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IbnAbdulHakim
10-08-2008, 04:26 PM
the middle man
he wants me to help
i see her yearning
innocent eyes
see both hearts burning
i look around
already missed my turning
i see broken pieces
in pain they glaring...
i want to fix it
i wish i could
but i love them so much
i dont know if i should
my hands shaking
my heart so scared
i know when this ends...
they'll think i never cared...
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10-08-2008, 04:28 PM
:salamext:
Sikkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! :D
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Güven
10-08-2008, 04:29 PM
omg MashaALLAH this was Amazinnnnnnnnnn! :ooh:
subhanAllah......
:w:
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Na7lah
10-08-2008, 04:33 PM
subhanallah :thumbs_up
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Sign Uptruemuslim
10-08-2008, 04:34 PM
mashallah thats nice!!
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-08-2008, 04:34 PM
jaza/jizakAllaah khair :ooh:
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Re.TiReD
10-08-2008, 04:36 PM
You know what I thought :mmokay:
Masha'Allah.
Who is the middle man though?
Is he a figment of your imagination or did he exist?
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Güven
10-08-2008, 04:36 PM
you inspire me to begin with poetry !
If i could show my feelings into words that is :(
:w:
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-08-2008, 04:37 PM
^ im sure you Can bro u got an amazin heart :D
sis jolie curiosity killed the fish :ooh:
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Re.TiReD
10-08-2008, 04:40 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Güven
you inspire me to begin with poetry !
If i could show my feelings into words that is :(
:w:
Bro....one tip...Dont
try to write, you'll kill it all like that...just take a moment to reflect and the words shall come flowing from within....Blah that sounds lame but you know what I mean.
format_quote Originally Posted by
IbnAbdulHakim
^ im sure you Can bro u got an amazin heart :D
sis jolie curiosity killed the fish :ooh:
Satisfaction brought it back
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IbnAbdulHakim
10-08-2008, 04:42 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
JolieFleur
Satisfaction brought it back
that would have worked if i said "CAT" 8-)
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Güven
10-08-2008, 04:44 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
JolieFleur
Bro....one tip...Dont try to write, you'll kill it all like that...just take a moment to reflect and the words shall come flowing from within....Blah that sounds lame but you know what I mean.
no That sounded Awesome its like i know what you mean :thumbs_up
:w:
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Curiosity_
10-08-2008, 09:15 PM
Ooo, mashallah!
That was awesome.
So many talented poets here!!
(:
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Re.TiReD
02-01-2009, 10:29 PM
Was searchin for ur kids thread and came across this again. Brought back memories.
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Güven
02-01-2009, 10:32 PM
SubhanAllah ! :ooh: Definitly one of the best poems around here
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Na7lah
02-02-2009, 01:32 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Fighting4Iman
the middle man
he wants me to help
i see her yearning
innocent eyes
see both hearts burning
i look around
already missed my turning
i see broken pieces
in pain they glaring...
i want to fix it
i wish i could
but i love them so much
i dont know if i should
my hands shaking
my heart so scared
i know when this ends...
they'll think i never cared...
sounds like someone stuck between arguing parents :-[
its really nice though :)
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