Reflection

[FatimaAsSideqah]

As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu

There are another of my poem from my notebook.

The wind my armour, the sky my shade.
The sea my rock ,the soil my blade.
The fear my fuel,the sound my food.
The rythm, my step, steel my blood.
My breath the lions roar.
My eyes, the past's reflection.
My key to deaths black door.
My soul awaiting Allah Taala correction.
My oath, my swear.
My smile through despair.
My fist a handful of hate.
My heart beckoning its fate.
The vibration of the call.
To stand up high or fall.
The shadows whisper pity as the mirror says it all.

[Nájlá]

mashallah
jazakiallah khayr for sharing

[Re.TiReD]

Wa'alaykum salam warahmatullah

Masha'Allah fishter

:wasalamex

[FatimaAsSideqah]

As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu

Jazaak'Allah Khair to Sisters Najla and Jolie.

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[Re.TiReD]

:wasalamex

I kinda wanted to ask a ques though sis, how is the soil your blade? I'd say the pen was my blade :p

:wasalamex

[FatimaAsSideqah]

:wasalamex

I kinda wanted to ask a ques though sis, how is the soil your blade? I'd say the pen was my blade :p

:wasalamex

Loq! I think your answer might as same as mine! :X *runs*

[Re.TiReD]

Loq! I think your answer might as same as mine! :X *runs*

Lol I just asked since I like analysing poetry :p

[FatimaAsSideqah]

Lol I just asked since I like analysing poetry :p

Loq! Got it. :thumbs_up

[Sahabiyaat]

[QUOTE=FatimaAsSideqah;984754]
The shadows whisper pity as the mirror says it all.QUOTE]

:thumbs_up

[FatimaAsSideqah]

[QUOTE=Sahabiyaat;985220]

The shadows whisper pity as the mirror says it all.QUOTE]

:thumbs_up

Really? I am scared a bit because I didn't know if whether it is good or not! :phew

[Re.TiReD]

Its fab sis! :D :thumbs_up :)

[FatimaAsSideqah]

Aww love you Sister Jolie! *Weeps* just kidding loq!

So Jazaak'Allah Khair sisters. I will do another work by writing other of poem.

[Sahabiyaat]

[QUOTE=FatimaAsSideqah;985225]

Really? I am scared a bit because I didn't know if whether it is good or not! :phew

sure it is :D
the last line i liked, seems quite accomplished, like from a book.

[FatimaAsSideqah]

[QUOTE=Sahabiyaat;985232]

sure it is :D
the last line i liked, seems quite accomplished, like from a book.

Yeah, that what my husband want me to write the poetry book and published it, but I am not sure! My mind is old a bit and lots of stuff in my mind. :-[

[Sahabiyaat]

no, go for it, what an excellent idea, and what a nice husband you have to encourage your literary interests, rather than than confine you to just making his beans on toast :D

[FatimaAsSideqah]

no, go for it, what an excellent idea, and what a nice husband you have to encourage your literary interests, rather than than confine you to just making his beans on toast :D

As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu to dear sister.

Loq!! We have been discussed about it on last night and I will writing the poems about my life during Ramadhan on this year and LI Forum as well! Don't worry I won't put the negative about LI Forum. Only positive things! :statisfie