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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 10:43 AM
I embrace my desire to feel the rythm, to feel connected, enough to stop deciding to weep like a widow but to, feel inspired and to fathom the power, and witness the beauty to bathe in the fountain, and to swing on the spiral of relativity and still be a human.
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 10:46 AM
The poetry that comes from the squaring off between,
And the circling is worth it.
Finding beauty in the dissonance.

There was a time that the pieces fit, but I watched them fall away.
Mildewed and smoldering, strangled by our coveting
I've done the math enough to know the dangers of our second guessing
Doomed to crumble unless we grow, and strengthen our communication.
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Sahabiyaat
04-29-2005, 10:52 AM
MasahAllah
br. u cud make ur mark in the poetry section :applaud:
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 10:56 AM
Oh look, it is in the poetry section !, MashAllah wonderful moderating lol :)
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Sahabiyaat
04-29-2005, 11:38 AM
:-[ humpf
i didnt realise okay
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MetSudaisTwice
04-29-2005, 11:40 AM
mashallah very talented bro
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Far7an
04-29-2005, 11:43 AM
Originally Posted by muslimahimprovin
:-[ humpf
i didnt realise okay
No sister, I moved it after you made your comment :)
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Sahabiyaat
04-29-2005, 11:45 AM
AHA!

there u go ;D
i knew summat dodgy happend to my post
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Muhammad
04-29-2005, 02:11 PM
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Masha'Allaah very nice poems...I liked the first one especially. Btw, I didn't know that windows weep!
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 02:12 PM
:sl:

:omg: thank you, i was meant to type "widow" , aaah.
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Muhammad
04-29-2005, 02:18 PM
:sl:

Lol, thats ok...it flowed quite well with 'window' aswell.
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 02:20 PM
just had a creative thought, maybe windows weeping could relate to the fact that its raining ! aah, thanks again :)
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Muhammad
04-29-2005, 02:23 PM
:sl:

I was also thinking...glass is actually a liquid not a solid, therefore after a very long time, the glass in a window will start to flow downwards (maybe this only happens in some glass)...therefore there IS some validity in your statement since we could think of that flowing motion as a weeping action :) I think we are thinking too much now lol.
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 02:24 PM
no no, its very good to reap the fruits of creativity.
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Muhammad
04-29-2005, 02:27 PM
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You have a very creative mind Masha'Allaah...I like that. Please show us your artwork aswell, it would be very interesting to see.
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MetSudaisTwice
04-29-2005, 02:28 PM
mashallah very talented and creative, eagerly waiting for the artwork
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 02:30 PM
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artwork? well i have my photography if you want to see that
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Muhammad
04-29-2005, 02:35 PM
Go on then, although both would be nice
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MetSudaisTwice
04-29-2005, 02:36 PM
yep bro waiting :D :D
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 02:37 PM
:sl:

dont really have my artwork in digital form, but hey, i guess i can show you the photgraphy

I apologise for the quality of these photos, it was taken with my camera phone, which hasnt even got a megapixel

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4.../Moonlight.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...y/fishtank.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...rayoflight.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...dzmedia006.jpg

thats all i have online for now, ive been trying to upload some other photos but it never responds, anyawy, just click em, they should work
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MetSudaisTwice
04-29-2005, 02:39 PM
wow bro some cool pics i love the moonlight pic, i'll keep that as my background
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Muhammad
04-29-2005, 02:55 PM
The moonlight looks like sunlight! Yes nice photos though Masha'Allaah...so is photography a seperate subject to your Art or part of it?
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Lateralus63
04-29-2005, 02:58 PM
at the moment, part of it.
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Mr. Baldy
05-02-2005, 04:33 PM
aslaam alykum,

looks like i may have competion LOL,

very good poems very philosophical,

wa alykum aslaam
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Ibn Abi Ahmed
05-02-2005, 06:08 PM
good stuff bro, but ive already seen them. Lets get some new ones :)
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Lateralus63
05-05-2005, 10:45 PM
New one :

This religon is painfully invigorating myself from the emptiness from within the shadow of a memory.
As i rise upwards to this salvation which sends me reeling onto my knees and forever tearful, competing in this priceless auction for those items which are free. As i am residing between that space between dreams and reality, i start to realise beyond which is reachable and as i stretch outwards it bends into the completion of the circle i had once began.
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Ra`eesah
05-28-2005, 09:08 AM
Assalamu'ALaykum

Mashallah these are very uniqe... unnlike the usual lymircs
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Pinkrose
06-05-2005, 02:14 PM
:sl:

Mashallah. Your very talented bro.

:w:
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Lateralus63
06-05-2005, 04:57 PM
:sl:

Well i guess since this topic was bumped allow me to take this opportunity to post one more i had written a few weeks ago :

One may start to realise the importance of interior transmutation of the things which are cracked open and flow into the very things in which they had been enclosed upon, a shell, with sonic intensity these vibrations liquify my yearning to thirst.

I dont write in lines, i dont believe that poetry MUST be structured in lines and stanza's in a way this is my own poetry, without rules and bounds, you can read more at my website , just click the link below in my signature
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Uthman
08-18-2005, 03:14 PM
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MashaAllah. :) Please do keep it up!

:w:

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Zuko
08-18-2005, 03:32 PM
Salaam,

Dude.. those are some really nice poems... Masha'allah...

Salaam
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