Is this appropriate supplication?

[Nitro Zeus]

Peace be upon you,

Guys, I would like to ask you something if you don't mind. Because, I have a prayer which I'm not certain if it is permissible or forbidden. And plus, I even have my proofs from Quran and Tradition that backs up my claims.

"Oh Allah! You the Only one whom I know is Truly Capable of everything and is Most Powerful, and to You everything is piece of cake. So, can You please Make all Muslim countries to abolish child marriage since it goes against Quran 4:6 and Aisha was lady and not girl when she was married off to Holy Prophet, and can You please Make all Muslim countries to execute those who commit bestiality, incest, necrophilia and pedophilia as proof that Holy Quran is the most superior book while Bible and Torah are inferior? Because, I'm proud former Christian and now I'm Sunni Muslim and not Shia Muslim. And can You please Make all Muslim countries to practice Agreement Marriage and Arrangement Marriage and abolish Temporary Marriage? And can You please Make all Muslim countries to arrest misogynists as proof that misogyny has no place in Islam? And can You please Make all Muslim countries such as Saudi Arabia to deport those who apostatizes from Islam?"

May God reward you

[Islami.Mu'mina]

You can make dua as long as it isn't about something that goes against the law of Allah.

Your's may be a bit more controversial

Why don't you try making it more general?