here is the free style i wrote last night while i was being bored... just read it and tell me watu think...
Its goin down toniite hang on if u like showin u how i do wit all the lines i move now check it...
we the the slaves of allah 24 nonstop in the deen never come to a full stop u listenen to the american hip hop u car is down u spendin $ at the car shop u remember to pick up the things fo yo pop gettin a flat tire u like 'oh no' so u call ur frend and say 'aiyo' thinkin its all u need yet u still way low watr u missin? u forgot the great pro you still down way below this is something u gotta know remember ur lord u'll getta great reward dont let him be ignored he is the one and only, the great lord u aint got time to wait time is runnin out dont be late the scale is gainin more and more wieght u aint realizin u the shaitans bait dont turn away keep lookin straight keep balancing dont fall off the line listen to the truth and dont decline u'll be fine i kno u'll shine
and this is the other one
look at how we livin everywhere we look racism terrorism hatin on the muslims some guy who got shot young guy left to rot lady who got robbed some guys who got stopped open the paper in search and enlighment met up bya story of hate and encitement half the storys in the paper bout us its just me? yet again the talks bout me no matter what i do, u just cant set ur mind free
and the lastest one
i see, worlds in misery i feel, all my enemies are here, the battle never dies and i fear u'll fly away leavin me here more sufferin to come ahead i see ppl comin over fightin over a piece of dry bread bullets spread dozens dead whats next? the worlds hexed time to wise up like unicef you and i ment to be, meant to see rest of time, rest of life the time moves on with all the light they say times a great healer but i see time passes by like a great stealer i see the worlds most beautiful landscapes growin up on landmines life of another child fallin down fo shaitan folks fallin down like domino 1 after 1, either lose a leg or a son an endless marathon juss keeps goin on and on...
I'm not familiar the words: "fo yo pop" and "aiyo". Though I like some of you lines, the rhyming and the slang is slightly annoying. Nonetheless, Good job.
open the paper in search and enlighment
met up bya story of hate and encitement
half the storys in the paper bout us
its just me?
yet again the talks bout me
no matter what i do, u just cant set ur mind free
Plagiarism?
i see, worlds in misery
i feel, all my enemies
are here, the battle never dies and i fear
u'll fly away leavin me here
omg sis thanks for bringing it back LOL i swear i had those last ones in my head and cudnt remember where i got it from a show or me or a song or what lol jazakallah that song is ancient... cant remember which tho
to be honest most rhymes are inspired by what we heard one time i guess...
like one which keeps comin bak to me is:
i see the light at the end
but everytime i take a step it gets dim
tell me is this hell we livin in
is so heavens gotta be betta but if we hellbound wateva lets go down...
audhubillah, we dnt wanna go down but the lyrics are deep. they might affect our rhymes so its not plagiarism.
Assalamu Alaikum
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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