to LI'ers. Ha.Ha.Ha.

[truemuslim]

Salam! nd this time ima go high nd try to stay alive wit all one rhyme! (aka go thru whole thing without changing rhyme :D)

I dont need ur opinion
so think before u do ur action
coz u dont mess wit someone back from akron (:p )
mayb even brooklyn
bad response is the common
so im seein this world darken
and im seein it deaden (is that even a word? )
and im walkin to the curtain
and im gonna stay up, never fallin
ur insults to me turn to a garden
filled with love that u try to harshen
but i still see beneath the hidden
coz i can see nd enlighten
so here i am and am tellin
the tale of the insults that never loosen
from below to the canyon
i see people carryin a big burden
but they dump it all on rhymes that cant be beaten (dont worry i AM just kiddin)
i dunno if its only from britian
but the haters jus continue to blacken
u think u kno wher u've driven
u think u've taken me to the dungeon
but i kno thats all fiction
nd the LI air im gonna freshen (:p not really)
so all ur insults continue to golden
brighter and brighter im gna see them
I dont get offended, i jus a freshman
so u gonna try nd make it really happen
but i go everyday nd start to harden
now take this as a lesson
from the ghetto from the mansion
we all together, all one nation
dont try to split to go out livin
livin with hate, u've gotta open
you've gotta option
u do it often
it never olden (?)
so please pardon
May Allah grant u the highest of heaven
Ameen wa Ameen, full of passion...

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for u "people" who dont "understand" im gonna "translate" in a "long" thing called a "sentence" :
I dont take ur insults, i dont take nun bull, i dont care bout ur opinions coz i consider that too bull :p i take the truth and allah knos my lessage, u dont kno my message i honestly dont care! :D now smile nd chill :sunny:

wsalam :D

[truemuslim]

Lol yeh thats right BACK OFF :D

[Güven]

Cough! Ameeen and its nice..

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

nice poem but hey you dont need this crappy opinion right

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[Re.TiReD]

;D nice

Nice emo ^^

[truemuslim]

^ nope not at all :D i hate opinions. :p