Living For Allah (swt)

[chacha_jalebi]

salaam ma alaykam

didnt know what to call it lol, was gona name it confused, lost, depressed, but then i decided untitled but then i decided livin for Allah (swt) ooo yeaah :D

people expect me to make them happy
how can i live upto expectations when my life is so crappy
i feel like a bird lost from his flock
i feel like that returned unwanted stock

im not trapped im the way i wanna be,
but i still feel the need to be free
even thou im not, i sound so depressed
im confused and lost, feel like my soul is suppressed

im the patient who cant be diagnosed
i wana go back and make my happier times frozed
as i lay in the dark, only Allah (swt) hears my cry
i live for him, so theres nothin i can do except give this life another try...

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:salamext:

crappy?! frozed?! nah-ah... killed it...

I liked this bit though...

as i lay in the dark, only Allah (swt) hears my cry
i live for him, so theres nothin i can do except give this life another try...

[Re.TiReD]

:salamext:

[Stamped with samakah's shiver-factor thread stamp]

:ooh: :ooh:

*speechless*

LOL @ frozed. But Masha'Allah :ooh:

people expect me to make them happy
how can i live upto expectations when my life is so crappy

^^^ Bro....Erm....Nothing :D

:wasalamex

[Nájlá]

aww mashalllah bro nice erm lines
i like ur last part

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[chacha_jalebi]

erm lol it was from the heart and you said killed it lol:(

jazakhallahg for feedbak :mmokay:

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:salamext:

^ If you don't want criticism then just say. Sorry I won't comment on your poems next time.

Assalamu Alaikum

[chacha_jalebi]

lol i was jokin gosh liven up :D

[chacha_jalebi]

yeah frozed was the rubbish bit :embarrass

but chanks to all:D

[Re.TiReD]

I wanna go back and at the happy times hit pause :shade: :p

[chacha_jalebi]

na i wana be frozed, ooo yeaah :D

[Souljette]

:sl:

NIce lines mashallah

[Na7lah]

mashallah can't believe i missed this one :thumbs_up

who's gona be writing "lines" for us now dat u'v gone? lol