Love poem

[Mustafa16]

Here is a love poem I wrote...I called it,,,,,,Good times


Do you remember, radiant rose?


The good times we shared?


The topics of talk, the games we chose


And how it fared?


Do you remember when work was small, and all was held


When they were tall, and our presence was felt?


Perhaps not


But we can improve our lot


Be my friend and a rain to death


As we were new to the end of death


And be my girl and smile at me


So I can smile, until I see


The end of my time, overtaking me


And the end of yours, before we enter


The garden of God…..or memories


Which fell like letters-


Letters from the sky, to future folk and their memories


And you can laugh, as I hold you near


And we will no longer have any fear


But be garments of warmth and fireplace buddies


Friends to go on, and fight the quest


And lovers to tango and giggle…..be funny


And share each other like the distance yearned


As it cried out when I sent my praises


From afar and rules of modesty


As a man needs rules but can not see


And pecks of kisses I imagine now


And your kisses, oh your kisses,oh, I want them now….


For if you do, ill give you mysoul


But if you don’t ill give you mytears


And in your role, you own my life


And can turn me to dust from myfears


And you can give me strife


But it sure is a delight to loveyou, and love you,


And even if you turn me down


I will always love you, for you’llalways hold….


The crown of attachment, in myheart, and in my soul….


my playmate, friend, and radiant rose……

[Mustafa16]

bump @sister herb if you clicked thumbs up on my poem please discuss, please don't leave me hanging! :)

[Kiro]

At first I thought it was talking about parents then it developed into something else contrary to thought...

[sister herb]

Well, it seems you have put your inner thoughts to the paper. It´s sometimes good way to clear ideas and dreams. Not bad try at this time.

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[Kiro]

bump @sister herb if you clicked thumbs up on my poem please discuss, please don't leave me hanging! :)

Anyway why write something you have not experienced yet in a halal way

that's bad research :D

[Serinity]

:salam:

Use them high testerone levels in building your body. :)

Allahu alam.

[Kiro]

:salam:

Use them high testerone levels in building your body. :)

Allahu alam.

omd it's da Serinity

I should make a love poem about you

[Serinity]

omd it's da Serinity

I should make a love poem about you

By taking advantages of testerones, one may even use them to transform one's body, and make one's weakness, into one's strength?

Too much testerones, and it gets out of control.. However, by using it to train, one can use one's weakness as a source of strength. Right?

Allahu alam.

[Mustafa16]

By taking advantages of testerones, one may even use them to transform one's body, and make one's weakness, into one's strength?

Too much testerones, and it gets out of control.. However, by using it to train, one can use one's weakness as a source of strength. Right?

Allahu alam.

Youre right, I seriously need to work out....it's just that I haven't in awhile, and I am really weak.....but I guess I need to start small... :)

[Kiro]

Youre right, I seriously need to work out....it's just that I haven't in awhile, and I am really weak.....but I guess I need to start small... :)

One push up per salah

than more when you're ready