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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
and hold tight to our creed...
instead we wish to be free'd
take religion like a prison
suffocatin us, dont wanna listen..
wanna believe nothings beyond the horizon
but for my i see things differently
cannot take the darkness of finity..
wanna believe theres an eternity
no dust to dust but
resurructed from my cemetery
an i dont believe in chance
IM ALWAYS HAPPY...
coz i believe in pre-destiny...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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al over again....
here we go again
not again sik n tired
wiv a hurtin brain
wanna fly away like a birdie
coz life gets murkie
dnt even realise iss ya fault
coz u got flirtie
so things seem messy
they seem dutty
ur heart feels stuffed
like a stuffed fatty
so you should fast from reminiscin
so that you wont be missin
can allow ALlahs aid to sink in...
coz you need some distance some time alone
maybe with the Quran so taht you can atone
for the times of wrong you went through
inshaAllah you'll reach a break-through...
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 04-24-2008 at 01:04 PM.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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no more strength left....
o plz listen 2 urself talking
no losing till heart stops beating
even when u feel wacked out
u cant lose it
till ur soul gets sucked out
coz u get strength tho u may not appreciate
like a stuffed fatty whos never satiated
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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whether i am really okay...
na ur not n i see it clearly today
shaytaans found an easy target
n wiv u is his play
going astray has implications
a struggle through life
a bitter strife..
and den wat nex a bit of relaxation?
NO U WENT ASTRAY its jus utter ****ation
****ed to the fire
****ed to burn
****ed to suffer till you cry to return
****ed to a bad dunya
****ed to a bad akhirah
****ed for life and for the hereafter...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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whether i am really okay...
na ur not n i see it clearly today
shaytaans found an easy target
n wiv u is his play
going astray has implications
a struggle through life
a bitter strife..
and den wat nex a bit of relaxation?
NO U WENT ASTRAY its jus utter ****ation
****ed to the fire
****ed to burn
****ed to suffer till you cry to return
****ed to a bad dunya
****ed to a bad akhirah
****ed for life and for the hereafter...
^Whats wiv all the stars bro? xD lol
" Its sometimes better people don't get to know you..
Cuz the more they know you, the less they understand & accept you..
Alone is better, what say " - SRK
****ed for life and for the hereafter...
Cuz on that day you're not gna find any helper,
So I suggest you turn to Allah and repent,
When you commit sin to such an extent,
Repent sincerely,
And don't just sit there lazily,
Then its gna be too late,
And you'll only have yourself to blame mate...
" Its sometimes better people don't get to know you..
Cuz the more they know you, the less they understand & accept you..
Alone is better, what say " - SRK
OMG BRO WUT HAPPENED!? Did u say f***ed to the fire???? !!! (lol it doesnt even make sense tho)
no he said D-A-M-N but it's sensored
i havent been rhymin that much dese days. am loosing the knack
And you'll only have yourself to blame mate...
now u cant change your fate
cuz it's all upside down
u commited lots of sins and got Allah to frown
at ya. why? cuz u'v been so bad
always dosobeying Allah and makin your parents all sad
people gettin annoyin these days
u try to advise em but they don't wana leave their ways
watchin bad stuff and cussin all the time
singing to raps songs and oder unislamic rhymes
it hurts more wen they your freind
whom u knew for seven years and had promised to stick together till the end
but if they wana stay all bad that's their desision
i'm not followin them anywer. it's true dunya for a believer is a prison
i feel trapped and i can't get free
i wana push away all these problems from me
cant...i gotta try harder then this i know
don't wana make my status in front of Allah low
Last edited by Na7lah; 04-25-2008 at 07:22 PM.
Reason: spellin arghh
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
I pray for him to be guided to the straight path
many people hath half heartedly
walked the wrong path
deep down wishing for guidance
but unable to understand...
so they act one way yet feeling another
the deep darkness is kept undercover
then approaches that one brother..
he utters such words like no other..
it helps.. for a moment
you consider changing life for a moment..
but in the distance you see dark figures
holding ciggies in between fingers..
ur mind becomes clouded and you get lost...
the moment is forgotten and all hopes lost..
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 04-25-2008 at 09:54 AM.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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you feel as if with life u could so without...
Who told u to care abt a person, it's Allah u depend on no doubt
He brought u to this world and in ur misery u frget Him?
When you need him most you curse Him?
Trst me Ya Ummah there is a way out from these suicidal intentions
Turn to Him when in Pain, Trust Him when in Pain, don't make hasty decisions
Read a Dua' to feel better...therez always a way out evn outta prison
Allah does everything for a reasomn
When you do something bad dont' u think ur questionin his decision
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
feel like going to sleep and not feel...
WHAT? whats your heartbreaking ordeal?
tell me have you been smitten by steel?
pelted by stones till ur skins peel?
tell me have you been forced to marry?
abused and misused raped in a flurry?
TELL ME have both your parents died n
all friends belied you whilst your left to cry?
have you lost your limbs and whims?
under constant torture hoping to see grim?
WHATS SO BAD? becoz as far as i see
in front of a computer you sit
quite comfortably in a chair you sit
WHATS YOUR CALAMITY?
o muslim captured inside vanity...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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feel like going to sleep and not feel...
We all feel this way at one point, bt wit the angels r u ready to deal
Tribulations come and go and it's time fr u to heal
Do not question ur existence,
You are a creation of Allah (S.W.T) u hv been guided without resistance
We feel lonely at one point, cry ourselves to sleep at night
Wonder why we alive, then u see the light
U understand why certain things happen, u see hope in sight
U know therez a reason, u feel helpless but u knw Allah's der fr u
Will always be there and always stay true
be by ur side whn u need sum1 most nd there are others who
care abt u, like us dear sister, we luv u, no matter wht others do
we knw u tryin, nd u a gift to us so stop cryin, U are a star so stop lyin
We all are fighters in this war ....we gnna die tryin
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
I just hope this life aint real....
We all go thru pain, bt sumtimes our hearts we need to seal
from the suffering we goin thru, pray to Allah or cry to ur companion
U need sum1 to talk to, express ur pain befo u go off like a cannon
LIfe is hard sis, we all knw it, durin these times we dnt think of our sufferin Ummah
Who are we to ask nd question whn we aint' evn seen mch of the dunya
Reality is hittin us now, bt it's not mch, we jst weak
Shaytan's playin wit our minds, nd we being bleak
Ya ukhti, smile now, don't wrry abt the pain tht can sneak
Stick to wht it is you seek
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
Stick to wht it is you seek
ignore the shaitan, let ur HEART speak
u kno u r ....u r...unique?
u aint a shaitan freak
cmon show shaitan ur killin technique
let him cry outside in the darkness
cmon do it i kno u can sis
i kno it will be a great success
u will get wat u wanted , cant u guess?
stop worryin bout ur shoes n ur dress
and stop playin dice chess
Oh god bless...
Oh god bless...
U knw u can get outta dis mess
so dn't stress, nd dn't press
the issue, dn't make it ur weakness
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
how i am undergoing a test
that is killing me from within..
draining out my power, while I refrain from sin
while I try my best to take heed
so later I can harvest the fruit of my seed
laughing you fell and got up again
no problems fears no pain
you wer an innocent kid playing around
pushing your friend; both of you fell on the ground
but that was before wen u were a little infant
dat was before u turned bad, before u became a tyrant
before u disobeyed Allah
before you neglected all your Salah
before u started cussin and doin bad
before da day u hurt someone cuz u wer mad
before you spoke bad to your mother
before u hurt your brother
before everything
now you look back and don’t feel a thing
why?
Cuz your hearts gone bad with all the things u said “I’ll jus try”
It started with a small black dot now your hearts all black
Now your heart the sweetness of Iman it lacks
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
and back to reality....
We are n reality wit technicality
Sittin here tryin to get rid of the insanity
Feel like nobody undastands humanity
Killin, dyin, suicidin, fr wht? vanity
I'm too close to losin my sanity
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
bouncing back from every attack so scatter, madder than the that itch a** mad hatter, live or die for honour i'd prefer the latter, load the clip in my pen and cock it, I'm down for the truth so you im gonna rock it, you may try and block it but you can only ignore it for so long, I aint weeded and I dont own a bong, if you think i'll ever stop your wrong, the seed is sown and it will flourish, watch it blossom into Allahs will, i would hate to kill, so please for your own sake lie still, its getting hormonal now like women on the pill, you cant stop me from reaching my destiny, with Allah watching my back and forever blessing me
The freed slave shall walk on the blood of his masters
"Coffee is the only thing I like integrated" - El-Hajj Malik el-Shabazz (Malcolm X)
this is a hard life and my worries is doubled, coz the only thing I inherited from my father was his debts and his troubles, so now i got to make something bubble, but if I snooze when i move i'll loose, not just my hustle but grip on sanity, I'm too ugly inside for vanity, i praise the lord but the devil bring shame on me, and he'll bring the same to thee, coz what he's done to two he can do to three, I'm talking about Adam and Eve, and how he got them expelled even though they believed, so make every move with the best intention, and if you win don't forget to mention your gratitude to Allah, and praise him until your detention.
The freed slave shall walk on the blood of his masters
"Coffee is the only thing I like integrated" - El-Hajj Malik el-Shabazz (Malcolm X)
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