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    Do you know me?
    I hope you do
    I'm the one
    The only truth
    In me you'll find the best of fruits
    In which you'll find everlasting youth


    This is my first attempt at poetry and this is what I have created so far. What does everyone think? Is it good or is it bad?
    Maybe someone can help in some techniques on good poem writing

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    If you seek you shall find
    Alot of people filled with pride
    Do the best the best you can
    To help the people fight the mind


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    Re: First try at Poetry

    format_quote Originally Posted by sirajstc View Post
    nice
    Thankyou Brother
    Now all I need to do is put a nice long one together. My only problem is find words.....Hmmm I have to look at a way to conquer that
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    Re: First try at Poetry

    keep posting like this may allah bless u always
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    Nice try bro... Keep tryin, you'll get better at it inshallah...

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    Cuz the more they know you, the less they understand & accept you..
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    Thankyou Sis for the encouragment
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