salam...
lets go all ata time
each bring up ur line
tell us how u found
ur tru poet sound
was it from random ?
was by u done?
jus make sho yo rhymes make sense
unlike mine, i always use wrong tense
wrong times, i use past tense
right times, dont use common sense
betcha didnt get notin i said
and i kno bout three times you've re-read
i've prolly killed ya, or mayb jus brain dead
don worry tho i'll get a translatin did (done.)
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translation: hmmmm....tell me how u found ur rhymes.... IN RHYMES...but make sure it makes sense, unlike mine, coz my grammar i mess it up, (yes it is possible for me to make it perfect but i think thats gay to do so :exhausted )
Begin! oh yeh nd also say wat ur opinion wit poetry is or something...:D
here's mineee
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now since i own (this thread :p )
i go first
my rhymes you wanna loan
to quench yo thirst
i use hood tone
so it aint gon burst
i learned poetry from da songs
nas, the game, nd all the wrongs
i never liked poetry
but music was my lyf
ffreestyle tho, was up G
i'd cut u like a knife
i'll take the time out of me
to see u take a dive
but only fo tru talent i see
not nobody outside
i see ur poetry as boring
thats what i been storing
but only coz im snoring
from my very own soaring
:?
u gotta write right
screw gammar, it too tight
u think u jus "might"
but i say jus take the bite
i dont like poetry so ima thro sum lines
this freestyle ganity, so ima thro my rhymes
in other words,... ima bout ot freeestyle my worste freestyle possible :p
yo its been a long time
since a nikka thro a real line
so bruva take yo time
while i hit the state line
dont tkae yo time coz that aint talent
step off the line, you'll keep yo balance
made before rhymes, are all corny
the real lines are the new borny (:?)
go back now or you'll get cought in my stormy
only tru talent here so back up homie
you all talkin like shakey wit romie (shakespear wit homo nd dumiet)
i heard that one coz fitty already told me
so i say those rhymes are the new corny
plummy
apricotty
appley
orangey
bananay
lettucy
or the legacy
of the one nd only great...
broccoli
:omg: :?
so getta life
get a wife (or husband )
get yo strife
then come back, to the knife
nd take yo, one last try
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Truemuslim
only tru talent here
ook am out then.........
wassalaaaaaaaam