This !

[IbnAbdulHakim]

I wrote this ages ago, but i jus realised that no-ones read it lol and ... well... :-\

this!


one day i got bored so i wrote this
only for my lord i wrote this
coz everytime i pray i think this
in a humble way i bow my head n i think this
out of fear of Allah i think this
out of Love n devotion i think this
sittin in this illusion called dunya i write this
before i get absent minded i write this
before the shaytaan whispers i write this

now listen carefully coz only love, hope u feel this,
4 Allah n rasullulah can help u reach high above, try 2 feel this
a place ur imagination cant comprehend, think bout this,
but jahannam is below so lets not pretend, dont deny this,
now where in the dunya can u experience this!
so no matta what try to avoid this!
and wallahi i pray that u get bliss!!!

AMEEN!!!

[Sum-Muslim-Gal]

:sl:

aaw mashaAllah bro thats really good!:D...the heading says it all..i like the way you end each sentence with the word'this' kinda sticks to ur head..:D..

cant rep gota spread 1st...:)

:w:

[Pk_#2]

AsalamuAlaykum :)

aww keep em cumin

mashaAllah really well written :D

tc

[The Ruler]

:sl:

masha'allah brother....a nice poem...why dont you try using metaphors...am sure you could start building a career by writing poems :happy: :thumbs_up

would have given you reps...but just gave you one on a diff post :-\

:w:

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[TheRightPathI]

Salam, hey that was pretty good. Really cool poem.:wilted_ro

[Helena]

wow......

mashalah......it certainly woke me up.....

makes moi think.....about certain things in life....

cant rep u again....

[Nσσя'υℓ Jαииαн]

aww how nice. keep em comin =D

[Sadia25]

awwww how nice it is mashaallah!! write more poems!! inshaallah!!

[Umm Safiya]

:salamext:

How cute.. Hehe.. Jazak Allâhu khayr for sharing.. :thumbs_up

[amirah_87]

As Salaamu ALaykum,

Lol Akhee, It's Pretty Good MashaAllah!! :thumbs_up

[Kittygyal]

Assalamualikum warhmathullahi warbarakathuhu

aww bless subhnallah, it's fab keep more coming inshallah :)

do me a favour remember me in your Du3'ah!

walikumassalam warhmathullahi warbarakathuhu

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jazakAllah khair for all the nice comments.

All praise is 2 Allah

:salamext:

[Pk_#2]

barak Allah fik, now post sum more pwease! :)

[amatu]

aww mashallah that was great jazakallah for sharing

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i jus write it when im bored, and i dont get bored much :p

[Pk_#2]

InshaAllah soon den? nah jkes, when possible inshaAllah, dun hesitate to post sum more, if not atleast one more hehe

Tc AsalamuAlaykum!

[peacechaser]

:salamext:

Well i advise you to always get bored :D !! Kidding..

Even when you're bored you can make that so cool and beutiful poem Jazakallah... Keep going!!