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[Cabdullahi]

Intro 'Gentleman'


Beard a little longer
Shoulders more broader
faith much stronger
Im a man now
got the devil saying, how??
I had to stand up and make that vow
No exception for looking beastly
presentable at least,the days are over when i was care free
looking forward everyday..sluggishness in my steps...ha barely!
im a man now,says who????..... says 'ME'


1.'Bedouin'

On a camels back
fastened arabian horse tack
ingenuous clothing
no time for boasting
apprehension that an unseen force is awaiting
what a complete bedouin
but still meekness better in
naturally veteran
regular visitations to the mountain top
wearing thorn prone flip flops
doubly orphaned
mentally bludgeoned
just got by,fortunate
literary illterate
deep voice said 'Read'
'but i cant read'!
from the aurora
miraclously it was nothing too plethora
so he began to read
and learned the creed
remembring god through prayer and rosery beads
23 years of moral excellence
enjoined islamic jurisprudence
at the battle field led nations
his number one attribute was his patience
a black slave was the first save
womens rights he gave
many men did performe great miracles
but like always at his pinnacle
persuaded 1000 mill people not to drink intoxicants..now thats a miracle!


2.'Deception'

Dignity is what arab leaders tend to lack
a weak point from which western governments attack
In the land of hypocrisy
where there's no democracy
politicians that implement the art of demagogy
weapons of mass destruction
equates world of mass deception
false flag operation
inspiring oration
by phony presidents
rallying halfwit citizens
patriot act signed with a sheafer pen
it was just a matter of who,where and when
a pair of airplanes and 19 desert men
on the day 9/11
To bring the world power's great towers on its knees, is it capable?
never was convincing nothing short of being feeble
cus almost half of the aforementioned are alive and kicking well
until the judgement day comes, the truth wont come OUT
Lo and behold its a conspiracy and the theory has to satisfy both proponent and the opponent
how the heck is that gonna work OUT?


3.'Breach of trust'

She was from back home
found it hard to fit in, which made u think she had some sort of syndrome
you often left her alone
missing bond, no connection
just a signed commission
titled 'loyal husband and wife'
things were rushed,problems were rife
better still you thought u had bagged an efficient housewife
wasnt attracted enough so the sexual interaction was mostly through ur party life
she never knew,so to you she was a dummy...
but to her, you was her beloved but bemoaning hubby!
hoping that she'd grew on you one day,she loved you amply
but hardheartedly as you were you equipped her with an apron-
and a rollin pin
showed her the kitchen
kept her at home like a criminal in a dungeon
for this special day she went against all odds to preserve her hymen
but why then??
do u torture her again and again?



4'Mother'

i made you endure Thirty six weeks of agony
from the birth of a 5 pound baby
you were relieved and overfilled with joy
at the proclamation of a boy
For the first time, you held me calmly
Although i didn't know much it was an instant warmth which made me comfy
my cutely gleaming smile you cherished amply
Through your care,i physically grew
i remember the first day of school for breakfast you had prepared porridge and cashew
I loudly said yuk,when i think back now i regret it,instead i should said thank you
forgive me, i was to young to express gratitude
and when i hit my teens it was my poor attitude
forgive me,i was a copy cat every bad thing my friends ensued i ensued
that unislamic lifestyle, blindly for awhile i pursued
As i become older you were my worse enemy
To offer help you were never hasty
thats what mothers do!!!,they always have some sort of remedy
If i trekked all around the world i wouldn't find anything like you
Im mature now but still find it hard to say i love you
Dont get me wrong i really do
cant find a way to express it
but perfect at suppressing it
i can almost say between you and dad you have brought be up more, in about the ratio of 4 to 1
No wonder the prophet said love ur mother three times more and your father only once


'Holy land'

it was said they were too busy smoking hookah when children of israel came
and when they came direful and evilness was to be a part of their game
setting sights on the city with one ambiton and that was to reclaim.... it
,it would mean things would never be the same would it?
Beautiful sunshine, prominent skyline
mountains with unimaginable incline
open markets that sold from aromatic saffron
to glistening iron
hearing children's far away giggles enough to relieve a heartburn
sadly all gone!

they were submissive and too laid back
no counteract to the attack
worse than a holocaust
completely flossed
they got bossed and over the west-bank barrier tossed
excogitation of an exclamation
no seeming avail to this jewish dictation
but patient is the little palestinian boy with the sling shot
aiming for a weak spot
on that goliath of a tank
prophet david did it ...so he feels he can.
today palestine is deeply hurt we need to tightly hold her hand





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[Re.TiReD]

I love the begininng part of 'mother', its beautiful

[IbnAbdulHakim]

mashaAllaah bro,

LI has become the place to be
for poetry :ooh:

[SixTen]

Bro, you set the standard too high for the rest of us!

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[Cabdullahi]

bumby

[truemuslim]

^ u mean bambii? :X

mashallah those ar all ur poems???
those are amazing .... do more :D
u really are the best poet on LI.

[Cabdullahi]

^
nah sister i am not the best,im just average but! i will write,write and write even more until i become acceptably better

[truemuslim]

nah u got the best flo nd way of writing seriously i cant read no poettry on this forum xcept urs coz theyr......................readable. the other ones are boring (no offence offendable ppls) nd too long nd the way theyr made arent even right, like the syllable stuff they cant do right ...alright i'll stop ther.
but yeh please do write more!!
..
now! (pleease)

[Na7lah]

the mother one is simply amazing :ooh:

[Cabdullahi]

thanks

[Na7lah]

:bump1:

[Cabdullahi]

u didnt have to bump this :(