wake up everyone!!

[muslimah_online]

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look ouside your small black window
and tell me what you see
is it the beautiful trees down low
or black sky reflected by the sea.

they chewed on their paper money
and built a castle with their spits
when they're inside it they grew lonely
but stupidly they sew their ego bits.

Faking faces on the flashy lights,
making nonsensical ideas and facts,
placing gray confidences by their sides,
and soon they'll start biting our necks!

here ye! Here ye! all people,
don't cover your eyes and ears,
give a chance though a little,
for a little orphaned child's tears.




:exhausted hope u all like it.. i did by myself..:):D

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[Amat Allah]

Asalamo Alikom

MASHAA ALLAH.....you are AMAZING my dear sister ....

What a beautiful poem mashaa Allah ,keep it up ,you have got a great talent from Allah

try to make it grow more and more....you will be the best inshaa Allah...

I loved your words...

Jazak Allah the paradise...

Ameeeeeeeeeeeen

[muslimah_online]

What a beautiful poem mashaa Allah ,keep it up ,you have got a great talent from Allah

Alhamdulillah.. thank u sister. all the fouls are from me and all the best are from Allah. Thank you sooo much for ur motivating words..i'll try my best!! :D