DEATH...Gangsta?

[truemuslim]

No i just made that title to attract haters :p
heres muslimah421's poem request...took me a bit long like i said 1 min. 30 secs. but then i ended up goin to break my fast nd never came back :D
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death is that thing
nobody knos of
death is that thing
everyone fears of
death is that thing
we all "try" to escape out of
nd death is that thing
every soul gets to see of

(u said ten lines muslimah, but its impossible to add two more lines that would fit here. sooo)

you say u kno death nd u see it everyday
u say u kno death in every single way
u say u fear death nd the price it makes u pay
u say u love yourself nd death will stay away

BUT all u really kno is shaitans way
that evil lil dude who leads u astray
until death comes which u said would stay away
so here u are, nd enjoy ur stay

Graveday Inn :Evil: (much better than holiday inn)

Here u are in graveday inn
may i help wit ur soul? it'll only be a sting
if ur thoat comes apart, lemme fix it wit this shot
u seem all good now jus ignore the red pieces
here's som some snakes, sorry aint got leashes
allow me to carry ur bags
i packed em for u with hooks n dags (daggers?)
had to leave ur home n money
cant have dunya type, dont worry here's plenty
but first lemme lead u to the do (door)
ignore the snake hittin u 70 below
take the painm allah's warned u
aint my fault, i just "fix" u
allah told me , wallah its tru
nd its ur break, notin u cn do
they say u said it would stay away
funniest thing i've heard all day
som say u were straigh n sum say u wer gay
i dont even care, hope u enjoy the long stay
nd remember u checked in till judgement day
Bismillah, thats all am gonna say :D



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lol u told me 10 lines, got a bit carried away after that :D

wot yall think? or issit also to gangsta for u?

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:salamext:

Pleae post your poems in the Poetry section. This is why we have a seperate section for poetry. Other than that, it's a cool poem mashaAllaah.

[truemuslim]

wait someone quickly move this to poetry section before the mean mod comes (u kno who u are),i forgot we got that section :-[ again

[Pen Marks]

:thumbs_up your poems are better when they hav some meanin behind them :p

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[truemuslim]

:mmokay: ur not welcome..i mean ur not thanked.







ur lucky ur kwl wit me :p