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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
woah you can say that again bro
coz Iman is sinkin... itz never been so low
tears fall but we're too blind to see
the misery, destruction, lack of humanity
tear free to fall, down the cheek of a baby
seen by ignorant eyes, ppl ignorin the story...
sometimes it's not that we dont see
but it's just that we're too greedy
"So long as it aint happenin' to me"
Then we just flip channels on the TV
Watchin comedies and love movies
Whilst our brothers and sisters drown in their miseries...
woah you can say that again bro
coz Iman is sinkin... itz never been so low
tears fall but we're too blind to see
the misery, destruction, lack of humanity
tear free to fall, down the cheek of a baby
seen by ignorant eyes, ppl ignorin the story...
you kno why that is, they want the glory
forget the zuhd, bring out the wahn,
forget the fard, do wat you can,
its this mentality bringin us down
this mentality taking us undergroun.. (to hell)
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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sometimes it's not that we dont see
but it's just that we're too greedy
"So long as it aint happenin' to me"
Then we just flip channels on the TV
Watchin comedies and love movies
Whilst our brothers and sisters drown in their miseries...
mashaAllah, didnt know you had it in you.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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you kno why that is, they want the glory
forget the zuhd, bring out the wahn,
forget the fard, do wat you can,
its this mentality bringin us down
this mentality taking us undergroun.. (to hell)
are you my brother or ma 'bruva' my sister or ma 'sistah'
you're livin this life, yo you wanna be a gangsta
think you can outdo the one and only Creator...ffended:
but the woman next door her pockets are empty
and her kids are going crazy coz they never been so hungry
but you dont think its your duty to help the poor and needy...
not you btw...just in reply to the mentality thing..
one organ, i mean the central heart
if it goes black then the rest fall apart,
one nation, i mean poor palestine
its in pain, but do our hearts pine?
if one part is ill the whole body is achin
but look at our bros out there n all those excuses they makin...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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woah!! you're good bro, Masha'Allah...dunno what to say to that..not nearly as good enough
erm....
I'm so tired man, of livin this life
the misery and destruction
the constant strife
tryna make my way but ppl attackin from behind
wanna hold fast to the rope
but gettin caught up in a bind
^ mashaAllah, and ur rhymes smasssshhhh it too sis mashaAllah.
forgive me for all this negativity
but i feel the need for some positivity
it makes it easier to appreciate Allahs sublimity
when you think bout his favours upon humanity
constantly, seein the mercy on our family,
so lets show Allah sum gratitude for our happiness
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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lol!! good idea bro
coz appreciation we're slow to show
we've been blessed with health and hapiness
but dont forget the plight of those below us
we can thank Allah for each rising of the sun
but what bout the damage soldiers may have done
that river of blood, flowin down the street
or the burnin sun that upon the orphans head does beat...
once again i jus might
hav to say that your so right
so empty your wallets and dont let ur left hand know
and this time i say it coz we REAP WAT WE SOW
so on yawmal qiyamah our faces will GLOW
on that day when ALlah will show..... (Himself)
gettin now emotional i jus wnna bow... (to Allah..)
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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i can see it,
deep shades of pink, orange and red.
at the horizon,
it tells a tale untold,
a tale about to unfold,
a tale of mystery,
an unfurling rose.
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