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Ameeratul Layl
10-17-2005, 10:17 AM
:sl: dear Brothers and Adorable Sisters,

I was not exactly bored but then again, I wasnt exactly entertained much on the weekend. I was feeling rather depressed so, I thought I'd write a poem and put myself in the position of a child stuck in War.Here it goes:


I have lived to know waht a smile is.
I have lived the life of hope and success.

I have lived the life of a girl that knew what a family was.
I have lived the life of peace and happiness surrounding my every move.

Now I am living a life where all my dreams have been dashed.
A life were all my hopes seem bitter.

Now I'm living a life where my family is out of reach.
A life of tremendous fear of what the front door holds for me.


Will they kill me too?
No, they'll kill us all.

I'm living a life where I feel I've been buried alive.
I wonder why those who claim to love my country, help to bury us.

I have lived through all these things.
And I'm not even ten years old.
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Ameeratul Layl
10-17-2005, 03:02 PM
:sl:

No one read my poem yet? Duh!It tuk me ages to think of it. Oh I know....its not gud enuf is it!!??
Its fine, Ill take my.....business elesewhere. Huh!
:p

:coolsis:
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MetSudaisTwice
10-17-2005, 03:04 PM
salam
sorry sis, just reliased now,
mashallah an excellent poem
a very good topiv you based it on, war
jazakallah sis
wasalam
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Ameeratul Layl
10-17-2005, 03:06 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by metsudaistwice
salam
sorry sis, just reliased now,
mashallah an excellent poem
a very good topiv you based it on, war
jazakallah sis
wasalam

:sl: Do u really appreciate my hard work? :p
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MetSudaisTwice
10-17-2005, 03:08 PM
salam
yes sis, mashallah you have posted some very good poems
wasalam
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Ameeratul Layl
10-17-2005, 03:09 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by metsudaistwice
salam
yes sis, mashallah you have posted some very good poems
wasalam

:sl:
U shud nt have sed yes. Cuz now.....u havre to give me a rep point. Hah! Sum1's dug up a whole and thrown themselves in it.
Arent I classic!! Wawa.
So, sudaiysee, Im waiting. Yllah!! :p
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Ameeratul Layl
10-17-2005, 06:54 PM
:sl:
JzakAllah to sudaiysee (metsusaistwice) for the rep point. I owe u one....not!

:coolsis:
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