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08-31-2007, 02:59 PM
Hope you guys enjoy reading this as much as I did :)Reply
Ahmad was a teenage boy at 16 years of age. He had two older brothers and one younger sister. His parents were ones of excellent religious character who tried their best to raise their children to the standards of Islam. It was religion first then education second. They hated when other Muslim friends or family asked their children about their education without first being asked about their religious duty to Allah being performed.
Sadly Ahmad attached himself to the so-called glitter of life. He would not pray while running off to the cinema with his friends while spending time hours and hours a day talking about girls. When his parents realised of what Ahmad was doing they sat him down one evening for a very important Islamic talk.
"Ahmad, my dear son. You know I love you from the bottom of my heart. I am your father who wants best for you all as you are all my children, my flesh and blood." His father said to him in a saddened tone.
"I know." Ahmad answered without emotion.
"Ahmad. By Allah, if you don't like school you can come and work with me as long as you turn back to Allah." His father said.
"Dad! It's ok! I am 16! I have a long life ahead of me! I promise I will be good in the future!"
"My child. Did you control the timing of your own birth? Did you decide your own bodily features?" His father asked.
"No!" Ahmad answered.
"Then can He who brought you to this Earth without your consent at that exact time, take your soul at an exact time without your consent?" His father answered.
"Yes. But dad I know, I feel in my heart I will not die now!"
"My Son, before your birth you did not know that you will be born and on what time, therefore you do not know when you will be taken back to Him and at what time." His dad again answered.
"I love Allah and that is enough for Him to forgive me!" Ahmad answered.
His mother began to cry and joined in the discussion.
"By beloved son, can a parent be satisfied with a disobedient son though the son declares their love for them?" His mother asked.
"No!" Ahmad answered.
"Then the One who created the whole Universe, the supreme, the irresistible cannot be content with His slave upon creation who disobeys Him despite such a slave saying that he loves his Lord." His mother answered.
"You show your love for Allah by obeying Him and his messenger (salla Allaahu 'alayhi wa sallam)." His mother continued.
"Mother! Why is life like this? Why must I do this and do that! I don’t want to live my life in boredom trying to avoid almost everything!" Ahmad yelled out.
"Ahmad! She is your mother! Show respect! Not only that, but show respect to your creator who gave you life and gave you a wonderful mother who loves you! There are ways to have fun in Islam!" His father said sternly.
"How is Allah merciful when He sends people to Hell?" Ahmad yelled.
"Are you still alive?" His father asked.
"Yes!" Ahmad answered rudely.
"Then is that not an example of Allah's Mercy keeping you alive after you insulting The Most Gracious?" His father replied.
Ahmad was lost for words. He got up and stormed up to his room.
"You are all so boring! Why can't we be like other religions who say enjoy life to the max? I am ashamed to be who I am!" Ahmad yelled as he stormed up to his room.
Poor Ahmad, little did he know that the final count down of the last 10 days of his life had just begun…
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08-31-2007, 03:00 PM
Ahmad lay in his bed fast asleep. The time approached Salatul-Thuhur. Suddenly Ahmad woke up from the sudden shaking of his blankets.Reply
"Ahmad! Wake up!" His father called as he shook him awake.
"For God Sake! Why? It's only 1:00pm in the afternoon!" Ahmad called out as he stretched around to stare at his alarm clock.
"It's only 1:00pm?! Are you insane? Almost the whole population is out of bed, and you are acting as it is 6:00am!" His father answered in a shocked tone.
"Why are you waking me up?" Ahmad moaned.
"Because you are coming to the Mosque with me today for prayer. I want you to experience just one Prayer in your life!" His father sternly called.
Ahmad moaned as he struggled to sit up.
"Now, I will be up in two minutes with a cup of cold water to throw over you if you are not out of bed!" His father said as he left Ahmad's room.
Ahmad stormed off to the bathroom to prepare himself in a fit of rage.
20 minutes later Ahmad and his father were off walking towards the Mosque.
"Ahmad, I cannot believe you are so angry with the thought of standing before Allah!" His father said as they walked together.
"I could be at home playing my computer; instead I am tiring myself out by having to stand for 10 hours in boring prayer!" Ahmad moaned.
"Are you crazy? No Prayer lasts that long, not even half of that time! Now pull yourself together because the way you are storming down this road seems to me you are suffering from constipation!"
"Dad! Those people must have heard! Yet again you embarrass me!" Ahmad yelled.
"Embarrass you? The way you are composing yourself on this street is humiliating me, your father…Right here we are, now behave yourself for once!"
Ahmad and his father entered the Masjid. His father carefully observed Ahmad as he performed Wudu while trying to teach him the proper steps of performing it.
Ahmad finished the Wudu with the sudden expression on his face seeming as if he had been working all day hard labour!
They both entered the Prayer hall and found a place in the front row. The Muadhdhin called out 'Iqamah and everyone rose to stand in Prayer before their Lord. They all begun the Salat together with the Imam, and Ahmad stood before his Lord for the first time in his life…
During the Prayer his father heard sounds of sobbing to the left of him! It was his son! A small smile appeared on the fathers face while a sensation passed through his body with pure intentions of happiness that father and son stood side by side before their Lord in humbleness.
After the Prayer Ahamd's Father looked towards his son and smiled.
"Mashah'Allah my beloved son! You see? Is there anything more beautiful than Prayer? You even cried to Allah!"
"No, no, no! I cried because I just realised that I left my mobile at home and I promised to call Mo."
"WHAT! You ignorant little…" His father held his composure.
"You are telling me you cried because you let your friend down, while feeling NOTHING every time you let your Lord down? Let me tell you something! Allah has no need of you or any of us, so you better start acting like you need Him, because one day you WILL need Him!" His father quietly yelled.
Ahmad's father got up and stormed outside and stood beneath a large green beautiful tree. He stared towards the ground and cried. The tears rolled down his cheeks and dropped to the floor out of fear and love towards his son.
That day neither father nor son spoke to one another.
Another day gone, another day closer to Ahmad's death. Nine days remain…
08-31-2007, 03:03 PM
wow!! that was really good. yep there are ppl out there who think just like Ahmad. And what do some of them do, well they turn their back against Islam and choose other religons. may Allah help us all! AmeenReply
08-31-2007, 03:03 PM
Ahmad's Father, Muhammad, sat at the breakfast table staring down, watching the steam from his hot tea rise up into the air. Ahmad's mother, 'Aliya, approached Muhammad and sat next to him. Reply
"My beloved husband, what makes you sad?"
"It is Ahmad. I weep for him. I have had a hard life and never had the life of a proper child. I was brought up in sin and I wasted so many years of my life in which I could have spent my timing worshipping Allah. All I ever wanted is to bring up a son worshipping Allah so that I can replace what I have lost and look towards my Lord Allah on The Day of Judgment with my son in my hand and smile towards Allah showing Him, Most High, my pious son whom I have brought into this World with the permission of Allah. Look what we have done! We have only turned towards Allah now in our lives and our son is lagging behind! What if he died now and goes to Hell? How can I live with that guilt…My son, my son!" Ahmad's father suddenly burst into tears. Ahmad's mother could not herself hold back the tears and both husband and wife comforted each other.
Two more days have already passed and Ahmad has only seven days to live.
Ahmad lay on his bed, ear phones in his ears listening to music, magazine in his hand, eyes and mind focusing on sinful star signs.
Hours pass. The sun begins to set. Ahmad jumps off the bed and prepares himself for the night out with his friends. He runs downstairs and is immediately confronted by his mother who is blocking the front door.
"Mum! What are you doing?!"
"I am stopping you from leaving the house! It is almost 9:00PM and we are about to eat dinner together!"
"What! I made a promise to Mo that I will meet up with him tonight!" Ahmad screamed.
"It is late and we need to eat dinner. Why is it your brothers and sister are so obedient and not you?"
"Because I have a life and they don't!"
"How dare you? They worship Allah; they are doing well in their life…Look at you Ahmad! Cant you see what you are doing to yourself?!"
"Move!" Ahmad screamed as he moved forward towards his mother.
With his elbow, he knocked into his mother pushing her over. She fell to the side knocking her shoulder against the wall.
"Ya Allah forgive my son, forgive me son!" 'Aliya burst into tears holding her shoulder. Ahmad's father ran towards the front door to comfort his wife. Before he could say anything to Ahmad, he had already run down the street towards his friends. Ahmad's father sat down holding his wife in his arms, who had already collapsed from the pain and sadness of what her own son had done to her.
'Aliya stared straight into Muhammad's eyes, tears rolling down her cheeks, eyes red with pain.
"Why? Why? I will die to save my son for the sake of Allah. He is a part of me and a son whom I love. What he has done to me is like removing my heart from me. I love him ya Allah! Guide him and protect him…" 'Aliya again burst into tears.
Ahmad's father could not listen to those words without feeling his heart break into two.
Little did Ahmad know that in Islam whoever harms their mother, Allah sends punishment straight away upon them…
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08-31-2007, 03:05 PM
Originally Posted by chaste
But I haven't finished telling Ahmeds story yet :)
Sorry I am giving it in parts to avoid 1 long thread which every avoids reading :-\
08-31-2007, 03:08 PM
Ahmad ran down the road towards his friend Mo. Reply
"Yo Ahmad! Where were you?!" Mo called out as Ahmad ran towards him.
"Ah! It's my parents again! They filled my ears again with all that religious rubbish."
"Haha! Don't they have a life? I mean, Allah says He is forgiving, so as long as we believe in Him we will all go to Paradise as long as we don't harm other people!" Mo spoke without knowledge.
Mo and Ahmad continued down the road towards the local nightclub they usually attend…
Little did they know that a police chase was actually taking place just a few minutes drive away from where Mo and Ahmad were!
Five police cars continued to pursue a stolen car that headed directly towards the road Mo and Ahmad were heading. As Mo and Ahmad joked along the road they heard the sound of several sirens heading towards them.
One hundred meters away from the two, the stolen car traveling at 40mph lost control and smashed into a parked car, skidded to the other side of the road towards Mo and Ahmad…
Mo screamed as he jumped out of the way while Ahmad hesitated. The car kept on skidding towards the two and only managed to knock Ahmad with its side, thumping him with enough force a couple of yards down the road. The side of Ahmad's body collided with a brick ball and he lay motionless on the ground. Mo screamed as he ran towards his best friend.
"Oh my God! Don't die on me!" Mo screamed in panic as he tried shaking his body.
Police officers ran towards Mo and pulled him away afraid of him causing more harm on the motionless body of Ahmad.
A few Police officers attended Ahmad while a few others arrested and restrained the criminal.
Mo ran towards Ahmad's house in a panic. He ran up to the house and frantically hammered on the front door.
Ahmad's father opened the door in confusion.
"Mo? What happened?!" Ahmad's father said in a worry.
"It's Ahmad! He's had an accident!" Mo screamed out, almost out of breath.
"Bring me to him quick!" Ahmad's father said as he quickly put his shoes on. Ahmad's mother quickly followed.
Ahmad's father and Mo approached Ahmad, and this time he was surrounded by a couple of paramedics.
"Is he going to be alright?!" Ahmad's father asked one paramedic.
"He is unconscious at the moment and is suffering from a dislocated shoulder. We need to get him quickly as possible to the hospital to give him an urgent brain scan to see for any damage or clots to the brain."
Tears rolled down Ahmad's fathers cheeks.
Ahmad's father and mother approached the ambulance in which Ahmad's unconsciousness body on a stretcher was in.
"I want to come!" Mo called out to Ahmad's father.
"No. Just go home and ponder on what has happened tonight and think to yourself why this has happened!" He answered.
The ambulance doors were shut by one of the paramedics, and the ambulance then proceeded to head quickly towards the hospital transporting Ahmad and his worried parents.
All was quiet as Mo stood there, listening to the sirens fade away in the distance, watching police detectives investigate the scene of the accident.
Mo turned around and headed not towards his home, but to the nightclub where he and Ahmad were planning to go all along.
"…Why should I bore myself at home? No one is going to stop me from enjoying this night I already planned with poor Ahmad…" Mo thought to himself as he headed towards the nightclub…
08-31-2007, 03:08 PM
Wow subhanAllah ...continue..Reply
imsad :( :'(
08-31-2007, 03:10 PM
Both Ahmad's parents sat around his hospital bed as he lay there unconscious. Reply
Suddenly Ahmad's eyes began to flutter, and then after a minute his eyes slightly opened.
"AllahuAkbar! My son! How are you feeling?!" Ahmad's mother asked as she bent over holding her son's hands with hers. Tears began to roll down her cheeks.
"…When I saw that car coming towards me…I thought that was it…I was going to die…" Ahmad quietly said.
"How long were you waiting here?" Ahmad asked.
"About 11 hours. We made Salat in this room." Ahmad's father calmly said.
"…My parents stayed up for me all those hours and continued their worship too Allah. I can't even sit down with my parents for a minute without having to do something that Allah hates…" Ahmad thought to himself.
Suddenly tears pored from his eyes. Ahmad's father cuddled him and asked, "What makes you cry Ahmad?"
"Em…Not sure…Just happy to be alive?" Ahmad answered rather confused embarrassed to tell his parents how he was feeling.
After two days in the hospital, Ahmad was released. His left arm was supported in a sling so the shoulder could recover after the dislocation it suffered. That night while Ahmad lay in bed resting, his friend mo called him up.
"Ah Ahmad! I heard that you are safe back at home, that's why I decided to call you up." Mo said on the phone.
"That's nice." Ahmad answered.
"Listen Ahmad. Since that night was messed up and you could not go to the nightclub, do you want to come down tonight? I was so angry when you had that accident! You should have seen the girls I chatted up at the club when you were brought to hospital!"
"Mo. To be honest, I really don't want to go. Say if this is a warning from Allah?"
"Warning?! Are you mad?! Don't tell me you are becoming an extremist! You know they have the most boring of lives!"
"They may have a boring life now, but they sure have everything when they die!" Ahmad answered.
"Come on Ahmad! We are Muslims! We will go to Heaven. Ok, we might be punished in Hell for a little while, but we will all eventually go to Paradise, so what is there to worry about? Besides, Allah is merciful! He said if you believe, He will forgive you!" Poor Mo spoke without knowledge.
"Hmm. I don't know. Let me think about it. Surely not tonight as my arm is still in a lot of pain, but tomorrow I will give you the answer."
"Ok. Don't forget to call me tomorrow! I have to now sit down in this boring house and listen to my father reading Qur'an. Man! They have such a boring life; I don’t even know how they can smile!"
After the phone call Ahmad sat down on his bed in shock. This is the first time for Ahmad to let down an offer out of fear of what Allah can do to him! Ahmad tried holding back his tears.
"…How can Allah ever love me? Look what I have done. I have never committed a minute of my patience and time for Allah. I have physically hurt my mother and yet she still loves me. How can Allah ever forgive me...?" Ahmad thought to himself.
Another night has passed, and only 4 days until the appointed time of his death.
The next day Ahmad's arm was still in a lot of pain. Ahmad rejected Mo's offer in going to the local nightclub that night. Ahmad spent the whole day thinking about life…
Days pass and now we enter the final day of Ahmad's life…
Nobody knows, not even the angels of death.
The day is Thursday. Ahmad wakes up early after having a bad dream. Fortunately his arm is out of the sling.
Ahmad slowly goes down the stairs and sits at the kitchen table. No-body seems to be at home. He finds his fathers work on the table. He picks up his work to move it to the desk. As he is carrying his fathers work a small diary accidentally falls on the floor. After his father's papers had been put back carefully, Ahmad curiously opens up his father's small diary, and there written on the front page are the words of Allah from Qur'an:
""Oh my servants who have transgressed against themselves (by committing evil deeds and sins)! Despair not of the mercy of Allah. Truly, He is the Oft-Forgiving, Most Merciful." (39:53)"
Ahmad suddenly burst into tears. His hands begin to shake and his vision becomes blurred. He flicks through a few pages and reads the following:
"…I was away from Allah. I sinned against my soul. Far away was I from Allah. I turned to Allah and then fell into sin again when my two sons were born…" Ahmad flicks through more pages and what he reads shocks him even more…
"…My little Ahmad, my third son. He is five years old now. It is him who turned me back to Allah. He saw me once watching tv and asked, "If a Sheik came into the room and saw you, what would you do?" I answered, "I would quickly turn off the tv". My son answered me back, "But baba! Allah is watching you all the time and He is more pure than all the Sheiks in the World!" My mouth dropped. I felt disgraced with myself. I turned back to Allah, vowing to keep my duty to Allah. My wife 'Aliya also made the vow…" Ahmad continued to read on…
"…My Ahmad has mixed in with the wrong crowd. I see him moving away from his religion. I have failed. My son changed me by the will of Allah. How can I change him? What of my actions will make my son turn back to Allah?..."
Ahmad closed the diary, tears rolling down his face. Ahmad got hold of a pen and paper and wrote down the following:
"My Father. I have read your diary. I changed you when I was a child through my questioning by the will of Allah. Your words of your diary have turned me back to Allah by His will and Command." Ahmad slipped the page into his father's diary on the last page he had read.
Ahmad got up and for the first time on his own he performed Wudu. Ahmad put his clothes and shoes on and walked towards the masjid.
Unfortunately little did Ahmad know that Mo, his friend, was going to take the same road as him! Will Mo influence him back to the road to Hell? Can Ahmad influence Mo to the road towards Paradise? Will Ahmad continue on the road he is on?
08-31-2007, 03:12 PM
Ahmad felt pure. A feeling of a happiness that is indestructible; and this happiness is one that can only be felt after doing a deed pleasing to Allah while continuing on a right path. Reply
Ahmad walked down the street listening to the birds around chirping, praising Allah in ways He (Allah) knows best.
Suddenly Mo came around the corner unexpectedly.
"Ahmad! So good to see you again!" Mo called out.
"Where are you off too?" Mo asked.
"Well…I…To be honest Mo, I am going to the Masjid."
"What!!! Are you mad?! That place?!"
"Listen Mo. You won't understand until you open your eyes."
"And are your eyes open?"
"I am at least trying."
"Ha! You can live your life in boredom Ahmad, but at the end of the day, some day I will be in the same Heaven as you, and then you will regret not having fun now."
"Mo! How are you so sure of entering Paradise?"
"Yes! Because Allah and His Prophet (saws) said."
"We are in no situation to start interpreting Hadith Mo. Anyway, do you really think that the people of Paradise will regret not doing sinful things? In fact it would be the complete opposite."
"I cannot believe you have gotten brainwashed Ahmad. But I know a way to change your mind…" Ahmad smirked towards Mo and quickly ran off.
"…Oh no! What is he up too..?" Ahmad thought to himself.
Ahmad continued on towards the Masjid.
As Ahmad walked towards the doors of the Masjid, the hairs on his body stood on end.
"…This is it…" Ahmad said to himself as he opened the door of the Masjid and entered.
Inside was empty. Inside was very quiet. Ahmad walked over to the corner of the Masjid and sat down facing the Qibla.
"Ya Allah! Forgive me! I am so scared of you now. I have done so much that you hate, yet you did not take my soul…" For two whole hours Ahmad cried and spoke to Allah. Tears streamed down his face. In fact, he cried so much the carpet beneath his face was wet with tears.
Time past on. Suddenly the local Sheik entered the room and spotted Ahmad. He stood for a moment listening to Ahmad's Du'a. He was so moved by it, his eyes began to shed tears. He slowly approached Ahmad and carefully comforted him. Ahmad jumped slightly.
"Oh Sheik…I…I am sorry for…" Ahmad said embarrassed, but before he could finish the Sheik said:
"Ahmad. It's ok. I see that you feel embarrassed, but that is good. It is better to be embarrassed than one who shows off." The Sheik said as he smiled towards Ahmad.
"Your father and mother would be really proud of you. But most and best of all, you have submitted your whole self to Allah." The Sheik continued on.
"I angered my parents oh Sheik. How can I make them happy?" Ahmad said.
"You have already made them happy when they see you now. Your father is very proud of you."
"I mean, I want to get them something nice, as a gift."
"Hmm. Well, you can get your mother some flowers or chocolate, and your father some perfume maybe?"
Ahmad smiled and said, "Wonderful idea. I will do that."
"Here." The Sheik said as he handed Ahmad two small pieces of paper and a pen.
"Write a small message to each of your parents and stick it on the gifts when you buy them." The sheik said.
Ahmad began to write down small messages to his mother and father on the separate pages.
"Jazak Allah Kher Sheik. I cannot wait to get back and see my parents smile!" Ahmad said ecstatically as he got up.
"Barak Allah Fekum Ahmad! I cannot wait for 'Ishah prayer tonight to see you and your father come Inshah'Allah!" The Sheik replied smiling.
"You will see us both Inshah'Allah!" Ahmad answered.
Ahmad gave the Sheik a big hug and began to make his journey towards some local shops.
Ahmad spent some time selecting some gifts for his parents with the money he got. He managed to buy some lovely perfume for his father and a delicious box of chocolates for his mother. After buying the gifts he stuck the small messages on them and prepared his blessed journey home.
Time ticks away…Not a single Human or Jinn on this Earth has realised that Allah has just ordered the Angels of Death to prepare to take a few peoples soul including Ahmad's…!
Ahmad begins his journey home still constantly seeking Allah's forgiveness…Mo with a half dressed girl in his arm spots Ahmad from a distance and smirks making his way towards Ahmad preparing to perform his disgusting sinful plan…A pious elderly Muslim lady prepares to cross the road…Ahmad begins to cross the road…Mo quickly runs to the centre of the road and calls out, "Yo Ahmad! Look at the chick I got for you! She can be yours right now!"
"…Oh no! Ya Allah help me…!" Ahmad says to himself trying his best to keep staring towards the ground, knowing that his weak point are women…The pious elderly Muslim lady begins to cross the road…And then death prepares to strike from all angles!!!
08-31-2007, 03:16 PM
Ahmad stares to the ground and continues to cross the road…Shaytan senses the presence of death and rushes towards his enemy, Ahmad.Reply
"…Look at the woman Ahmad! She is beautiful! Look at her to get rid of your satisfaction..!" Shaytan whispers into his ear.
Suddenly a truck several yards from the group automatically looses control. A loud screech is heard from the group as they turn around and spot the truck skidding towards them! Ahmad sees that the pious Muslim elderly Sister is in the line of collision! He drops the bags and rushes towards the Sister.
"…By Allah, if I am going to do something for Allah, I will save this Muslim Sister to make Allah happy..!" Ahmad says to himself as he rushes to her and pushes her out the way. In those moments the truck smacks into Mo and the girl he is with knocking them flying into the air. Next in line is Ahmad. Ahmad manages to push the elderly Sister out of the way but is caught up in the collision. Within seconds all three teenagers are lying in pools of blood.
"Oh Allah…I am scared…I don't want to die like this…I did not even do my full five prayers yet…I did not fast..." Ahmad slowly says as tears roll down his face. Blood pours from the side of his body and skull.
The collision made enough sound for people to rush out of their homes. Even the Imam of the local Masjid came rushing out. The Sheik spotted Ahmad in the distance and ran towards him as fast as he could.
"Ahmad!" The Imam calls out as he rushes towards him taking hold of his bloodied hand.
"Pronounce Shahada!" The Imam calls out.
Suddenly a strange cold breeze is felt by Ahmad. In confusion he looks up and what he sees is something he could have never imagined in his life.
Two groups of astonishing angels begin descending from the sky. One group shining like the sun. Wings spreading as far as the eyes can see. A radiating beauty spreading from their faces and bodies, with comforting arms stretching forth. The other group on the other hand, have faces and bodies dark and terrifying, faces of extreme horror. Sounds of thunder bursting from their mouths carrying tools of torture within their hands.
" Lah He Lah Ha Ilallah!" Ahmad begins to call out.
The Imam smiles, tears rolling down his face. He spots sweat appear upon Ahmad's forehead. The Imam knew that one who dies with sweat upon the brow is a good sign.
Ahmad still has no idea which groups of angels are going to whom. Suddenly Ahmad feels a relief that no human can ever feel in this life as he realises that the angels of extraordinary beauty are looking at him!
Ahmad raises his hands towards theirs, wanting to get away from the pain.
"No more crying Ahmad. Come to us. We are your friends. We love you so much Ahmad. We will look after you and care for you until you meet Allah who is very happy with you!" The angels call out as their hands come into contact with Ahmad's. Slowly they take Ahmad's soul more gently than a caring mother lifting her new born child.
Tears flow down the cheeks of Ahmad as he is left in absolute shock of what he is seeing. He spots an unbelievably looking cradle like bed made of a beautiful light of different colours being carried by one Angel. As the Angels slowly place his soul into the cradle, another Angel sprinkles a beautiful smelling musk never smelt by man upon Ahmad. Like little twinkling stars, they slowly fall upon Ahmad like small colourful snowflakes.
While Ahmad is being treated to this death of honour, the other group of terrifying Angels of torture headed towards Mo and the girl he was with!
Like a skewer being ripped through wet cotton wool, the Angels tear away at Mo's and the girl's soul. The Angels with Ahmad prevent him from hearing the screams of the two so that he can be at peace as much as possible.
"Oh Allah no! Please! I am a Muslim, I am a Muslim!" Mo screams as the Angels of punishment rip his soul out, veins and arteries dangling from his body.
"Muslim?! Do not degrade the name of Muslim! You disobeyed Allah and you lived in denial of Allah's punishment! Now you will suffer for now and forever!" The Angels scream out to him in thundering voices as they throw his and the girls soul into a bed of dark black fire.
"May Allah curse you Mo! You guided me to this! May Allah give you a double punishment!" The girl screams out as her flesh and bone is left exposed as she burns slowly and agonisingly in the bed of fire.
"I did not force you to sin! You came to me willingly!" Mo cries out.
"Quiet! Save your arguments for The Day of Judgment!" The Angels scream out to them.
Both Mo and the girl look up and spot Ahmad.
"…If only I listened to Ahmad on the road I may have been with him now…" Mo says to himself as tears pour from his eyes from both the agony and the regret.
08-31-2007, 03:17 PM
"Ya Rubb! How can this be so beautiful in what I am seeing?!" Ahmad says as tears roll down his face.Reply
"Oh Ahmad! You have seen nothing yet. We have not even come close to the Doors of Eternal Beauty!" The angels call out to him as they begin their ascent through the Seven Heavens.
Up they rise, faster than the speed of light. A beautiful wind gushes upon the face of Ahmad as he sits within the casket of beauty. He looks around in absolute amazement as he passes each of the Seven Heavens, and he notices that the next one he enters seems to be more beautiful than the last! Comfort indescribable sets in the soul of Ahmad, a feeling of happiness completely protected against any speck of sadness or worry.
On the other hand, Mo and the girl burn continuously in the garments of fire as the Angels of punishment bring them up through the Seven Heavens. The pain and torment they experience are so bad that they are unable to view the spectacular scenery surrounding them. Every nerve within their bodies is afflicted with agony beyond imagination. Their bodies are prevented from going into shock; no end to the pain; continuous tears pour forth from their dark reddening eyes.
"Ya Allah! If I truly knew death was this bad I would have been your best servant! Please Allah! I now know! Please send me back and I will be the best!" Both Mo and the girl scream out.
"No more sound from you! You said you were Muslims yet you did not obey Allah! You were warned by your family yet you did not take heed! You knew about Hell and the punishment from Allah yet it did not scare you to turn back to Him! This is your reward for choosing the life that you wanted! You fell for your desires and you did not want to sacrifice the sinful fun for pleasing Allah! Now you will face the pleasure for the sinful; Hell will be your abode! Now you will soon see the pious enjoying their lives within the Garden of Eternal Delight! See then and tell me what the real entertainment is; the pleasure of the World that is now gone from you forever, or the pleasure of Paradise that will last forever! See then and tell me who are those who show true happiness; those sinful people on this Earth looking to seek pleasure while the pious cry to Allah, or those who used to cry to Allah now dwelling in Gardens of Eternal Delight while those who tried to seek pleasure on this Earth now screaming for eternity in the depths of Hell-Fire!" The Angels call out, each word sending shivers down the spines of Mo and the girl.
"But the pain is too much! I cannot bare it no more! Please take away some of the pain!" The girl screams out.
"Pain?! You have not even felt pain! You have seen nothing yet! For you the terrors of the Grave await you! For you, the horrors of the Day of Judgment are approaching! And for you, the final resting place of a pain and terror beyond your wildest imagination awaits. It is Jahannam, the final abode for the disobedient servants of Allah who underestimated His anger and punishment!"
Back on Earth the parents of each of the youth who passed away help in the preparation of the burial and the washing of the dead.
As an honour from Allah to Ahmad, Allah placed noor (light) within the face of Ahmad's dead body and a smile that spread across his face. Each person who saw a glimpse of his face was left amazed at the sight.
"Inshah'Allah this is a good sign from Allah." Ahmad's father says as tears roll down his face.
"I am sure it is, Inshah'Allah." The Sheik of the Masjid says as he stood next to Ahmad's father.
Far from noor, the faces of both Mo and the girl were disfigured. Their faces suffered major trauma from the accident, but little did people know that this was from Allah as a curse upon their bodies.
The first to be led to Salatul-Janaazah was Ahmad. At the front row Ahmad's father stood along with the rest of his children. The mother stood far at the back along with the rest of the Muslim Sisters. Amazingly that day, literally hundreds of pious Muslims with big beards and Islamic clothing came to pray Salatul-Janaazah for Ahmad. Ahmad's father Muhammad turned around in absolute astonishment as he watched crowds of Muslims trying to squeeze in for a space in Prayer. Muhammad was so moved by what he saw and thanked Allah continuously in his heart for allowing so many Muslims attend, tears poured from his eyes.
In fact, there were so many pious Muslims that day, Salatul-Janaazah had to be repeated three times to allow those who waited outside to come in and make the Salat. Again, almost no body knew that this was another honour from Allah towards Ahmad…
As for Mo and the girl, there was a surprisingly major setback in sorting out the death certificates etc, therefore preventing both of them being buried on Friday. Yet again, almost no body knew that this was another humiliation upon them for their disobedience towards Allah.
"AllahuAkbar!" The Imam calls out for the start of the first Rekk'a of Salatul-Janaazah. A feeling of fear and love of Allah passes through the air and through the hearts of the Muslims within the Masjid without them knowing, as Angels within the room constantly make Du'a towards Ahmad asking Allah for mercy, forgiveness and reward upon his soul. The only sign upon this Earth of this happening was the feeling of absolute concentration and crying towards Allah as the Muslims stood in Salat.
As these Muslims prayed towards Allah to ask Him to have mercy upon Ahmad, the angels with Ahmad already arrived to the Seventh Heaven and had his book written down in 'Illiyun and back to Earth they headed. While those on Earth prayed for Ahmad, he was being treated to a death of honour, and yet an honour greater than this awaits him.
After Salat Muhammad turned around to the Sheik and asked with tears still in his eyes, "What about Mo and the girl?"
"There is a delay with their death certificates. The time the parents are finished sorting that out, the burial most likely will be on Saturday. Anyway, let us get going to the burial site." The Sheik says as he compassionately takes Muhammad's arm and guides him to the car…
The Angels with Ahmad have now come back to Earth, and the soul of Ahmad waits over his dead body. The body has now arrived to the burial ground. There, before Ahmad's eyes is his own burial spot. Radiating light of different colours spring forth from his grave. Sounds similar to that of a miraculous waterfall and the falling of leaves can be heard in the distance, but the beauty of the sound multiplied thousands of times more than that of Earth. The smell from the foods of Paradise can be smelt from the distance; from food that cannot even be imagined or created upon this Earth.
"Please, please, let me get into my Grave!" Ahmad screams out in extreme excitement.
"Ahmad! Be patient, for I cannot even imagine how you will act when you set foot within Paradise!" The Angels say to him smiling.
Ahmad is in so much excitement and so determined to get within his grave, that this even has an impact upon his dead body!
As his body is carried towards the grave by his grieving father and other members of his relatives, the dead body becomes awfully light!
"SubhanAllah! My son's body seems so light!" Muhammad says.
"Mashah'Allah. Those who are pious, their dead bodies seem light since the soul wants to get into the Grave, while that of the disbeliever and the disobedient, their bodies seem heavy since the soul does not want to enter the grave because of the horrors of what they see." The Sheik says.
The closer Ahmad gets to his Grave, the greater his anticipation and happiness becomes. With all the joy he is experiencing, he does not even notice the surrounding events taking place!
The final time Ahmad's dead body will see the light of day has now come. Muhammad gets inside of the grave along with the local Sheik. For the last time upon this Earth Muhammad takes his son in his arms and carefully positions him down into the grave. For the last time on this Earth, Muhammad looks into his son's eyes and stares at him. The Sheik spots the tears developing in Muhammad's eyes, his body beginning to shake with the sadness.
"Muhammad. Keep firm and patient." The Sheik says to him quietly and calmly.
"Yes Inshah'Allah, but words cannot describe the feeling of burying my own son."
"This is Qadr of Allah and this is surely a great test. Keep firm upon the path of the Sunnah and Qur'an and you will meet him again face to face, Inshah'Allah."
If only his father sees the state of Ahmad now, he will surely smile and cry out of absolute happiness. Little does everyone know that Allah is going to send a sign upon them all of the condition and state of Ahmad!
08-31-2007, 03:19 PM
Slowly the soil of the ground is thrown over the body of Ahmad. Minute by minute the hole of the grave begins to fill. Family, relatives and friends watch down in sadness, some crying out of grief, others crying out of fear that one day they will be in Ahmad's situation, dead.Reply
They all sit around Ahmad's grave until the time appointed. As they walk away, Ahmad's soul is instantly taken up outside the Gates of Paradise. There before him is the most magnificent doorway he has ever seen in his life. The size of it is beyond the imagination of any human being. Larger than a galaxy, made out of magical gold and silver bricks, a light of honour glimmering continuously from the gates. The gates prevent any eye in seeing the other side while all that is smelt and heard are the smells and sounds of Paradise beyond. Smells of unbelievably beautiful musk spreads forth from the gates of Paradise, while the sounds of magical water, the chirps of animal's unheard of and other sounds unrecognizable to the ear can be heard. Magical walls beyond beauty spreads further than the eyes can see on both sides of the gate.
A smile spreads across the face of Ahmad while a feeling of incredible excitement enters his soul.
"Please let me in! I would love to see what is beyond those gates!" Ahmad calls out.
"Be patient Ahmad, for you will one day be allowed to enter those gates, for the gates and walls you see are the beginning of a Paradise wider than the Heavens and the Earth. A size you cannot even imagine, a size you will never be able to perceive even when you step foot into Paradise. It is a land where your dreams will come true; a land where no sadness or boredom is ever felt; a land where only desires and happiness are fulfilled; ask, and you will be granted; walk the lands of Paradise and forever you will come across things beyond your imagination.
Oh Ahmad. Prepare yourself for you have not even seen beauty. Prepare yourself for a land of unbelievable joy.
But now prepare your eyes for the greatest of beauty, a beauty beyond magnificence. Prepare yourself for the day you meet the Creator of all, Allah Subhanahuwata'aalah who is well pleased with you." The angels call out.
Shivers passed along the spine of Ahmad when he heard those words.
"I cannot wait to meet Allah! But I am so ashamed to meet Him because of the bad things I have done." Ahmad says.
"Do not fear Him now and do not be shy, for Allah is also looking forward in meeting you Ahmad." The angels call out.
"AllahuAkbar!" Ahmad screams out as a feeling of mixed emotions of extreme happiness and extreme anticipation enters his soul.
The angels with Ahmad follow on in the praises of Allah, until all angels around begin the glorification of Allah, until the sound of praise begins to shake the ground beneath, the words passing through the air like a soothing wind.
Back on Earth Ahmad's father and his wife prepare for bed. Both kept very silent that night, only making continuous Du'a to Allah.
The next morning at Fajr time, Muhammad rises from his sleep smiling and in what seems to be, a very excited state.
"'Aliya! 'Aliya! Wake up!" Muhammad shouts out shaking his wife waking her up.
"Ahmad!" 'Aliya surprisingly calls out as her eyes open up.
"I dreamt of Ahmad in a beautiful kingdom!" Muhammad says excitedly.
"What?! AllahuAkbar! I dreamt of the same thing!" 'Aliya calls out.
"This could be a good sign!" Muhammad says.
Moments later the phone rings. Muhammad picks it up only to find the Imam of the local Masjid on the other side of the line.
'Aliya looks into the eyes of her husband and notices his face light up with even more happiness and hope.
After a couple of minutes Muhammad puts down the phone and tells his wife the amazing news. The Imam had the exact dream as Muhammad and 'Aliya! After they made Salat and for the past hour, phone calls poured in from relatives and friends. Allah has made Ahmad as a good example to all, and has made all those who knew him to dream of his good condition in the Hereafter.
That day, Mo and the girl were buried. Very few turned up to their burial, not even their own parents...
"No more pain! Please!" Mo screams out.
Mo and the girl watch on in terror as their bodies approach their burial grounds. From the depths of their graves they watch on in terror as thousands of hideous and grotesque insects pour into their grave. Inside their grave scorpions the size of a small baby with long spidery legs six foot in length scuttling along the ground can be seen by only the dead.
Black snakes well over 20 foot with the most terrifying face ever imaginable with dozens of large sword like teeth are also present. Thousands of large wet worms with hundreds of spiny legs embedded along the side of their bodies squirm around only to cause sever pain with the bites from their small jaws and the prodding of their spiny legs.
Mo and the girl scream in absolute terror as their bodies are placed within their graves. The insects force their way into their mouths crawling down their throats. Some insects are so large that Mo and the girl's mouth are forced open so wide that their jaws end up breaking and their cheeks tearing. Their screams continue and then begin to gurgle in their own vomit as the insects crawl down their throats. Some worm like creatures begin to eat their way back out of their throats, while others continue down into their stomach only to burst out of their abdomen. The large scorpions dig their claws and poisonous stings without mercy into the eyes and face of Mo and the girl. Each time the flesh, sinew, and muscle is torn off from their bodies; it is only replaced again and again so the pain never ends. After a while, that felt like a lifetime for Mo and the girl, the insects scuttle off. Suddenly the walls of their grave begin to slowly close in on them. They scream in absolute terror and panic as the walls of their graves slowly crush them to almost death. Their shoulder blades slowly come together in a sick crunch as their own stomach and insides pour out from their mouths and nose.
After the Crushing of the Grave, Mo and the girl, each one alone, in a separate dark "room" watch on in terror as Munkar and Nakeer approach them at the same time. After the Questioning of the Grave, and the torture from the blind, death and dumb one, the "room" automatically turns into a torture chamber beyond imagination.
Mo screams in terror as angels in horrifying forms approach him carrying large iron nails and hammers.
"Please no!!!" Mo screams out as a large nail is placed over his left eye and then without hesitation hammered into his skull. The same was done to his right eye. After this terrifying ordeal, the angels without mercy begin to hammer at least another dozen nails into his skull.
"This punishment is for every time you touched a woman Allah has forbidden you to touch!" The angels scream out, letting Mo know why he is receiving such torture. Each time the nails were hammered through his skull, his skull would return back to normal only to be treated to the same punishment.
The girl also received the same punishment as Mo, but for her another angel approached her carrying two very large iron hooks. Despite her crackling scream and cries, the angel forced the hook through her tongue ripping it out of her mouth. Then the angel placed the other hook through her belly button, ripping the flesh off her abdomen exposing her insides. Her stomach and other organs emptied out onto the dark murky floor.
"This is for the piercing you did upon your tongue and your belly! Tell me now with the pain you feel was it really worth it? Did you gain eternal pleasure? Did it wipe out every form of depression upon this Earth?"
"No! Please stop! I only did it because I was tempted by it! I was planning to get rid of it!" The girl screams out.
"Your excuses are nothing but air! You knew it was forbidden yet you denied your Lord, thinking that He will let you live only so you can live through your desires and then you hoped to grow bored of it. Know this; those who want to enjoy their pleasures thinking that they will grow out of it, the only thing that is growing is the torment and pain they will feel in the Afterlife!" The angels call out sternly to her.
Back with Ahmad, the angels of mercy escort him towards the largest and most beautiful building he has ever seen in his entire life. It looks like a giant dome made out of purple emerald, the size of which can hold many Planet Earth's with ease. Large crystal frame windows line the sides of this incredible emerald dome, while colourful plants and little ponds line the whole circumference of it.
"SubhanAllah! Am I going to go in there?!" Ahmad calls out excitedly.
"Of course you are Ahmad. This is your place of stay until the coming of the final hour." An angel says smiling towards him.
"AllahuAkbar!" Ahmad calls out.
Each step Ahmad takes towards the doors of the magical emerald dome, his excitement reaches a new level beyond description.
08-31-2007, 03:19 PM
That was really good, keep goin :DReply
My eyes were hurting but it was worth it! :)
08-31-2007, 03:21 PM
As Ahmad walks towards the magical gates, they slowly open releasing an incredible scent out in the open. Ahmad's hair is pushed back as the wind gently strikes against his body.
He enters the large magical dome, and there before him is an incredible garden of literally thousands of large colourful flowers and bushes never seen by man. Streams of blue and green water pass through the land like meandering rivers, the water passing along at a generally fast speed. As the water hits against the banks of the rivers, splashes of water rise and suddenly turn into hundreds of colourful fruits resembling bubbles, floating around, waiting to be picked by someone and eaten. All along the banks of the rivers are magical gems and rubies in colours unknown to man. Ahmad runs towards the river laughing and in an ecstatic mood. He quickly places his arms deep within the magical water, which feels so soothing and cool. He takes some water in his hands and takes a sip. The flavour is beyond imagination, similar to that of a magical tropical fruit. He finds one of the floating fruits resembling a bubble and takes it in his hand. He takes a bite, his teeth easily sinking into the almost see through fruit. He cannot believe the flavour, something indescribable. He spends time enjoying the fruit around him when he suddenly hears laughing in the distance. He turns around in shock and there in the distance is a small group of Muslims sitting together enjoying a Hugh feast. He smiles and quickly runs up to them.
"Assalaamu'Alycom dear Brother. Come join us." One of the Brothers calls to him smiling.
"Wa'laycom Assalaam!" Ahmad says excitedly.
He is given a golden plate full of rice, lamb and salad. The food looks flawless. Not a single defect can be found in the food.
"Mashah'Allah! So this is it? No more sadness and worry? I still cannot get over the excitement that there will never be any boredom, sadness, pain or worry!" Ahmad says.
The Brothers around him laugh.
"Wait until we enter Paradise and see the Face of our Allah." One Brother says.
"AllahuAkbar!!!" All of the Muslims call out.
Suddenly a multi coloured cloud appears over them and a shower of gems fall upon them like snowflakes. Each gem is edible, a delicious sweet given to them by Allah. An angel suddenly appears to the Muslims and says, "Dear Slaves of Allah! This is a small gift from Allah to thank you for praising His name."
"AllahuAkbar! AllahuAkbar! AllahuAkbar!" The Muslims continue to scream out in extreme happiness, tears appearing from their eyes. Just the thought of Allah loving them is beyond words and description. No gift can ever be compared to being loved by Allah.
Time passes on, not affecting the Muslims within the magical dome.
Ahmad lays upon a bed of a material made only for the pious, watching above as small gem like leaves float around in all directions, releasing a beautiful scent attaching to anything it touches.
Ahmad slowly looks to the left and what he sees is something he could not possibly imagine would happen…There, before him, is his mother, father, two brothers and his sister! His whole family is there before him!
"Mama! Dada! My Brothers and Sister!!!" He rushes towards them and hugs them tightly.
"My son! My son!" His mother cries out, crying out of extreme happiness.
"How? By Allah how?!" Ahmad calls out in tremendous exhilaration.
"Well by dear Son. 10 years after your death, we went to Hajj. It was the most exhilarating experience ever. Nothing could be compared to standing among all the Muslims bowing down to Allah.
While in Salat al-Layl (night Prayer), your mother and I made big Du'a to Allah to grant us a place with you in the Hereafter. After coming back from Hajj, we were all in our car driving back home reciting Qur'an, when suddenly we were struck by a truck and we all died by the will of Allah."
"SubhanAllah! What is also shocking was when you mentioned 10 years! It feels I was here for only a few days! I thank Allah so much that He has united my family with me!"
An angel suddenly appears before the family.
"No more sadness, no more division. You were united upon the Earth and were separated at death. You have now united for the second time, and unity will be for eternity. You will be a family forever. You will enter Paradise together, without end. You will be loved by Allah forever!" The angel calls out smiling towards them.
"Lah Illah Ha Illallah! Takbeer! AllahuAkbar!" The family call out hand in hand.
"Mama! Dada! And my dear brothers and little sister! Come and I will show you around, for there is so much to show you in here, and even with this, I have only seen a fraction of what is in this Hugh magical dome. Imagine what will be in Paradise!!!" Ahmad calls out in excitement indescribable.
There they went: Ahmad, his mother, father, brothers and little sister, off to enjoy a magnificent feast with the rest of the blessed brothers and sisters within the magical dome of wonder. Muslims that will be united forever. A unity that will grow for eternity to come. A love and family bond that will continue to grow between them forever and ever…
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08-31-2007, 03:49 PM
Originally Posted by Umma Wasat
Glad you enjoyed it, My eyes were hurting too at some point...
May our strongest state when remembering death remain and not be affected by the distractions of life
08-31-2007, 04:06 PM
Subhannalah, Jazakallah for the story, brought a tear to the eye.Reply
09-01-2007, 12:57 AM
Jazak Allah for sharing that story. It really brought tears to my eyes. :cry: I had to read it at intervals, so as to not look weird here crying by my pc. I was relating it to my family, and nearly cried. I'm going to print it out and have some friends read. It was really really nice.:thumbs_upReply
jazak 4 da story it 2k me ages 2 read it but it was worth it Reply
09-03-2007, 10:43 AM
wow you had me hooked until the end..may allah protect us all from the punishments of the kabr :cry:
09-06-2007, 05:52 PM
I think it has been posted somewhere on the forum before, but good reminder nevertheless :thumbs_up
09-06-2007, 07:37 PM
Originally Posted by Muj4h1d4
yep ..hv read it before .. realli nice story though realli touchin aswell :cry:
10-07-2007, 11:30 PM
SUBHANALLAH I WISH I WERE AHMAD but i sadly think i don't know how to do wadu i do pray and do wadu but may some1 tell me how to do proper wadu and the dua after it? jazakallah khayr in advanceReply
07-23-2008, 11:35 AM
07-23-2008, 12:34 PM
one of the best stories ever written for sure !!
07-23-2008, 12:45 PM
07-23-2008, 09:32 PM
Masha Allah, i had tears in my eyes after reading that is so true those that Allah swt guide no1 can midsguide and those that Allah swt misguide nobody that guide.
07-23-2008, 11:34 PM
Jazak'Allah khair for sharing it was a beautiful read! :o)Reply
07-24-2008, 03:00 AM
may allah forgive us all.Reply
07-24-2008, 06:42 AM
Subhanallah, this story bought tears to my eyes & made me realise how short life is & how we should value every minute... *sigh* imsad Was worth reading, great story!
07-25-2008, 11:52 AM
marshallah. Thank for sharing that with us. It makes me think about me. I don't pray all the time. This story is going to help me change. Thank you! If you have anymore stories like that, pleas share them.Reply
Da Pwr f Truth!
07-25-2008, 03:06 PM
May Allah (swt) help us all n guide us... Ameen.
Jazak-allah brother. it was very moving but true...:thumbs_up
08-06-2008, 08:18 PM
This was a really great story. Reply
08-06-2008, 09:08 PM
As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa BarakatuhuReply
Subhan'Allah! This beautiful story bring me to tears! Its show how Allah Taala is the Most Merciful and Most Kind!
May Allah Taala help us all and guide us until death!
Oh Allah Taala forgive me!
08-06-2008, 10:08 PM
subhan allah jazak allah khair brother for this storyReply
my eyes hurt me to read such a long story but it was really worth it
May Allah grant us all a good ending
08-08-2008, 05:40 AM
Amazing story! :cry: It put me to cry... :cry:
Thanks for sharing.
08-21-2008, 05:38 AM
Originally Posted by FatimaAsSideqah
Same here sister
its amazing... i am gona spread this story out as much as possible :)!
08-21-2008, 06:31 AM
jazakallah khair to the one who revived this thread. the feeling is indescribeableReply
08-21-2008, 07:10 AM
Excellent story. Wish we all become like the good side of Ahmed. Inshallah I will try to spread this story as far and wide as possible for me.Reply
09-21-2008, 02:55 PM
09-21-2008, 03:59 PM
09-21-2008, 04:07 PM
That was a good story, I hope we all have a good end.
09-22-2008, 12:54 PM
SubhanAllah, this story also brought tears to my eyes as well, :laugh: thinking about my family at the same time as i go along reading it bit by bit, was defo worth it. (anymore similar stories you know of which you can kindly post...??)
No doubt this is the best story i have read in times.
May Allah SWT forgive us ALL for our shortcoming and sins and may He also reward us in abundance in this Life and the Hereafter. Aameen.
09-22-2008, 09:28 PM
Manshallah, thank you for sharing this story. Makes you realize whats important in life an what isn't.Reply
09-23-2008, 05:01 PM
wow very long! But subhanallah brought tears to my eyes wallah, best story ever written, cannot argue wit that :cry::cry:Reply
09-28-2011, 04:14 PM
I read that story, Jazak'Allah its nice Masha'Allah, Ameen for the Duas. Subhan'Allah.Reply
09-28-2011, 05:17 PM
an inspiring story.........
26. It was said: "Enter thou the Garden." He said: "Ah me! Would that my People knew (what I know)!-
27. "For that my Lord has granted me Forgiveness and has enrolled me among those held in honour!"
10-11-2011, 11:54 AM
This was well written but I do have issues with it. Mo is just not a believable character. He's way too over the top in how he tries to lead Ahmad into temptation like he knows without a shadow of a doubt that these actions are forbidden but does them anyway. All he needed was horns, a tail, and a pitchfork and he'd be the little demon that appears on a character's shoulder in a cartoon.Reply
10-11-2011, 03:13 PM
Mash'Allah i kept reading the story bro, it was depressing at some points (Subhan'Allah) but very beautifull at some points to. Especially the description of paradise and barzakh(Ahmads dead). Alhamdulillah. Enjoyed it. but a good lesson. Allah is full of mercy. Ahmad repented for his sins in the past, and Allah accepted it. (Even tough the story isn't real, it happens in real life to) Allahu AkbarReply
10-11-2011, 05:32 PM
That was a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing. SunnieReply
10-11-2011, 09:01 PM
I cried :'( so much, unbelievable the syntax used to describe the beautiful facts of the Akhira and Islam. My tears are rolling :'( :'(as I type these words, I feel like I wish I was in Ahmed's place. Though I have no clue where I'll be in the day of judgement, but I hope its Jennah. I'm trying my best to fulfill my islamic duties in life, but I wish I could do even more. May Allah SWT forgive me as well and let my thirst and strength for islamic knowledge to flourish in my Islamic Path to Jennah Ameen. Beautiful story wallah encourages me to excell even more. May Allah SWT forgive us all for our sins Ameen.
Assalamu Alaykum with all sincerity in my words,
10-12-2011, 04:22 AM
Actually brother, I am a 16 year old student of Nyc, and i have seen the worst. I know people of my age, even worse of actions that what Mo does. This story, has brought tears down my eyes TWICE!!! Subhanallah! For some reason, i feel good, and want to make salat and thank Allah this very moment for everything in life.Reply
10-16-2011, 09:54 PM
jazakallahu khair for sharing this story with us subhanallah we can all learn something from it may allah forgive all of our sins, may allah guide us to the straight path and keep us firm upon it .... ameenReply
10-17-2011, 02:39 AM
Originally Posted by Pringles
Then again, they usually reject religion entirely. From what I see, most people with devout parents generally have some kind of moral grounding.
12-11-2011, 05:36 PM
I read your story again and I like the plot idea very much, some things cannot be ignored. I believe a little constructive criticism is in order. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there but my main issue with it is some parts in the plot. For instance, Ahmad is only 16. He is a dumb teenage kid with bad influences around him. I know it's supposed to teach that death could come at any second and that we should be right with God before we go, but seriously, I think God would take into account that teenagers will be teenagers when judging them. Not saying there won't be punishment, but still. As for Mo, yes, he was terrible but his character seemed very cartoony. You know the little devil that appears over someone's shoulder trying to convince people to do bad things? That was what he reminded me of. He tries quoting Hadith when he rejects religion entirely? Doesn't seem right. For plot purposes, it makes sense for Ahmad's family to be religious but not for Mo and the girl's parents. The girl too didn't seem like such an awful character either. Again, she was a stupid teenager no better or worse than Ahmad. It would make sense for their parents to be very liberal and non-observant Muslims if they allow their kids to go to such forbidden stuff. To be honest, from what I see these days, the younger generation of Muslims in the West are more into the religion than their parents. One thing I found funny and I shouldn't have is that people cry at the drop of hat like Ahmad sobbing because he couldn't meet Mo when his father took him to the masjid. What 16-year-old acts like that? As for your interpretation of the afterlife, I don't think we're in any position to interpret the afterlife. The reward of Paradise will go beyond an eternity of pleasures you can find here on earth and the punishment of Hell will go beyond physical pain. And did Mo and that girl really deserve an eternity in Hell for doing dumb things that teenagers do? Another thing is what is with all these contrived car accidents? The first one was fine as a sign but the second one that killed Ahmad seemed too convenient. Maybe he could have seen the old Muslim lady being robbed and he'd get killed trying to wrestle the weapon away from the gunman. It would have been better for either Mo or the girl to have lived rather than died and learned from what had happened and one of them get killed while still in a sinful state since you wanted to show Hell. Lastly, what purpose was there for Ahmad's whole family to die so quickly and after Hajj too? Could it not have been many years later when they all died a natural death? Reply
All in all, it was a good plot idea but a very mean-spirited story.
♥ Sofia ♥
12-11-2011, 06:36 PM
^ this isn't school, sir. neither is it a writing competition. you may have good intentions in correcting the author but this is a story with an inspiring message for all of us. it doesn't need to be entirely identical to something that'd actually happen irl. if you put all the little details in no-one would read it.Reply
jazakallah khayr to the op for posting this... this story really moved me :'( insha'Allah the believers will all be granted a place in jannah :smile: <3
12-11-2011, 06:53 PM
It's still a story released to the public and as a story writer and reviewer, I review according to what I see and believability of characters and situations is a big thing with me.Reply
♥ Sofia ♥
12-11-2011, 07:59 PM
as someone who enjoys writing, i do get where you're coming from and also noticed a lot of the things you've mentioned - i just believe that there's a time and place for such comments.Reply
it doesn't matter now, anyway.
i can't edit my posts yet, but i just wanted to add that although the story's plot may not be entirely comprehensible to some, i think the most important thing here was the shock factor. it worked well in my opinion. although things moved at such a pace and a 16 year old crying at not being able to call his friend sounds a bit over the top, it added to the message of the story and highlighted the ignorant attitudes displayed by people in real life as well as how quickly some things appear to happen, making you really think. the whole thing about ahmed's family dying so quickly after his death was also relevant. as you may know, a small amount of time in the afterlife equates to years on earth. the story was long enough without including long descriptions of what the family did with their lives after ahmed's death. that definitely would've taken an interesting turn on the story but such a plot could spin on itself and continue on in a whole different direction, taking away the power of the story's initial message.
12-11-2011, 08:34 PM
Great story :) I really enjoyed it.Reply
~ Sabr ~
01-26-2012, 12:44 PM
Just read through the whole story ......in tears wallahi.......
09-05-2012, 12:37 AM
With your permission, may I rewrite this story with a few modifications of my own? I will give you full credit for the plot and characters but this idea has been nagging at me for a while.Reply
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