View Full Version : Song: Dedicated to the innocent victims of war
Snowflake
07-29-2006, 11:13 AM
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This is my sorrow...
This is my sorrow...
People dying everywhere around the world..
Innocent men and women, little boys and girls..
Little angelssss.... killed by strangerssss
Caught in wars they didn't want... facing dangers
This is my sorrow..
This is my sorrow..
When a tiny coffin's lowered in the grave
Don't they realise the mistakes they've made?
Killing children, innocent civilians
Families destroyed around the world in their millions
This is my sorrow...
This is my sorrow...
Take your wars onto the battlefields!!!!
Be Men! Leave the innocent out of your deals
Somewhere a child has just been blown apart
Was he an opponent? Don't you have a heart?
This is my sorrow...
This is my sorrow...
People dying before they've even lived their lives
The world has failed to protect them from warcrimes
Death is dancing, while the world is watching
Now where's your human rights to prevent this happening?
This is my sorrow..
This is my sorrow..
Can you see the horror and hear the painful cries?
Can you imagine when in your arms, your loved one dies?
And for what? Have you lost the plot?
All life is sacred whether your Muslim, Christian, Jew or not
This is my sorrow...
This is my sorrow...
I am almost ashamed to be a human being
There's no end to the human cruelty I'm seeing
I am sorry.. to those who've needlessly died
I am sorry for the way you lost your lives
This is my sorrow...
This is my sorrow...
:w:
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*Umm_Umar*
07-29-2006, 04:00 PM
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Very touching lyrics, did you write them yourself sis?
Fi Aman Allah.
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Snowflake
07-29-2006, 07:02 PM
Thanks sis. Yeah I did.
Gimme some feedback folks. :rollseyes
Bits u like, bits u don't, what's right abt it? What's not? There was me thinking it's good enough to get into the charts. Minus the music of course. :giggling:
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Shadow
07-30-2006, 12:14 AM
The poem was well written.
format_quote Originally Posted by
Muslimah_Sis
Gimme some feedback folks. :rollseyes
This is the Multimedia section, dont be surprised to see very little feedback.
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Snowflake
07-30-2006, 09:21 AM
lol ok. I doubt it's the section that's the prob though. Morelikely cuz it points to the plight of human suffering instead of just muslims.
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DaNgErOuS MiNdS
08-02-2006, 10:04 PM
This is good MashaAllah, I wonder how the audio would sound (non-music ofcourse) :)
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Snowflake
08-02-2006, 11:02 PM
hehe it sounds good bro.. ive made a tune for it.. its very sad.. jus waiting for Yusuf Islam to contact me ;D
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DaNgErOuS MiNdS
08-02-2006, 11:42 PM
you made tune?? how?. I want to listen to it
I think you might be on a triple platinum nasheed here :D
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Snowflake
08-03-2006, 08:34 AM
^lol... umm.. well I was doin the ironing one day and it just hit me. :giggling: :rollseyes
But how can u listen to it?
the original lyrics were better but I couldnt rhyme some words so I changed them. If you like, you can make your own and we'll edit my version.. but I def want it produced :statisfie
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searchingsoul
08-03-2006, 09:39 AM
very beautiful words
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Snowflake
08-03-2006, 10:51 AM
oh thank you so much :statisfie
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