You stabbed me
You pierced me
With your little dart
While the droplets
Of sadness
Drained out of my heart
jazakallah khair sis for sharing
Three simple rules in life:
1) If you do not go after what you want, you will never have it
2) If you don't ask, the answer will always be no.
3) If you do not step forward, you'll always be in the same place
I walk on a road long and hard
I have a goal and a strong will
But will Allah give me strenghth and power
To be able to get across that hill?
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I walk toward an end
An End that I do not see
But I'm not scared...why?
'Cause I know Allah's with me
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I travel on remembering my Lord
And now I'm more stronger than i ever was before
I've submited my will and I'm happy content,
But forever I will be striving for more
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I haven't gotten to the hard part yet
The road is still paved and smooth
The Dunya is a store-filled reststop
But I will not stop at Shaitan's booth
There is a Hadith where it says not to be special because "Narrated by AbuSalmah, the prophet (pbuh) said "That a believer is simple and generous but the profiligate is decitful and ignoable."
They say they want to speak
But they never listen or hear
They say they want to be unique
But they're just copycats, never sincere
They say that they're weak
But they never get stronger, are they too full of fear?
They say they want to think
But do they ever use their minds, do they ever adhere?
They stand, but they're dead with no growth
Not just the women, not just the men, but both
"Hold tight to the rope" they were told
But yet behold!
The rope dangles in front of their eyes
And still to lazy to grab the prize?
Some more ambitious are barely holding on
And if they tried harder, surely they would be drawn
High above where those lazy ones will never set their eyes
High above in the highest of paradise
I'm not sure what inspired it but yeh... Let me know what yu think..
Masha-Allah sis! thats really great, do you always write such things?
Prayer is a free outgoing call to GOD, no network or battery problem, always good signal & all messages sent. Make prayer always and remember me in your prayer If things r happening according to ur wish, u are lucky! But if they r not, u r very lucky, Bcoz they are hapning according to God’s wish!
try to avoid too much rhyme, I know that sounds counter intuitive, but you can only express so much hen constrained with rhyming. another thing would be try to be more subtle, hide the meanings by adding more layers, that way you'll reach access a wider range of emotions, imagery.
good attempt though , I disn't want to sound too negative but apparently failed =_= sorry, it's just that you can put words together, you do have a knack, just a little tweaking needed
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Jaa-Ro-Nee-Mo!!!
Thankyou for sharing that with us, it was very beautiful............
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