First try at Poetry

[coddles76]

Do you know me?
I hope you do
I'm the one
The only truth
In me you'll find the best of fruits
In which you'll find everlasting youth


This is my first attempt at poetry and this is what I have created so far. What does everyone think? Is it good or is it bad?
Maybe someone can help in some techniques on good poem writing

Salam

[coddles76]

If you seek you shall find
Alot of people filled with pride
Do the best the best you can
To help the people fight the mind


Getting better?

[coddles76]

nice

Thankyou Brother
Now all I need to do is put a nice long one together. My only problem is find words.....Hmmm I have to look at a way to conquer that ;)

[sirajstc]

keep posting like this may allah bless u always

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[Soulja Girl]

:sl:

Nice try bro... Keep tryin, you'll get better at it inshallah... :)

:w:

[coddles76]

Thankyou Sis for the encouragment