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truemuslim
10-09-2008, 01:06 PM
salam..
.......
Wat issit i see
its allahs beauty
goes from the alley
all the way to party
from the rainy
to the empty
skies of prairie
but ther is plenty
of allahs richly
enhanced scenery(s)
nothins crappy
but its all simply
created smoothly

Theres sum spooky
btu its all bloomy
like the flower daffy
nd i think its a cutey
i like all dressy
xcept the druggie
nd all the earthy
typ of fishy

now it goes gangsta
nd it gets bigga
but i make it bolda
nd i reach the borda
nd i find a butcha
tryna be a builda
but he's just a broka
fallin down the broila
coz he's half a burgla
nd sells burga's
to the blind buya's
aimin up to chrysla
but that aint cleva
coz its much fartha
he thinks its gettin closa
but its only coasta
until the cleara
will start to clear up
nd the green colla (color)
will earn the dolla (dollar)
nd he be a crusha
to all the poora
but thats jus cruela
than the bush toola
so he moves to denva
nd becomes a deala
nd a gold digga
as a band drumma
till he's elda
nd he noticed the erra (error)
but the grave he entad (entered)
nd now i reveal ya
that man was mumineenah
well at least he used to bea (be...a..to rhyme :p)

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i fink u can clearly see why i couldnt get a title....

answer: bcuz i couldnt get a topic!
nneeways notice it goes from LI poetry to the crappiest poetry. yehhh :hmm:

:mmokay: :D

wassalam
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10-13-2008, 10:22 AM
:salamext:

Nice rapping scheme :ooh: MashaAllaah.
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truemuslim
10-13-2008, 01:14 PM
tank u :p
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Na7lah
10-13-2008, 06:01 PM
the red part was funny lol
nice sis *though i don't kno y your sig says u hate poetry yet u keep writing em* :hiding:
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truemuslim
10-13-2008, 06:09 PM
sis poetry is like music to me...
sounds like crap. but i keep doing it .....now i finished with music, nd now i try to finish with bull poetry :) oh yeh nd thank u :p
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