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[TrueStranger]

It looks like it is the poem season....:D

Life has rendered me senseless

Kept me chained and shackled in darkness

In the midst of sorrow I profess my weakness

To a world completed deprived of kindness

Even the blind see the everlasting wickedness

Of Cold Hearts molded by the hands of the ageless

Through forgotten memories I’m able find forgiveness

As I stood alone they think I am fearless

But standing on the verge of the cliff I feel careless

Soon I shall be walking among the faceless

I time of mine has came to past to make me of the heartless

Don't judge me harshly :scared:

[BlissfullyJaded]

:sl:

We wouldn't be harsh, specially me cuz I can't even do poetry. Anyways it's cool! I like how it all ends with 'ess. :thumbs_up

[TrueStranger]

:sl:

We wouldn't be harsh, specially me cuz I can't even do poetry. Anyways it's cool! I like how it all ends with 'ess. :thumbs_up

:w:

Thanks

We have something in common. Poems need to be constructed in a profoundily flowing manner, but i just abuse that rule.


Thanks

[Re.TiReD]

Wow masha'Allah sis! :ooh:

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[TrueStranger]

Wow masha'Allah sis! :ooh:

:uuh: really :uuh: Thanks

[Re.TiReD]

It was fab sis! Masha'Allah :)

[Haron♥Islam]

Me like it :D Jazakallahu Khairan!

[Sahabiyaat]

totally absolutely fantastic.loved it :)

[TrueStranger]

:sl:

Thanks bro Haron and sis Sahabiyaat

I thought my whole existence was to massacre the beauty of poetry. :-[

[Sahabiyaat]

no way girl, you are fab

do u want to explain the meaning

the meaning i derived was 'joining the faceless masses' , being mislead and being very aware of it and being afraid. thats the meaning i took anyway lol :) i always take my own meanings out of poems and how i percieve them.

[Sahabiyaat]

In the midst of sorrow I profess my weakness

losing emaan

Even the blind see the everlasting wickedness

Of Cold Hearts molded by the hands of the ageless

the ageless>> devils :uuh:??

Soon I shall be walking among the faceless

I time of mine has came to past to make me of the heartless

becoming amongst the heedless.



thats my interpretation :)

[TrueStranger]

no way girl, you are fab

do u want to explain the meaning

the meaning i derived was 'joining the faceless masses' , being mislead and being very aware of it and being afraid. thats the meaning i took anyway lol :) i always take my own meanings out of poems and how i percieve them.

lol You are close

My first line was "Love has rendered me senseless" but i changed it to life I don't know why :blind:

but the last line kinda gives it away I time of mine has came to past to make me of the heartless

Hope that helps

[TrueStranger]

losing emaan

true

the ageless>> devils :uuh:??

It's always Mr. Shatan who molds cold hearts. :raging:

becoming amongst the heedless.

The faceless are those who are dead inside

thats my interpretation :)

I like how we all interpret the same words differently. :thankyou: sis

[Na7lah]

wow amazing wallah! i loooved it sis :D :thumbs_up