And as for the onewho fears standing in front of His Lord and restrainsthe soul from impure evil desires and lusts, verily, Paradise will be his abode [79:40-41]
An evil mother and her innocent son. The mother recently heard that her son is in love. But the Evil mother finds the news rather disturbing, she doesnt want her son to have a wife. So She whispers to him and makes him question his love for the girl he wants to marry. He's torn and confused, his heart is yearning to be with his love, but the evil Mother is always there at the back whispering nothing but evil.
snd pic:
One night, the Girl (the one whom he loves, visits the the guy. After worrying about him because she didnt come across him for days. She enters his home with the intention to see how he's doing, but to her unpleasant n devastating surprise she finds him stabbed and bleeding on the bed.
The girl realises that its the Mom who Killed her son in his sleep.
1st pic :
With The Looks Of the Old Woman I can See That Shes very Excitet About somethin
I think That (young) Woman Is goin to do something ,
I know , She is Thinking If she should open The Door for the man who wants To Marry her , You can see on her face That She Is Little Happy , sooo I think She Is Goin To open The Door And Than Accept The Marriage.
2nd pic:
Its The First Night Of the Marriage.....And The Man Fell In sleep right after they came home from the Wedding....Ok you know What I mean :X
3nd pic :
Hes Not goin To Kill or beat someone With that happy face of his
Soo That Man Is Goin to suprise his Neighbours by making Them realy Scared
and Then He will Say to his Neihbour also his Best friend " HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAY"
That Was It , sooooooo What do you think
And as for the onewho fears standing in front of His Lord and restrainsthe soul from impure evil desires and lusts, verily, Paradise will be his abode [79:40-41]
1st pic :
With The Looks Of the Old Woman I can See That Shes very Excitet About somethin
I think That (young) Woman Is goin to do something ,
I know , She is Thinking If she should open The Door for the man who wants To Marry her , You can see on her face That She Is Little Happy , sooo I think She Is Goin To open The Door And Than Accept The Marriage.
2nd pic:
Its The First Night Of the Marriage.....And The Man Fell In sleep right after they came home from the Wedding....Ok you know What I mean :X
3nd pic :
Hes Not goin To Kill or beat someone With that happy face of his
Soo That Man Is Goin to suprise his Neighbours by making Them realy Scared
and Then He will Say to his Neihbour also his Best friend " HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAY"
That Was It , sooooooo What do you think
mine was more depressing n dramatic lol...nice try tho.
lol.. you are supposed to tell a complete story, with emotions, plot, theme, the works..
there are no right or wrong answers, just do it, as if you were producing a movie and this scene is integral to it.
Thank you
oooooooh now I get it ,
ok lol
And as for the onewho fears standing in front of His Lord and restrainsthe soul from impure evil desires and lusts, verily, Paradise will be his abode [79:40-41]
n btw cnt nobody else except me see the hole in the guys stomach..and that he's bleeding.
oooh I just Noticed That
And as for the onewho fears standing in front of His Lord and restrainsthe soul from impure evil desires and lusts, verily, Paradise will be his abode [79:40-41]
his belt all the way up there. err....lol..look how the blood is flowing towards his left side (ribs).
I can't see it.
Anyway, if he were bleeding, she'd be trying to help him or screaming hysterically at the bed, but in fact she is despaired over her husband coming home drunk, again.
1st:
There was a poor Woman Who is 32 Years Old She only goes To work To earn Her Money For her Bread ,she works At an Famous Restaurant where She's Being opressed and Bullied By Some People There Cause She Is Poor , everyday she Cries and Cries , She cant Quit Cause Then There Wont be Food On table at her home Everyday She in a misery plus she has to care for her old mother , She Rarely Laughs , But there Was This Rich boy who is Very compassionate and Nice lookin And He Always Helps This Girl and There is Some spark Between Them , Even If they Dont express it , One Day She Heard From An Friend Of this Boy , who is Also nice That The Boy Is comin To ask her To marry Tonight at her Home , She Couldnt Believe , She Was Soooo Excitet but then again Who was Goin To care For Her Mother cause She Didnt had Any Familly ,Her Dad Died when She Was Very Young And Her uncle Wont care if They Live Or not.
Soo She Came Home , and told the story about her mother
and The Mother was sooooo Happy , That She Cried Tears of Joy
Sooo They Waited Hours and Hours But he didnt Came
slowy They gave up hope , slowly her Dreams Began To fade
Soo she Prayed To her Lord , cause she had no other hope
And Then ...........#DONK#(lol)
it was The Door and Then She jumped Out of happines , She Thanked God
Than She was walkin to the Door , The Mother Was Soooooo excitet so She Stayed Behind Her and she was goin To open The Door and Then She Waited a little And Thinkin About it Again but the mother Gave Her A Push ,
Then She opened The Door....
A Nice looking man , dressed In Black And He had A box Of chocolates and a Some Beautiful Lookin Flowers....
He came In and Talked A little and Than Proposed In a Noble Manner with a amazingly beautiful Ring .....she was stunned by the beauty of this ring
she cried in tears And Accepted The Propose...Her Dreams became True
It gettin Better isnt it
For Now.....
And as for the onewho fears standing in front of His Lord and restrainsthe soul from impure evil desires and lusts, verily, Paradise will be his abode [79:40-41]
He'd been dreading this day for weeks. He always knew it was coming, he just didn't think it would be so soon. His mother had warned him, called him several times to remind him. He had ignored her, the foolish boy. And now it was time. He had armed himself as best he could, picked out his largest club, and prepared himself for the worst. If need be, he was ready to kill. He just hoped it didn't have to come to that. After all, it was for his own good. Or so he was told.
"Mr. Barnes, it's time".
This was it.
He got up timidly, walked across the waiting room, and hesitantly put his hand on the door. He could get away from this now, escape, no one would find him. He'd go to the Bahamas... Ahh, to lie on the soft sand, beneath the scorching sun...
No, he had to do this. This was not something one could escape from, not something one could delay.
He would do it.
He gathered up every ounce of courage he had, twisted the handle, and inched the door open.
Today was the day he would change his life forever.
Today was the day he would get braces.
Picture 2 (my disclaimer- i'm not really sure about this one meh)
"Ma'am, you're going to have to tell us exactly what happened"
Oh, I would tell them all right. Tell them that he wouldn't give me a dime's worth of spending money. That he never smiled at me once. That he came home every night smelling of lady's perfume. That he would spill milk all over the floor whenever I had just mopped the floors. That if he didn't like my cooking he would throw his plate at me. That he used to beat me so hard I would bleed. That he would call me names in front of my children. That he hated me and did his best to make my life a living hell.
"I woke up and found him this way, officer."
I shed some tears for the show, some weeping and wailing. My children come into the room, terrified at all the police officers surrounding their father. They play the part well, my children, we rehearsed it many times. We had been planning this for months.
Today was the day, I had declared to my children this morning. Today was the day.
Everything went smoothly, everything fell into place. It's as if God wanted this to happen.
He ordered me to make his usual cup of evening tea in bed. He didn't know that tonight he'd be getting his earl gray with a twist... A couple of sips and he was out. I took the cup away, lay him down, and called the police.
They see me weeping now and try to comfort me.
They don't know they're tears of joy.
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