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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
So with your precious life,
don't play a disastrous game...
and id like to come up n say the same
how many people got themselves tame?
NONE they dont even know
for what they aim..
blindly moving forward
like they hypnotised by a dame
so anyone with half a brain
should use it to win lifes game
coz hell will drive you insane
i'll say it plain n simple
in ur good deeds be nimble
or in hell you'll tumble..
stumble feel yourself crumble..
so think about yourself
be humble
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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be humble
Fr ur deen u gtta fumble
or in hell u gnna tumble
U dont' evn knw how it feels whn ur stomach rumble
bt therer are others who feel more then tht,barely stumble
Barely can walk, no food in dere tummy, bt they gtta keep goin
Live life and keep struggling
Paradise is ahead the walk knwin
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
so from the bad we gota refrain
Turnin away from Allah we must b insane
I'm gettin bak up, can't leave all in vain
My islam can't let any1 defame
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
u gotta seek refuge in Allaah
and He will help you without a doubt..
yet in my heart i doubt about my feelings
bouting my heart regarding my dealings
wanna live clean even if im misqeen
my deeds will lead me to as-siratul mustaqeem
help me to attain my dream or drinking from jannahs streams
so im gnna drop my pride an recite surah waqiah
coz it protects from poverty whilst grantin hasanat
so Allah protect me from haram income
grant me rizq coz i dont wanna be a bum (lol)
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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tell the truth...dont delay....
listen just tell me you'll pray
coz i need that most im already prey
to dinar n dirham the gold n grey
i need some dua's n i need it quick..
serious.. i musta been thick
gettin into mess now i feel sick
i pray Allah forgives me
i pray, i pray u rememba me..
dont forget me from your dua's
not even if life got you behind bars...
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 05-01-2008 at 11:17 AM.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Cuz you know this is the way to Jannah...
And this is the key to Allah's rahmah,
So listen to me my friend, listen to me well,
Cuz there’s someone out there who'll listen and won't yell,
Don't ever speak a lie,
Cuz life is too short and one day you'll die!
Last edited by Soulja Girl; 05-01-2008 at 01:47 PM.
" Its sometimes better people don't get to know you..
Cuz the more they know you, the less they understand & accept you..
Alone is better, what say " - SRK
^Lol, I realised after so I quickly changed it! xD
" Its sometimes better people don't get to know you..
Cuz the more they know you, the less they understand & accept you..
Alone is better, what say " - SRK
before u end up in affliction.....
i been kissed by seduction
missed chances due to infactuation
or maybe its hesitation?
this lifes got me on clutches
i delay till im pushed to my destination
and then i yell out of frustration
my heads hurtin an im losin my patience
so i rememba my lord at the edge of discord
he affords me a chance to grip the rope once more
i lie a promise to myself to never let go
grip it so hard that on my hands the marks will show
never discard it till i reach Allahs lands
if only i dont face his reprimand...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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so people dont commit treason....
been through so many seasons
felt so many breeze n...
travelled past the seas buh..
still havent attained jannahs keys
instead made a few enemies
maybe i spent my life pleasin
not Allah but the heathens..
made up my mind to make a u turn
coz made up my mind to not burn
if i had ten million whole golden urns
i'll trade em all for a grain of jannahs dust
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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we gotta be wise n learn frm luthor king
oh btw i duno who is luther king
all the shaytaan wants iz us tu sin
but we aint gna be wid him
koz we dont wana let ourslef in (his trap)
lets chuk him in the bin
poke him with a pin :P
make him go all dim
oh 4get him hes sucha stink (eeeeeeeyak) lol
n now ima finish wid ease
giv ma slaam koz itz all abt peace
give ma salaam cuz its all about peace
one this world really lacks
the animosity is pricking us like tacks
yet we don’t even feel it; don’t even realize
that we are starting to become fools; everyone needs to get wise
a traitor to your own self
use to read the quran everyday now it’s on the top shelf
u don’t look at don’t give it much thought
u forget how it helped u win all the battles that u fought
use to pray the Salah now it’s crying
cuz u don’t pray it anymore u’r spiritually dying
use to give Sadaqah, charity
now u keep every penny to yourself, u’r so stingy
use to say good and never uttered anything bad
but now u’r lying and cussing it’s so sad
how u’v changed; only u don’t really care
u don’t realize that u’r gona get your share
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
u don’t realize that u’r gona get your share
All you have to do is prepare
quit complainin' that its unfair
how others get to be millionare(s)
only by ...um...playing soltaire (omg that so rhymed!)
Coz its really the faith that matters, try to compare
ur imaan might be better so dont (feel) despair
stop all this and beware
coz u must be aware
that the shaitan is here and there
don't waste ur time go to prayer (yay)
get ur imaan back and stop ...stop being a square (?)
u kno haram is never rare
(omg so tiight now...xcept the end...but omg i can rhyme again...even tho it sounds a bit crappy!)
u kno haram is never rare
every corner u turn it’s there
but u have to stay strong and not give in
it’s not easy but u cant sin
cuz sins are like warm beds easy to get into
but getting out of them is gona be hard for you
so better to be safe then sorry
better to be relaxed then to always worry
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
better to be relaxed then to always worry
better to feel peace then be in a hurry
lifes passin us by so swiftly
work, work, and all i gotta do is study
hate it and i'm gettin weary
decidin,, sitin wit my Lord in peace
lukin out at the world and i wanna cease
Thankful to him cuz i aint'; payin any fees
Obeyin him inshallah till my last breath
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
Obeyin him inshallah till my last breath
i heard His (swt) name as i gave my first breath
every breath to come made me appreciate Him (swt)
the breath at death will leave me crying
coz i dont know if i did my part
i dont know.. did i properly cleanse my heart?
or will i have to go through a severe cleansing process
qabr, yawmal qiyaamah, jahannam need i digress...?
i repeat the shahadah to relieve my stress...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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i repeat the shahadah to relieve my stress...
I feel alil messed, wanna move frm failure to success
wht am i supposed to do, i dnt care who i impress
Ye i need sum1 tho, need sum1 to buttress
Hold me up, Allah help me up, abt others i culd care less
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
Hold me up, Allah help me up, abt others i culd care less
i kno sometimes its so hard to suppress
the weighty tests which sting our chests
but thing is in dunya we're all just guests
heart yearnin for our place of eternal rest
does it really matter if we feel a lil messed...
yeah its hard sometimes
we wanna cry sometimes
feel like the test prolonging
and we aint seeing no dimes
we wastin ourselves in our prime
wonderin wats goin on wiv our times...
but honestly if you think about it
shaytaans n our nafs workin around us
tryna make us doubt in akhirah
BUT NO! i'll never stop hopin for jannah..
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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BUT NO! i'll never stop hopin for jannah..
I'll always adhere to the Sunnah
I'm tryin to have the best of character (inshallah)
Instill it in my behaviour
not just be a lame actor
When people see me i want them to smile
I knw i get alotta frowns bt afta a while
they knw me and they stop bein vile
Inshallah i luv Allah not the people
and i knw that they'll respect me if i'm not feeble
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
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