clean the glass

[Ummu Sufyaan]

:sl:
clean the glass
it needs to be cleaned

clean the glass
for filth it has only gleaned

clean the glass
why have you slowed from taking heed

clean the glass
for through it nothing will be seen

clean the glass
keep on going and be keen

clean the glass
dont stop now, you may not face next eid



it sounds weird, but i swear it has a meaning :uhwhat
just need to vent :-[

[Re.TiReD]

:wasalamex

Nice :p

Explain the meaning a little sis?

[Ummu Sufyaan]

:sl:
lol...jazakiallahu khair...
nah u do that...i wanna see how much my poems make sense :p
or do i dont want you to lol :p :mmokay:

[Re.TiReD]

clean the glass
it needs to be cleaned

clean the glass
for filth it has only gleaned

clean the glass
why have you slowed from taking heed

clean the glass
for through it nothing will be seen

clean the glass
keep on going and be keen

clean the glass
dont stop now, you may not face next eid

For me, the poem is saying 'wake-up'

But the glass could be the heart no?

Or...Argh I'm lame at analysing poetry.

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[Al-Zaara]

Yeah, the glass could be the heart, but I was thinking your faith, Emaan.

Nice one, mashaAllah.

[Ummu Sufyaan]

:sl:

For me, the poem is saying 'wake-up'

But the glass could be the heart no?

Or...Argh I'm lame at analysing poetry.

lol..yeah pretty much...the glass is the heart. its when you waste time/commit sins-any sins- it becomes accumulated with filth...and if you dont clean it then u cant see through it...and the cleaner is repentance :D

Yeah, the glass could be the heart, but I was thinking your faith, Emaan.

Nice one, mashaAllah.

jazakillahu khair :)

and @sis PK...i cant rep ya back but jazakiallahu kahir also :)