Thoughts on this Poem?

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Hello everyone,

I wrote this poem and would like thoughts, comments, suggestions, etc.

Thank you!


The Key
by. Latif Tanner

The*world*will*know*peace,*
only*when*the*discord*of*ignorance*
no*longer*transcends*
the*heartbeat*of*
compassion.
When the rememberance of Duaa,
Quells the tragedy of ignorance,
And suppresses*
The pull of a*
Trigger.
The world will know peace,*
When the passion for hate
Can be dissipated by understanding,
And replaced by
Unconditional
Benevolence.
Only when we are*
so quiet,
And*
so*still,*
that*we*hear
The*rhythm of our*
Own hearts, will we know*Peace.

[cihad]

its nice without all the stars

[Rabi'ya]

:sl:

nice poem mashAllah

thanks for sharing