
What about the helping part?:unhappy:
If you meant me...my poetry leaves much to be desired. If you meant the sister, I can't promise you anything =) anyway, what are you talking about??? Your poems are wicked! I could never write poetry like that.
format_quote Originally Posted by
syed_z
No words that can be said.... this Sister is Amazing ... MashAllah.. Allah is so close to her heart...
These words cannot be said by any one, but the one who is extremely close to Allah (swt)... :statisfie
Giver her our Salaams and please pray for us ... May Allah bring Us close to Him as well...Ameen.
Ameen.
Reply
Bintulislam
08-24-2010, 12:05 AM
[QUOTE=Aisha;1361656]
If you meant me...my poetry leaves much to be desired. If you meant the sister, I can't promise you anything =) anyway, what are you talking about??? Your poems are wicked! I could never write poetry like that.
If you are talking about the ONLY poem I've ever written in my life-I dun think its a perfect one sister:hmm:.Sure I can understand.
Reply
~Raindrop~
11-30-2010, 08:50 AM
:bump1::bump1:
Reply
'Aleena
11-30-2010, 09:01 AM
Assalamu alaikum,
The poems are beautiful and insightful. May Allah(SWT) bless you and your friend. Keep writing!
Reply
tigerkhan
12-01-2010, 04:57 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Aisha
Just One Wish…
I wish I was the raindrop
That fell upon your cheek
I wish I was the stone
Upon which you stood
I wish I was the cloak
That kept you warm
I wish I was the cave
In which you fled
I wish I was the spider
That spun your web
I wish I was the one
To make you smile
I wish I was the pillow
Upon which you slept
I wish I was the sword
You held
But most of all I wish, in Uhud,
I was your defence.
By A Sinful Soul
:sl:
some lines matches with these lines but in urdu.
pathar hota ma terey choukkhat ka,
tery qadmoon ko choum lia hota.
aya hota tu mery janazay pay,
tery hotay ma mar gaya hota.
tery hotay janam lia hota,
phir kbi ma tuj say mila hota.
i am wishing to go for Hujj soon insh. dont know how i see Roza-e-Ather...i wish mery rootay rootay jan chiley jae...astaany pay tery sir ho, ajal aye ho..
Reply
tigerkhan
12-01-2010, 05:05 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Aisha
ﻤﻥ ﻜﺍﻥ ﷲ
ﻜﺍﻥ ﺍﷲ ﻟﻪ
(Whoever becomes Allah’s
Allah becomes His)
I cannot say this pen is mine
For the fear of the love of another
You’ve engraved your name
Delicately on my heart
Now the temptation to please you
Will haunt me forever.
I desire to sit alone and ponder
To feel the burst of beats
And the pangs of hunger
While the eyes are closed
And the night is calm
You’ve shown me yourself
As the pearl beneath the ocean
Hidden beneath the world’s weed
Now I’m learning to drown
In the river of your love
I’ve searched so many minds
But none see through this window
My thoughts are so simple
Yet none but you can read the language
Of my soul.
I listen to the wind howling
And the cats competing
This love I can not contain no longer
Yet the world still continues
Banging on these deaf drums of mine
They don’t know
My world ended
When I gave myself to you.
ﻤﻥ ﻜﺍﻥ ﷲ ﻜﺍﻥ ﺍﷲ ﻟﻪ
(Whoever becomes Allah’s
Allah becomes His)
karti ha do alam say baygana dil ko,
ageeb cheez ha lazat aashnai ki....
Reply
tigerkhan
12-01-2010, 05:15 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
syed_z
No words that can be said.... this Sister is Amazing ... MashAllah.. Allah is so close to her heart...
These words cannot be said by any one, but the one who is extremely close to Allah (swt)... :statisfie
Giver her our Salaams and please pray for us ... May Allah bring Us close to Him as well...Ameen.
exactly same i feel for the person who write this. wallah the love of Allah SWT and Prophet is more sweet than any thing of the world.
koi asa ahal-e-dil ho, jo fasana-e-muhabat,
ma isay suna ka ruoon, wo mujy suna ka roey.....
these line refresh my love with ALLAH SWT and Prophet PBUH....dil ka zakhmoon ko cheear dia ha..
Reply
~Raindrop~
09-11-2011, 09:13 PM
Bump... .........
Reply
Hey there! Looks like you're enjoying the discussion, but you're not signed up for an account.
When you create an account, you can participate in the discussions and share your thoughts. You also get notifications, here and via email, whenever new posts are made. And you can like posts and make new friends.
Sign Up
Powered by vBulletin® Copyright © 2024 vBulletin Solutions, Inc. All rights reserved.